Date: Feb 09, 2015 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 11 - Playing the Game
Damn, he bugged his own house! Gabriel is a special kind of psycho...
Author's Response:
isn't he just.....*le sigh*
Date: Feb 08, 2015 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Last Day
The writing quality was just fine to me. Fantastic depiction of Sarah's frustration; I feel stifled just reading this.
Author's Response:
aww thanks. My laptop is playing up, i have a sticky O key and my partner is determined to load it with viruses... but I am gonna keep going!
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2015 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Last Day
Yesssss..finally a break for Sarah. Now she'll be at ease with him gone of course other than her carefully planned schedule by her's truly-Pain in the ass Gabriel. And she & Michael are definetley going to take advantage of this opportunity.
Thank u and update.
Author's Response:
I am wondering where she is going to find the time....haha
[Report This]Date: Feb 08, 2015 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Revelations
*Sigh* I feel like such a fool for believing Gabe was a cool guy at one point and that Sarah was lucky to have him but I think he's a bigger douche than that lead singer dude from the group MAGIC! - he did nothing to deserve my criticism by the way but evety time his song "rude" comes on thatz what i think- I feel soo bad for Sarah, she just needs a break.
But this was nice thank you; goona go read that update now..YAYYY!!
Date: Feb 08, 2015 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Revelations
😱 Yes, that is my face right now. This gets deeper and crazier by the chapter-Love it!
Author's Response:
I am half tempted to write another chapter. Its nearly 22.30 where i am....so my brain is getting cloudy....lol.
Date: Feb 07, 2015 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 8 - A Day in Heaven
Michael's cover blew ALL the way up! Gabriel is starting to scare me—Sarah needs to get away from him FAST.
Author's Response:
yup....gone....totally gone...lol
next chapter is up.....i have forgotten to make dinner....crap. LOL
[Report This]Date: Feb 07, 2015 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 8 - A Day in Heaven
Oh wow indeed....well on the bright side Michael got his wish.
But the question is will Sarah tell gabe or keep it a secret and keep in contact with michael? Hmmmmmm...now i really want to know what happens next.
Thank you abd update.
Author's Response:
Next chapter is up! Its all getting heavy....eeeeeek
Date: Feb 06, 2015 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Heart of Stone
AWWWWWWWW, thank you!!!!! 😘
Just when I was giving Gabe the benefit of the doubt, he proved himself to be a remarkable assh*le. Meanwhile, Michael damn near blew his cover. Good save, but he's playing with fire. Please keep it coming!
Author's Response:
He can't help it.....poor man
Date: Feb 06, 2015 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Heart of Stone
AND! If im all trippy and helpless about this situation I cant even picture and imagine how Sarah feels...uggh she's probably just desperate for an answer, relief and to truly just understand this predicament she's in.
I wonder if that's all i really have to say? .............hmm.......see........look at what u did!...you have turned my brain producivity to mush, thank you very much! and update when you can. This has been CocoDevon,I 'm out! Lol.
Author's Response:
hahahaha my brain is the same. I have been at work all day thinking over the next chapter in my mind....its exhausting lol
[Report This]Date: Feb 06, 2015 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Heart of Stone
Oh no...I think my opinion on Gabriel has Definetly changed, did he seriously just treat Sarah like that?
Lord! And Michael, now he's the nice one?! Im so confused...somebody help me!
Now I really have to see where Gabe's and Sarah's relationship is going. I really felt that for her, just an abrupt switch of emotions from attention, what seemed to be affection and concern to this big, gray, unconcerned, emotionless Blob. And what about Isabella?! Does he still play with and dote over her. No no no no no no.
Never thought i would say this but I must admit Michael's obssessive ass has good timing and i'm glad he's making Sarah feel better, even if it will mess her up and confuse her in the long run. Respect to you Mike......for now.
Author's Response:
Come onnnnn Michael warned Sarah about Gabriel.....lol. It wasn't happy ever after with him LMAO. He spoiled Sarah's chances with her new friends in Paris.
[Report This]Date: Feb 06, 2015 02:52 pm Title: Chapter 7 - Heart of Stone
OH MY GOSH! Thank you sooo much...eeeeek! All i feel are the bubblies,Im so happy! You made me so happy and this story/update makes me happy. *Sighs* .....I guess this is the beautiful feeling of appreciation you authors get when you recieve nice reviews; I am going to read the hell outta this chapter and bask in its glory.
Author's Response:
:D indeed.....when i see my reviews i get so excited! LOL
Date: Feb 05, 2015 10:40 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Plans and Plots
Yes I remember the spare room in Paris. I thought he may have locked Michael in there. Everyone is going to flip when they discover what's going on.
Author's Response:
well Michael isn't in there :p looool
Date: Feb 05, 2015 10:28 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Why Does It Feel Like Somebody's Watching Me?
Sooooo Michael's baaack! He is actually going to pretend to be Gabe? He sure is obsessed! I hope no harm comes to mommy and baby.
Author's Response:
oh boy is he back!
Date: Feb 05, 2015 10:19 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Standing Firm
Hurrah for small victories. Mom & tot groups are wonderful.
Author's Response:
I wouldn't know....not had children but I know plenty who do....so trying hopefully to get it right :D
[Report This]Date: Feb 05, 2015 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Plans and Plots
I'm really relieved Michael is accepting of Izzy, also lucky for him Izzy was responsive to him when he picked her up or he would be toast. Coming along swell.
Thank you and update.
Author's Response:
thanks x