Date: Feb 13, 2015 02:50 pm Title: To be liked
I like stories in the characters POV so yeah I think that will be good.
Can't wait to see what happens! Glad Prince actually may be accepting Juliet
Author's Response:
I am going to do the next chapter a try in pov to see how I do
we will se, me too
Date: Feb 13, 2015 02:44 pm Title: Baby Talk
I hope the baby is Michael's! I'm surprised Michael was so easy going about letting Julie visit Chris after everything.
Author's Response:
I'm hoping it is too, I am surprise myself
Date: Feb 13, 2015 06:28 am Title: To be liked
Aww its sweet how prince accepted Juliet, can't blame him for not trusting her
I so hope the baby is not Chris baby cause he doesn't deserve it ti become a father, well not that he will see the child but still
Actually it happens more than we think it happens that kidnapper and victim fall in love with each other
I hope she will be a free woman because she's chanced and hopefully the public and family will come around once they see she can be a good woman
Author's Response:
it really is but he does having a bad past of his mom walking out on him
he doesn't
thaat is very true
lets see what the Trial brings
[Report This]Date: Feb 02, 2015 04:28 pm Title: How do you Plead?
Aww this was such a good chapter. I"m so glad he's reunited with his family. He can't expect his parents to understand him falling in love with his kidnapper...
Author's Response:
Thank you
I know me too it so lovely to see them back together
I totally agree
Date: Feb 02, 2015 03:11 am Title: Baby Talk
We can only hope it's Michaels
Author's Response:
We can but we will see
Date: Jan 30, 2015 09:11 am Title: Getting back to reality
I hope it's Michaels
Please update soon
Author's Response:
Sorry to disappoint but we won't find that out some chapters later
coming right up!
Date: Jan 29, 2015 04:43 am Title: So life begins here
It wasn't boring it was sweet
I get Prince point of not trusting her but im sure he will come around if she really is a changed woman
Author's Response:
Thank you girl :)
He will
Date: Jan 27, 2015 11:54 pm Title: How do you Plead?
Please she deserves a way to be a better person
Love the part with the kids
Lol no lawyer wanted to be Chris lawyer, too bad the baddest criminals get a lawyer by the court house but glad he can't be bailed out
Update soon
Author's Response:
She does we will see
I was laughing while typing it
it his own fault :P
it coming up soon
Date: Jan 27, 2015 09:58 pm Title: How do you Plead?
AHHH!!! I wonder what's going to happen!!
Author's Response:
coming up soon
Date: Jan 27, 2015 12:20 am Title: How it all began
Ohhh can't wait for more
Author's Response:
coming up
Date: Jan 26, 2015 07:54 pm Title: How it all began
OMG!! He told her he loves her!!!!!! Awww.... this was the sweetest chapter! THANK GOD Chris didn't shoot her. I was almost worried that this would be the end of the story.
What's going to happen now!? Juilet's going to jail!? Will Michael hire her a super amazing lawyer to get her out of this?
Author's Response:
He did :3 I would never kill her off without knowing if Michael make it out safe
I have a lot planned stay tune
Date: Jan 26, 2015 03:58 pm Title: It over or is it?.....
noooo!! omg you can't do that to me!!!
Author's Response:
Hahahaha don't worry it coming up
Date: Jan 26, 2015 03:35 am Title: It over or is it?.....
Hope the police shoots Chris before its too late
Author's Response:
Let's see shall we
[Report This]Date: Jan 25, 2015 08:08 pm Title: It over or is it?.....
You're right I totally hate you for this cliffhanger!!! LOL I don't think he will kill Juliet, I don't think he can do it.
Hopefully the officers just kill him. He needs to disappear already.
Author's Response:
Hahahaha I knew you would, I know right I don't think he could
He certainly does let's see
Date: Jan 25, 2015 04:40 am Title: Not his day
I loved it!!! and the suspense is killing me!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you next chapter should be up soon