Date: Dec 29, 2015 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 25
It may be telling her to not be so trusting of people that she meets. Mike is the only one that she can trust. He is the only one that she knows on the tour or at home besides her family and Quincy.
Date: Nov 10, 2015 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 25
WAIT does MICHAEL ATTACK HER?!?!! In that nightmare?!?!' Please dont let this be foreshadowing something? That was a fucking horrible nightmare! Good that she's not alone! Her pulls her into his arms the feels are real man legit fantasy right there😍. Hes so amazing and kind restores your faith in humanity. Thats what he did for me. I love that he just doesn't let this go, he checks up on her to see how shes feeling still can't say i know too many like that. Why the hell would she feel guilty?!?!!!! It would not be her fault if she got raped!!! She doesnt owe him shit for the dress it was A GIFT. 😒 I love how he reassures her that he wont leave her, hes there no matter what. I just love how you portray him like fuck can he be any more amazing and perfect? NO!
Author's Response:
Haze thought it was Michael who attacked her at first in her nightmare but it turns out to be Kendrick and Wesley instead...this possibly could be foreshadowing something though...I agree, she definitely shouldn't feel like she owes Kendrick anything! And aww thanks! I like to portray Michael hopefully as realistic as possible. He seemed like an absolute sweetheart he wants to make sure his girl is alright and reassure her that he'll always be there for her, she officially has his heart...that's future bae goals right there haha
Date: Oct 21, 2015 04:06 am Title: Chapter 25
Holy fuck do not scare me like that!!!! I was like MICHAEL NO NO NO NO NO and then I was like.. ohhhh it's a dream. Thanks. For that. That was so nice of you to scare the shit out of me like that. Honestly, this was a really great chapter, hopefully Tokyo will be nice, and nothing BAD will happen (ba-dum-tiss). And take your time with writing, don't force it, otherwise it won't be as good as it would be if you get the true feeling for it. Nice job bro :)
Author's Response:
Aw thanks!!! And I didn't mean to scare you! Haha I had to definitely make sure that I'd mention that Haze was only dreaming the first part. I hope Tokyo will be fun too! And I laughed so hard at the BAD pun lol