Date: Jul 28, 2016 11:15 pm Title: Ch.24
This Michaela chick is really giving Marlon a run for his money! I like her!
Author's Response:
Heck yes! Someone has to kick his ego down a notch who better than her? Lool. Thanks for the love Kara <33
[Report This]Date: Jul 28, 2016 11:12 pm Title: Ch.23
Lorry, hey!
Sorry I'm so later reviewing the new chapters! Some of the chapters weren't showing after they reopened and transferred the site.
Anyhoo, great chapter! I see my fave couple is preparing for their little bundle of joy and Marlon is still acting a fool! He was really rude to this new girl Michaela (love that name by the way, plus I have a character in one of my stories with the same name). I would have walked up and down on his ass for saying that to me, but it seems he met his match!
Author's Response:
Heyoo Kara yes you are right I had to go back and readd them smh. But don't need to apologize about being late no biggie lol. Marlon has tendency to be rude... When it comes to a female who has same bite as him lmao I can picture you doing so. Ooh great minds think alike.
Date: Jul 14, 2016 07:20 pm Title: Ch.23
Probably good for Marlon's character.
Author's Response:
Loool someone needs to tie his ego down who better than her to do so? Thanks Kay!
[Report This]Date: Jul 11, 2016 05:31 pm Title: Ch.23
Michael and Amber seem so sweet together, this chapter actually mae me miss going to amusement parks! Think it's time for me to book a trip lol! Amber seems to be a little bit of a mediator you can tell by the end of the chapter
("Alright boys calm down, let's go home please" Amber said to stop an argument to break between them.
So getting up from the seats they went back to the front entrance to find where the van was parked and made their way home. Once home they all went to their separate rooms.)
Immediately this let me know a little bit more into Amber's personality
Miss New Character, Michaela reminds me of someone with her shrp remarks and sassy attitude! I had a gretat time reading that and enjoy how you create different dynamics between all the characters. Everyone has their own buildable personality! I'm just waiting for Amber and Michaela's in depth interaction since Amber dislikes her!
I'll be sure to comment more often since I read everytme you update!
-V
Author's Response:
I highly recommend going to the funfairs one of these days tut tut for shame you haven't gone in a while. I don't what your talking about when it comes to the new character she isn't an inch like me *halo glows above my head* Lool, we shall see If that interaction goes well between them but we will see in due time. Thanks for the love handsome! 😘
Date: Jul 08, 2016 01:59 am Title: Ch. 22
Knowing how complicated show business life is, Michael is right for the safety of his family. Its not that he is ashamed of Amber or the baby.
Author's Response:
Ikr? but they will learn and grow together as michael gets known in the music world let's hope it doesn't backfire. Thanks kay <33
Date: Jul 07, 2016 05:01 pm Title: Ch. 21
I love reading your story!
Author's Response:
Thanks as always Kay! More to come soon 😉
Date: Jul 06, 2016 09:36 pm Title: Ch. 20
Great job!
Author's Response:
Thanks Kay !
[Report This]Date: Jul 06, 2016 04:48 pm Title: Ch. 22
So Michael is going to pursue a music career? Mmh! That's going to be pretty tough on Amber and the baby! As an entertainer, I think he should hide them so they won't get caught up in the media. Although it's in 70's, it won't be as bad, but as the years progress, it might be. My heart is going in different directions!
Great chapter, Lorry! Sorry I'm late reading and reviewing.
Author's Response:
I agree it is going to be tough trail but they will grow together the media won't be so hectic but what will happen when he truly blows up? Eek! Don't worry my heart is tied on how I'm going to progress as well lol. No problem on the late comment Kara I love reading your comments no matter the time it takes 😏
[Report This]Date: Jul 04, 2016 05:37 am Title: Ch. 22
I agree with Michael it will help him and her in the long run😥😣😉😊
Author's Response:
Oh hey marje didn't know you were reading all this time sneaky tut tut lol. But I'm glad you agree. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: Jun 30, 2016 02:29 pm Title: ::Ch.1::
Aww this is so cute I love it!!
Author's Response:
Aww thank you so much! Enjoy the rest of the chapters <33
[Report This]Date: Jun 27, 2016 12:03 pm Title: Ch. 21
Lol I love Marlon!
This chapter was hilarious! Marlon spending time with the kids and becoming their amusement. Amber and Michael are both nuts for thinking of naming the baby Marlon if it's a boy. Amber the craziest since she suggested!
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
yes Amber is crazy for such a suggestion to michael of all people name the child after Maron..his head is already so large that doesn't fit on his shoulders Lmao and I do too he is loveable in his own annoying way, Thanks Kara <33
Date: Jun 15, 2016 02:39 am Title: Ch. 20
I really enjoy reading , and re-reading your stories! Please continue writing more chapers. I am looking forward to reading more of them.
Author's Response:
Thanks Kay 😘
[Report This]Date: Jun 11, 2016 11:02 am Title: Ch.18
I'm finally all caught up!
Michael and Amber's life is really getting interesting! I'm glad their family bond is getting strong with Andy warming up to Michael and Marlon reuniting with Michael. He does need some comic relief with all the chaos. I'm just glad they are save from Joe for the time being.
I cant wait to find out what happens next! This is an awesome story, Lorry!
Author's Response:
Yay your caught up lol, yes I agree with all the Chaos a little peace is needed in it all as well mj and Andy slowly getting closer hopefully amber will as well. Who knows if Joe's past will catch up with them? Hehe we shall see. More to come soon Kara!
Date: Jun 07, 2016 04:25 pm Title: ::Ch. 10::
Stubbornness is heavy in this chapter! Mercy!
Author's Response:
I agree Amber is known for being stubborn hopefully there relationship will improve! We shall see. Lool
[Report This]Date: Jun 07, 2016 04:19 pm Title: ::Ch. 9::
I can relate to Amber and her broken relationship with her father. She has a right to be anger since he left her and her mother. I feel for her greatly! I was also cheering for Michael when he stood up to him. Calling a grown man a boy is very disrespectful!
Great chapter, Lorry! You definitely capture the emotion in this chapter! Also congratulations on your nominations for Remember MJfiction awards!
Author's Response:
I'm glad your able to relate to how Amber felt though out the whole chapter poor girl, yeeees mj jumping the gun for his woman can't blame him no wants to be seen as a boy when he clearly isn't smh. Let's hope the relationship progresses over time between them.Thanks for the nomination Kara! That was really sweet of you! And congrats to you too!