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Reviewer: eazybreezy2015 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2015 10:27 pm Title: A Change Of Heart

She has a nice place. Lol I wish that I lived in Cali too XD



Author's Response:

Ikr lol. If you enjoy this story, please check out my new story ''Kiss The Rough Diamond'' 

Reviewer: eazybreezy2015 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2015 10:18 pm Title: Business Pleasure

I never saw that movie b4. Mario is a dick. 



Author's Response:

I only watch the parts with Tatiana in it lol 

Reviewer: mjlifemate58 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 17, 2015 01:32 am Title: Business Pleasure

This story captured my heart and I fell in love with it. Michael is so sensitive and sweet to her and she likes him yay! she is a very gorgeous woman, wish they married in real life. Some people are not worth your time, but don't let that ruin the person you are, always be true to yourself, you are a creative writer, that to me is pure talent. I think you should continue with your story but take as much time as you need. I can't believe the other girl is gone, I actually shed tears. I love when someone's story makes me happy, sad or even cry and also have happy endings. I hope mj takes her away from there for good and start their own lives together but I hope Mario gets caught and put away for life. I am blown away at how wonderful the details are, a masterpiece of fine talent. I will be looking forward to the next chapter, please update soon!

Reviewer: Michael Baby Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2015 04:33 pm Title: Not A Chapter

Ignore her babe she nothing to worry about just someoone trying cause some mess I had it before it feel better once you used to her being your friend anymore



Author's Response:

Well it got worse so idk what to do 

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 15, 2015 12:01 pm Title: Not A Chapter

Don't feel sad sweetheart and please don't allow other people to put you down or take you're joy away just block off the negativity it's totally not even worth it. And as far as Valentine's is concern to me Valentine's isn't just for people who are in love but for everyone, the people who loves you. You're mom gave you a gift that's love and you are love so don't ever think you're not because you are and as for boys you'll never know there might be someone who secretly admire you but might be to shy to approach you.

Reviewer: moonwalkerrr4lifeee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 01, 2015 06:53 pm Title: Captive Heart

it's getting good. please update soon. it's ashley by the way. :D



Author's Response:

Oh hey Ashely :) and sorry I didn't reply to you last night. I fell asleep and I had school today. I will update hopefully this week since I leave early for three days due to exams. Thank you for reading and reviewing 

Reviewer: Michael Baby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 31, 2015 04:46 pm Title: Captive Heart

:O What is that scumbag up too?! I am curious now!

Love Mike he such a gentleman not many men do that 

UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I knew people would love Michael being a gentleman to Tatiana and give her roses it was adorable tbh haha. And we'll see. Thank you for reading and reviewing and there should be another update tomorrow 

Reviewer: MzMichaelJackson92 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 31, 2015 04:35 pm Title: Captive Heart

Great story sweetie I love Michael and Tatiana they are so cute together Lol. Hey can you do me a favor and go and check out my friend ASchmuck story Starlight I would really appreciate it thanks.

Author's Response:

Thank you new reader of this story and I love them together too. They're my number one couple lol. I will check out your friend's story but now I have to wait for dinner to be finished. I'll read it once I get the chance. 

 

Thank you for reading and reviewing 

Reviewer: QueenKyra Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 31, 2015 04:14 pm Title: Captive Heart

You're story is coming along nicely! Michael's so sweet with the roses. Love it.



Author's Response:

Thanks love and I knew someone would love Michael giving Tatiana the roses haha. Thank you for reading and reviewing 

Reviewer: Michael Baby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 26, 2015 05:01 pm Title: Surprised Part 5

That Bastard killed her!!! At least Mario hasn't she was much safer with him!

Tatiana shouldn't feel bad it wasn't her fault

I haven't heard from her yet but as soon as she does I will honey 

Update soon!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm going to try and update tomorrow since I'm staying home. Thank you for reading and reviewing 

Reviewer: loyalpyt Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 25, 2015 09:15 am Title: Surprised Part 2

Mario seems like a douchebag

Author's Response:

Hell yeah he is lol and I just updated check it out 

Reviewer: Michael Baby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2015 04:18 pm Title: Surprised Part 4

Awww that was so sweet 

I wonder what happened to Mercy

Update soon! 



Author's Response:

Hmm, we'll see. Oh btw have you gotten the chance to talk to Tatiana? My email is always open. Thank you for reading and reviewing 

Reviewer: QueenKyra Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2015 11:09 am Title: Surprised Part 4

Great update!  Yay Michael <3



Author's Response:

Thanks you for reading and reviewing love

Reviewer: loyalpyt Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 24, 2015 10:52 am Title: Surprised Part 4

ADDICTIING UPDATE IT!

Reviewer: QueenKyra Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jan 23, 2015 07:52 pm Title: Surprised Part 3

Nice update. More Michael, more Michael! :). I'll keep reading. 



Author's Response:

Just made another update a while ago. Check it out

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