Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2015 06:14 pm Title: Chapter 24

A very good story. Mike was very patient with Hazel.I like that he treated  her so gently.

Reviewer: Fire-in-her-veins Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 18, 2015 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 24

Thanks for the hug forgot to tell you that:) well yassss this is HOT. U know whats even hotter is that hes making sure shes ok & is having fun too XD. I knew he was the KING in bed. I mean those hip thrusts and rolls and whatever else he does arent just for the stage hehe. Is she sure she wants to have HOT sex with him. Uh is this a question? DUH she aint passin that up! What do you want me to do now well thank you for asking i was thinking of some handcuffs, blindfolds, leather cuffs, feather dusters, and chocolate sauce. Yes my mind goes there. I knew he was big i mean after all hes got big hands. Hes soo romantic!! I love that he says dont forget that i love you:) the feels man. Please tell me he used a condom or Haze is on birth control just saying its best to practice safe sex. Anyway thank u for updating this!!! I love how it wasnt vulgar, i get so tired of hearing about fucking that pussy or riding dick. So thank you this is refreshing:) love the last line too about the rain applauding them & thunder begging for an encore:) of course shes smiling shes just experienced mike jr! 

 

Author's Response:

Aw thanksl!!! And ur welcome :D I really wanted to try to have him be extremely romantic and gentle with her especially since its her first time. I don't know, whenever I write love scenes I always feel so awkward cuz I'm always thinking that the reader prob thinks it's so lame lol I don't like being extremely vulgar all that much (sometimes it's not always needed haha) and like to be more subtle with it, focusing on the emotions rather than the actual action.Plus, I'd just feel too embarrassed to actually be more 'explicit' with it. Hmm maybe I could possibly have Michael and Haze 'go there' in a couple later chaps since I know that's what ur waitin for ;) lol it'll be fine to explore since she's still new to being intimate and now they're gonna start bringing out the different sides of each other. I honestly made up the line about the rain and thunder last min! Like it came to me and I was like yeeeep I gotta add this haha As for them having 'Protection' hmmm....you'll find that out in the next chap....I purposely left that out hehe ;)