[Report This]Date: Apr 27, 2015 10:41 am Title: Someone To Watch Over Me...
Lawd, i don't think I'ma be able to take it when this story comes to an end. Girl its gonna feel like a funeral for me. :(:( im gonna rrally miss it when it ends, hell i might even re-read it just to have some type of closure, lol.
Anyway, Mike and Pen are just plain nastay!!! Don't have no care in the world. And the little bean is a little princess. Can't believe he won the bet tho. But im happy for them both. I cant wait to know what he's gonna name her but it clearly Pen does'nt want it to be Seneca tho its a beautiful name.
And i just completely died when Cali got up and started to sing. Everyone in class was staring at me like i was crazy. she made my day. Kml!!!
Hopefully, you do come up with a part two. Ima need it.
Btw, i posted a new story called Running Back Into You. I just have the intro but please check it out and give me your thoughts and opinion on it. Being that, y'know, you're one of my fav authors and allat :) Dont get all bigheaded after reading that comment. Im jk :p
Author's Response:
Awwwwwee I'm so happy you like this story so much!! Pen and Michael are always nasty lmao. Yup a little princess and They're both ecstatic but you know Michael had to gloat about being right. Pen is not fond of her middle name at all. Most people aren't find of their middle names even if they're beautiful. Cali is a MESSSSS. lmao. Just picture her walking back and forth like she's giving a real performance. I'm not sure there will be a part two but you'll see! :). I gave your story a read. Shows promise!! And my head is already big so too late. Lmaoooo. <333
Date: Apr 26, 2015 08:22 pm Title: Someone To Watch Over Me...
Awwww yay they're having a little girl!!!!!this is too exciting!!! I can't believe The story is almost over:(
Author's Response:
Yup Michael won the bet. Lol. He was more than ecstatic and you know he rubbed it in. We are almost at the end of the road. Hang in there!! <333
[Report This]Date: Apr 15, 2015 08:25 pm Title: Forever...Neverland
Hey, Tut!
I'm glad that Pen finally came around. It broke my heart when it broke Michael's heart because he felt like she didn't like it. I knew she would come around eventually. I understand her feeling of losing control, but she should always know that Michael is going to allow her a say so in their relationship. This isn't no boyfriend/gilfriend or fiancees, no... this is a marriage. Michael was just trying to surprise her, I'm so glad they're at Neverland, though! And I'm glad that Pen really likes it and that Michael knows it.
I fear but also can't wait for the two chapters you have coming. I'm just curious as to what is going on in your mind.
More soon, please.
Author's Response:
Hey hay hiegh!! Lol Pen finally relinquished her stance. She just wanted a little control but as you see Michael gave her something she never thought about and she LOVES it. He always wants her input. As you can see her not being on board really threw him off his game. Like he said, home is where ever she is. Nohing to fear my dear all will go well. <333
[Report This]Date: Apr 14, 2015 07:26 am Title: Forever...Neverland
She's got control over her man!!! Michael is mush for his mama!!! Oooo I'm dying to know what you got brewing girl! This story was amazing!! The character development was on point the humor was ridiculous!! I laughed out loud at least once in every chapter even the sad ones had a bit of humor Pen is one of the best OGs I've seen (even in her hormonal crazy stage). She's going to love living at Neverland. And I can't wait to meet the bean!!
Author's Response:
Damn right. She has Michael wrapped aroud her entire being!! He's not even going to deny it if you sak him lol. Thank you so so much for beign with me since day one. Youv'e watched my babies grow with me. *tear*
I hope you like what I have in store. I will post the first chapter once this story wraps up.
I can' wait for all you to meet bean and find out whether or not bean is a boy or a girl. Stay with me!! <333
Date: Apr 13, 2015 08:33 pm Title: Forever...Neverland
California !!!!!!! **singing California love** lolll anywayyy omgggg 2 more chapters omggg I remember they day I was reading this and I was like a omg this is a good story and now that it's almost done got me sniffing but I'm not crying loll
Finally pen okay for em to live in LA omggg NEVERLAND **died** man neverland is the bomb dats like my all time favorite house okay
Chris Chris Chris da fudge how u gon basically try to flirt with my boo lolll aka pen's man in front of her BISH DISGUSTED!!! trick ain't got no
R-E-S-P-E-C-T
Find out what it means to me
R-E-S-P-E-C-T
Take care, TCB
Lolll I'm done i got all in the song but anyway Mike saw through her triflin no good tail lol
lolll I'm done Good Update 😂👏👏👏👏
Author's Response:
Crip walking across your comment to Cali Love!!! Yes only 2 chapters left. I will make it worht your while!
