[Report This]Date: Nov 23, 2015 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 2: Keeping It Brief
I love this. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! More to come soon this week
Date: Nov 23, 2015 11:34 am Title: Chapter 2: Keeping It Brief
yeah girl i'm wondering the damn same thing!, i'm liking this story so far i can already see what it could lead to lool, good luck she is going to need it esp with the whole jackson clan will be watching her every move on that day imao.
Author's Response:
She sure as hell is going to need it! And for more ways than one. Imagine that pressure of having literally dozens of Jacksons judging you, each with their own distinct opinion of you. I don't think I could handle it until after we've dated for at least 6months lol. Thank you for your reviews!
Date: Nov 23, 2015 11:29 am Title: Chapter 1: Paying Attention
oooh what's going to happen? oh i have to admit kimani is just like me when i talk to guys and we think exactly alike in thoughts poor girl! lool. a nice start so far <3
Author's Response:
Lol thanks I think she is the closest character to me that I've created. I am honestly trying to lengthen my chapters so they can flow better and give hold to my readers. This is a double week though so enjoy the upcoming update
[Report This]Date: Nov 23, 2015 11:00 am Title: Chapter 2: Keeping It Brief
Wow, Michael is a true mess.in this one. Paying a it p to be his girlfriend or four months. Four months is pretty long dontcha think, Mike???? He suppose to be a man of no worries and don't care what people day about him cause he knows and people that are close to him knows not true. But I guess since is family is strong to be concern he has to. Well Kimani agreed so he got himself a 'girlfriend'.
I hope all goes well for him...And her. Lol.
Author's Response:
Have I told you that I loved your reviews? Because I do. Lol and it's not just 4 months. If she is a "secret" girlfriend, then they had to have been dating prior for a little while and now an extra 4 months will make it seem real instead of "hey mom look it's my girlfriend", then kick her to the curb the next day. And being born a pop star isn't really hakuna matata either. You know he's easily influenced because he's fragile...sometimes that is. And Kimani did agree, for now that is.
[Report This]Date: Nov 16, 2015 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 1: Paying Attention
Love it!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Stay tuned for upcoming chapters
[Report This]Date: Nov 16, 2015 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 1: Paying Attention
Omg, Mike is being a huge player here!!! He just ain't care who heard him and wasn't scared to hide it either. I see you Mike, lol.
I'm digging this. Update soon if can:)
Author's Response:
Lol you're in for a treat with this one then. Thank you for the review and I hope to update this either weekly or biweekly.
[Report This]Date: Nov 16, 2015 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 1: Paying Attention
I'm so in with this!!! Great start already. Looking forward to a long form fic from you.
More soon! <333
Author's Response:
Thank yoU! I'm looking to either weekly or biweekly updates but we'll see soon enough
<3
Date: Nov 16, 2015 11:26 am Title: Chapter 1: Paying Attention
Lovvvve this!!! Thats a cute nickname😊
Author's Response:
Thank you. I hope you stay tuned for upcoming chapters. I'll try to update either weekly or bi-weekly.