Date: May 26, 2014 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 1.
Yes! My name's HeleneJacksonxx same as here! :) What about you?
Author's Response:
Yes! My name on there is xoldschoolforeverx :) I think I've seen you. I was just curious
[Report This]Date: May 26, 2014 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 12.
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you!! And hey, are you on Wattpad???
[Report This]Date: May 21, 2014 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 1.
Hey girl :D
I just wanna tell you I'm still reading this but I've got to find time to catch up!
I have this bad habit of being on MJfiction for a while then disappearing for days, then when I return I realise I'm so behind on a story and I can never catch up -.-
Can't wait to be up to date with this. :3 Gonna find time tomorrow to sit back and read. :)
, <33
Author's Response:
Oh my gosh, heeeeey! :)
And I understand, thank you for reading, giiirl. Take your time! <33
Date: May 21, 2014 01:55 pm Title: Noteeee. :)
I think you give a good balance between Michael and Natalie's POV.
You deserve all the reviews you have! (p.s. I loved the last chapter, even though I'm sad MJ is leaving LOL)
Author's Response:
Good! Thank you for the reply. :) MJ will be back in no time. Him and Nat will still be in contact, hehe.
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2014 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 11.
Natalie got lost. Typical Natalie. Only she would get lost lmao. Lola sounds like she is the one who misses Michael as well!! Pushing herself on him and all that funk. But I imagined the concert like the actual human nature performance on the tour and I liked that part.
Michael and Natalie have a relationship going on there. That kiss got me screaming update pleaseeee
Author's Response:
LOL at typical Natalie. She is clumsy and careless. She has to start paying attention. Lola is just a character of her own. Demanding and just Lola! I love the Human Nature performance on the tour too. My favorites. The kiss was indeed something big. ;))))) and I will update soon! Thank you for reading and reviewing~
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2014 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 10.
Natalie set her breakfast on fire. Michael wrong for laughing at her struggle xD
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2014 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 9.
"Alright, what does a baby computer call his father?"
"Um, Dell?"
"Data!"
i found that funny hahaha! Michael is such a kid. :) funny chapter!
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2014 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 8.
Ooooooo ;) Michael and Natalie got a date together. lala juicy juicy hahaha. I love that aaliyah song she sang. I have the album
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2014 05:15 pm Title: Chapter 7.
hahaha at Natalie randomly finding his card in her pocket. But now Mike and her are friends. cool
Author's Response:
It is! They got some friendship. ^_^ Thank you!
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2014 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 6.
Michael is so kinda. Paying for their clothes and everything. I wish I had someone as kind as him. He's sneaky for sneaking his number in her pocket hahahaahaha!! Great
Author's Response:
He is kinda! And sneaky man right?
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2014 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 5.
I love that song by Alicia Keys. Natalie's liiving in that bombing house all by herself! Can I have her life?!
Author's Response:
Not before I take it!!! Hehee. :) Thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2014 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 4.
great chapter! hahahahahaa
Author's Response:
Thank youuuu!
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2014 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 3.
They jumped out the window! I would never do that it's dangerous!
Author's Response:
Same here. ;____; But they're criminals and it's their only choice instead of getting caught and thrown in jail!
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2014 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 2.
a dare, that sounds scary. but they're criminals how is that going to work out? what if she gets figured out? I love the idea. It's interesting!!! :)
Author's Response:
Exactly. What will happen if she gets figured out? Will it work? Thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: May 20, 2014 05:05 pm Title: Characters.
theyre gorgeous i love selena
Author's Response:
I love her too. Latina princesa! Hehe.