Neverland is their home now1
No basics allowed. They got swerved back into their lane. Michael is not messing with his Pen. <333
[Report This]Date: Apr 13, 2015 06:48 am Title: Forever...Neverland
Pregnancy blues got Mama Pen bad. My mom used to use Degree when I was growing up. This chapter is smelling so 90s to me right now because of that.
Shiny Titties better step the fuck off. I an't playing right now. We won't do this today, tomrrow, next week, next month, the rest of the year, or next year. No, Shiny Titties. You will not even try.
I would freak out myself if he took me to Neverland. All those damn acres. I would plant gardens and walk around barefoot all the time. Free as a bird. I actually want that someday. I just want lots of land to be able to do stuff like that!
I'm just glad she came around, though. I'm glad she loves it and uggh, I don't want this to end so I'm glad you're gonna do a little somethin somethin for us thirsty folk out there
As always, fantastic chapter. I can't wait for the next, but I don't mind the wait if it means it'll take longer to say goodbye
Author's Response:
Yesssss Pen has some serious Pregnancy blues on the real. I'm glad I could muster up some nostolgia for you.
Shiney tits was shut the hell down!!!
Pen will rule her kingdom barefoot and free you can best belive this!
I'm taking my time to say goodbye but I will post soon for the second to last chapter soon! <333
[Report This]Date: Apr 12, 2015 10:46 pm Title: Forever...Neverland
Two more freaking chapters left!!!!! Where did the time go. :(
So Pen finally came around. About darn time. I figured she was feeling some type of way but I didn't know what exactly but now I do. She just wanted a lil control. Awww! But I'm so happy that she's happy with their new home in L.A. that's all that matters. I'm happy for the married couple :):):)
Now, let me get to this Chris lady. This skeezer just ain't got no type of respect. None. Nada!!!! Like, why is you eye fucking Pen's man in front of her and then got some nerve and I mean, real nerves to suggest she seats on a wooden ass bench, chair whatever the fuck it was, floor, stool. Whateva!!! It was wooden and hard that's all i know. Hell! She would have got fucked up then cut up. Damn skeezer!!! But I really shouldn't trip, right? I mean got got on that ass low-key with out even being rude, loud or just going off on her. Clever man, clever!
Author's Response:
Yes we are almost to the end of the road. I'm sad already. 2 more chappies to go. Michael made sure to put that chick in her lane for sure lol. He did it quite unlike his rude ass self. Pen is rubbing off on him. <333
Date: Apr 12, 2015 09:03 pm Title: Forever...Neverland
Yasssss! They're gonna live in Cali. And Neverland is a fuckin FORTRESS! Nobody will be able to get near them. I'm so happy for them. And I cackled at Mike shutting that thirsty bitch down. Not on his watch! Hoes get checked real quick. Pen is the Mrs and that's what it is. I'm so glad she came around to it living in Cali. I really do think it's gonna be the best thing for them. And all that space for that baby and of course more. Mike is gon keep her knocked up. Lol
Author's Response:
Yessss hun!!! They are Neverland bound. Michael has learned all lessons of leaving room for interptitation. Diana's crazy ass sealed that deal. All thristy hoes will remain parched lmao!! He just might keep her knocked up lmao. <333
[Report This]Date: Apr 11, 2015 11:07 pm Title: Inked-Let Me introduce my self...
I like how you bring your characters to life. The dialogue is so strong and effective. MJ and Pen sound like they're going to have a lot in common. They seem so similar.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I hope you enjoy the whole story when you get the chance. <333
[Report This]Date: Apr 07, 2015 08:57 pm Title: Cali Living...Yay or Nay...
I can't believe this is almost coming to an end ;-;
if my mind serves correct, this story introduced me to the amazing writer that you are. From here, I was hooked!
Mike & Pen have grown so much. I think Cali will be a great step but we just needa get Pen on board. over here crying over grapes lmfaoo 😩😂 those hormones don't play!! Lol but mike gone slide his smooth ass into persuading her though, or at least that's what I think. he's just looking out for his wife & Bean 😊 aww little bean still not over that fdjdyhf lmao 😭😭😭
Author's Response:
That it is bb!! That it is. It's almost over and I'm sad too!! 😭😭😭. Lmao. She was legit Bawlin over the grapes too. You'll hear her tell it!! Michael will forever have his Pen and Little Bean up front!!! <333
[Report This]Date: Apr 06, 2015 08:25 am Title: Cali Living...Yay or Nay...
I love this story so much! Pen come on girl you can do it, the house will be beautiful for you and Bean.
Author's Response:
Michael is going to make the place great for his pEn and his little bean!!! <333
[Report This]Date: Apr 06, 2015 01:30 am Title: Cali Living...Yay or Nay...
