[Report This]Date: May 03, 2020 05:36 am Title: Chapter 15--Five Star (LOL)
Ooooooooo Nubian Queen
*Wiggles eyebrows n flipping my fake hair feeling Keisha*
5 star...she much be quite something =D!
Not sure if I like Taj at the moment... suspect probably Marisol did him dirty but "the kid is his son" regardless of whatever issues he has with her mother he has to step and not be a father when it is convenient for him. How long will he hide a whole person for?
[Report This]Date: May 03, 2020 04:44 am Title: Chapter 15--Five Star (LOL)
No way.... he got a whole child... I was not expecting that at all. Keisha trust me girl, you do not want to play step mommy
[Report This]Date: May 03, 2020 04:39 am Title: Chapter 14--Comparing Notes
Yes Michael, it could very well be.
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2020 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 14--Comparing Notes
Oh god this is gonna get so messy! And what happened with Taj and marisol?
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2020 07:17 am Title: Chapter 14--Comparing Notes
Oh gosh....I was wondering how they'd meet, I take it back. The drama to come...gosh! I hope he wont be lurking around that a stalker creepy perv dude/boring a hole through her with his eyes if Taj takes him up on the date at the ranch offer. Urgh!
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2020 06:29 am Title: Chapter 14--Comparing Notes
Yes, bring her to Neverland. That’s sure to be an interesting weekend.
[Report This]Date: May 01, 2020 04:56 am Title: Chapter 13--Insecure
Stumbled across this story yesterday and I love it!
I currently have a love - hate relationship with Michael, such a perv! I can't wait until Taj and Michael find out they live the same girl.
Patiently waiting for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks! I don't think having Mike be the complete boy scout he was in previous stories does anything for this plot. It's okay that you have this push-pull with him. If it was easy, then the choice would be easy. LOL
Date: May 01, 2020 03:58 am Title: Chapter 2--Temporary Distractions
I love when Michael’s character is darker. I’ve enjoyed your other stories so I’m sure this one will be excellent as well.
Author's Response:
THANK YOU!!! Me too! I like him with a bit of an edge. Boy Scout Mike is fun, but not AS fun. LOL
[Report This]Date: May 01, 2020 03:14 am Title: Chapter 13--Insecure
MARISOL???????
Author's Response:
Yes. Marisol. ha ha.
[Report This]Date: Apr 30, 2020 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 12--Drawing Boundaries
I missed this story! I come back to MJFiction just so I can re-read all of your work.
I hope you're staying safe â¤ï¸
Author's Response:
HEYYYYYYY!!! An OG face! Thank you!! I hope you're staying safe as well. I'm just trying to provide a little entertainment and pick me up for fellow MJ fans. I've had writers block for such a long time.
Thank you for coming back to re-read. I didn't think anyone did that but me!
Date: Apr 30, 2020 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 12--Drawing Boundaries
when i tell you i bout fell out of my seat when i saw this....
welcome back. we missed you. 😠like, a lot.
also, this shit is bout to hit the fan and the sooner the better. can't have my girl keisha goin out sad like this!!!! the audacity.
anywho, as always, you gotta faithful reader on your hands here. ridin to the wheels fall off lol
Author's Response:
Not fell out of your chair!! LOL. Girl, don't hurt yourself! Thank you SO MUCH for your support! It's nice to feel missed on the interwebz.
[Report This]Date: Apr 30, 2020 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 12--Drawing Boundaries
THEY ALL LIED. I’m dying, this is all gonna get messy soon and won’t be good for Taj lol. Also keep your hands off her, only for Mike.
I am absolutely in love with this book. Keep up the great work :)
Author's Response:
Thank you much! I think it will get messy, but maybe not in the way that you think. I think both men have their pros and cons.
[Report This]Date: Apr 30, 2020 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 11--33
Keisha he’s a whole mystery cuz- you know what I’m not even gonna
[Report This]Date: Apr 30, 2020 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 10--Since Feeling is First
tAj mArTeS, this dude a whole liar
[Report This]Date: Apr 30, 2020 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 9--Strange Tidings
Michael really is starting to fall hard for her. He better catch her heart fast