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Reviewer: waterlily91 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 26, 2016 10:37 am Title: Ch.38

Alright Mike! You tell them they can't stop you from taking your wife out! Although it probably wasn't smart to let Chris stay with them. What an idiot!

Author's Response:

Heck yeah! mj knows what's up and he really is a dummy to even say yes 😂. thanks Lily <3

Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 18, 2016 04:40 pm Title: Ch.37

Oh no, the vitiligo. Just when Amber and Michael are sharing a great moment then this pops up! On the other hand, Fatso Frank

Author's Response:

It had to pop the vitologo again or amber wouldn't have spotted it 😖. but it will get better (hopefully) lmao fatso Frank now that is harsh Kara! Tut tut.thanks as always <33

Reviewer: waterlily91 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 18, 2016 02:55 am Title: Ch.37

Oh I can't wait to see Michael's conversation with Frank! This is going to be good!

Author's Response:

Certainly is going to be a whirlwind of emotions! you'll see soon !

. Thanks Lily !😎

Reviewer: waterlily91 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 08, 2016 06:09 am Title: Ch.36

Sweet! Frank is an ass! I can't wait to see what happens on their date!

Author's Response:

 yep Frank is a complete prick 🙄. thanks for reading!

Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 05, 2016 05:06 pm Title: Ch. 35

Marlon is just ugh! Sometimea I like his personality; sometimes I don't lol! On the other hand, I'm glad my fave couple worked things out! I wonder what's in store for them.

Author's Response:

Ah Marlon has the tendency to do that without even realising lool. yes finally they are back together and there is certainly more things coming their way! you'll find out soon. thanks as always <3

Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 05, 2016 05:01 pm Title: Ch.34

I just love this little family. I do see reconciliation happening pretty soon! Nice!

Author's Response:

As do I as well Kara lol. thanks for reading!

Reviewer: waterlily91 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 03, 2016 04:52 pm Title: Ch. 35

Yay! I'm so happy they're finally back together where they belong!

Author's Response:

Told ya it won't be long lol. thanks for reading Lily <3

Reviewer: waterlily91 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2016 12:34 pm Title: Ch.34

That is so sweet! And I love Amber is getting better with her daughter as well. I hope they're completely back together soon!

Author's Response:

Don't worry they will be back together soon maybe sooner than you think!. the bond between them is growing which is great. thanks for reading Lily <3

Reviewer: LouieLlama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 30, 2016 10:11 am Title: Ch.34

They're so cute I love them so much. Please continue soon!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks Louie.I definitely will 😎

Reviewer: darkmc912 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 26, 2016 05:43 pm Title: ::Ch. 6::

Hello Lorry! I got on to reading your story just like I said I would! I promised myself I would only read two chapters (given the lateness of the hour), but I honestly couldn't stop! I'm aware this is a sequel, & I've kinda picked up on a few things but I have many questions so I should just read the prequel first! I'm guessing they ran away from Gary?

The wedding scene was so cute and spontaneous - I loved that! This story seems fun, playful and adventurous, I think it's awesome. Ooh also - is Michael famous in this story? 

Keep doing what you're doing!🙌🏼



Author's Response:

That's how it starts one chapter turns to another and another 😂. they did run away from Gary and go read the prequel you'll see what I mean. also yes mj is famous in this sequel it's just not too obvious lool. thank you! more to come soon 👻

Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 24, 2016 01:57 pm Title: Ch. 33

My heart always sinks everytime I read a story of Michael suffering from that horrible skin disease. Poor baby. His career is taking off, he has a pretty babygirl named Nevada, which so unique, and a beautiful wife. I just hope they amend things and that this disease he has doesn't cause any harm.

Great chapter, Lorry!

Author's Response:

I know it's heartbreaking they will have to discuss it eventually but who knows when? The name Nevada I thought mj had a love of exotic names and the name was born lol. Let's hope so! Thanks Kara 😘

Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 24, 2016 01:52 pm Title: Ch 32

I think Amber will come around. The love they have is very strong, unbreakable.

Author's Response:

I agree she will and their love is too strong . All in due time.

Reviewer: waterlily91 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 24, 2016 10:36 am Title: Ch. 33

I am hoping for them! They can make it work with time and effort! Loved this!

Author's Response:

Aww thank you! They definitely will in due time.More to come soon! 

Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2016 09:00 pm Title: Ch.31

It's a girl! I'm sure babygirl Jackson is beautiufl like her parents! My dad said when I was born. Those little girls grow on your heart! I'm pretty sure she will grow on Michael's heart. Too bad he was there. Too busy promoting his album! I don't blame Amber for telling him to leave! The birth of your child is more important!

Author's Response:

I was debating to give them a girl or boy but a girl won since mj has someone to spoil now lool. Aww that is so sweet and I believe your dad and think he's right! it's justified that she did flip on him for a reason like come on missing the birth and she had to do it all on her own? Poor thing. Let's hope they ridicule step by step!. Thanks Kara! 😘

Reviewer: KaraBeloved Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 23, 2016 08:53 pm Title: Ch.30

Love how Amber and Michael are preparing for their bundle of joy! I wonder what's in store for us with this time skip!

Author's Response:

Thank you I had fun writing it lol. Who knows what's in store? Read more to find out 😎

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