She was crying over grapes. Lawd, I know what that's like. I've never been pregnant, but I know what it's like to cry over something so small when you going through something. Poor baby :( I laughed but I understood
I'm thinking if she moves to Cali she'll walk into the house like
Michael talking about his amazing ass 
Why is he so adorable and so sexy and makes me feel funny? I was cracking up though lmaoo Cuz it's true. Folks need to learn how to knock! But Amos and Michael got me dying over here. This is a huge deal to him and Michael just had to be snarky lmaoo
I love it!
I don't think he's being selfish. I know he wants them to be safe. He just wants what's best you know? I know her hormones got her raging but I think she'll be fine later on. As my dad used to say "she'll be alright once the swelling goes down" Lmao so I'm thinking that's what will happen. She'll get used to the idea and end up loving it hopefully
I don't wanna see this end myself. I don't know if it means much as at all but I'm so glad you started reading my stories because I really do see you as a great friend and mentor and I just learn so much from you as a person. You already know this I'm sure, but that's exactly why I call you my mentor! I can go on and on about this but I should stop now. I just love you to death and I'm glad we have a friendship off this site because goodness knows I would miss you if we didn't!
Can't wait for the next update. Give it here!
Author's Response:
Lol. Liz is so cute!!! Amos is always sticking his head in Michael's office!! He did knock but he never waits for the invitation and he will see that amazing ass if he's not careful!!! I'm already having withdrawals from it and I'm not quite done yet. :(((((( come fly with me lets fly let's fly away!!! <333
Date: Apr 05, 2015 10:58 pm Title: Cali Living...Yay or Nay...
I think honestly Pen should give it some thought. Leaving New York could be a blessing in disguise. She's had a lot of bs happen to her there, the Elard shit, Diana.. It would be great for her and Michael to get away from all that shit and really start their lives together with this baby. Pen is tripping. It ain't like she can't ever come back to NY and visit. California will be good for both of them. She can still be a tattoo artist or whatever there and be a mommy. Mike will do his music thing, and we all know that ranch is like a baby Fort Knox! Lol secured as hell and far away from people who would wanna get close to them and don't need to be.
Author's Response:
Pen is being a little impossible and she's aware of it and you'll see why. Every thing she has in NYC she can most def have in Cali and more I think. Neverland is a steel trap. Her and bean will be safe!! <333
[Report This]Date: Apr 05, 2015 10:15 pm Title: Cali Living...Yay or Nay...
Lawd, jesus. This is too much. Idek where to begin with my review. Okay....I got it. I forgot there was a little boy in the dream with them. Hell, maybe she's gonna have a boy and girl twin oooorrrrr it could be triplets she may be having. Just think about. Two girls+one boy=triples. That's just my guess. And I'm sticking to it too, lol. Now back to the original chapter, in a way, I do and I don't agree with Mike. I mean, it will be a good thing if they move to Cali being that the ranch is already paid off and it would be a waste of money if he just continues to stay in N.Y. and not live in the house he purchased. As for Pen, I understand where she coming from she doesn't want to leave but it could benefit her own safety. But she's preggers at the moment. Now it is a little to hectic for them to be moving being that Pen is pregnant and extremely hormonal at the moment. I mean, I wish he would give it some time and wait after she delivers the baby that way it won't be so much stress on her. It could cost the baby or babies life. But he can't undo what's already been done. We just gonna have to see how everything turns out, right? Hopefully they won't have to experience separation early. I don't think they gone handle being away from each other for so long. Hell, that can't even stay away from each other for 0.01 seconds. I think I did that wrong but you catch my drift girl.
Can't wait for the next update soon.
Author's Response:
I'll keep you guessing about the baby!! Lol Youlll see next chapter what the decide to do and why Pen is being a crybaby. And yup Millions are in the table here. <333
[Report This]Date: Apr 05, 2015 07:31 pm Title: Cali Living...Yay or Nay...
Awww!!! I'm going to miss them so much!!! I think Pen is being a hormonal baby... Just cause they move to Cali doesn't mean she won't see her family. Michael would surely fly her parents to see them anytime the could. I get it that she will be lonely when he's working in the studio, but she'll have Bean!
I can't wait to see what they decide to do.
"One of these days you're going to walk in here on me going balls deep on my wife and my amazing ass is the first thing you will see, traumatizing you into jealousy, hopefully for life." DEAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LMAO!!!
Author's Response:
Yup she's being a hormonal baby and she knows it. In the next chapter you will see why. Hormones are no joke lol.
Lmaooooo. I love Michael and Amos' friendship bathe shit they say to each other!! <333