[Report This]Date: May 20, 2014 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 1.
i love it
Author's Response:
Thank you!! :)
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2014 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 10.
Natalie is so clumsy!!!!! her house could've gotten on fire lol. too caught up with Michael. and drey does seem suspicious hmmmm great one
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2014 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 9.
their date was cute. mikes pick up lines were great!! how come natalie didn't like them? no sense of humor lol! and they almost kissed what if they actally did kiss????
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2014 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 8.
Michael asked her out on a date mmhmhm "friendly" i laughed! how's the date gonna go!
nice xx
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2014 01:40 pm Title: Chapter 7.
he sneaked his number in her pocket! audrey psuhing her to call him so quick so pushy but hey they talked!
i liked it 10!! xx
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing, girl~
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2014 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 6.
her and michael met out of random and luckiness! natalie is terrible at lying TERRIBLE she shouldn't lie again that picture of michael is cute ;) xx
Author's Response:
She is terrible. :'( It's heartbreaking, lol!!! Thank you!
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2014 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 5.
the house is beautiful and natalie is a pianist? thats cool i play the piano too lol xx
Author's Response:
I can play the organ... If that counts. LOL. But yes, the house bigggg as hale.
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2014 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 4.
oh plus thats my favorite janet song ;)
Author's Response:
My favorite Janet song as well!!
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2014 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 3.
that was a crazy mission so interesting
i love it xxx
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2014 01:32 pm Title: Chapter 2.
ooooh!!! a dare will natalie go through it??? and i love that gif of michael lol he looks sexy. i love it!
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2014 01:31 pm Title: Characters.
ggreat characters!!
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2014 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 1.
the way they killed that lady :-(
my reviews aren't sending!!!!
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2014 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 1.
the way they killed that lady omg :-(
[Report This]Date: May 19, 2014 01:01 am Title: Chapter 10.
I like this, it's really interesting! <3
Author's Response:
Thank you!!
Date: May 18, 2014 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 10.
You're so sweettt!
Me and Drey are not going to get along. She's in Nats's ear buzzing like a damn fly. I really sense jealousy or something...like, Drey is so set on this dare, she won't let Natalie forget it. Lol but anyways, Nat's clumsy self, almost set that beautiful ass house on fire. That child doesn't have the sense god gave her sometimes, I swear, lmao. But she's super cute, I'm falling in love with her character with every chapter. Super excited for what's in store with her and Michael, especially at the concert.
Now about August '78, I'm updating that tomorrow because I just finished writing the chapter so it's really no point in waiting. I'm so glad you like my stories and reviews and all that good stuff. It's means a lot!
Author's Response:
Oh my gosh. Your guesses are really on point! Drey shouldn't really be trusted... She sounds sneaky, doesn't she? And Nat's clumsy behind. So caught up with Michael that she forgot about her food. I'm glad you like her character, though. I'm trying to show her some more, lol!
And girl, I've been waiting.
~lowkey stalks your page to see if you've updated~