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Reviewer: BadGirl777 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 07, 2014 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 14.

Michael is so not the type to be interviewed. Coppin an attitude with Sandra lol! And who does Alex think he is tryna get into Natalie's panties like that! She will beat you up!! nice!!!

Reviewer: BadGirl777 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 07, 2014 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 1.

Michael is so not the type to be interviewed. Coppin an attitude with Sandra lol! And who does Alex think he is tryna get into Natalie's panties like that! She will beat you up!! nice!!!

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2014 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 1.

I sure hope you update soon girl! *__* I'm missing this story and it's only been a couple days since I caught up lmao <3



Author's Response:

Oh my gosh, heeeey! ^_^ And yes, I'm trying to write a chapter. Been busy, lol!

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2014 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 13.

Awww that was such a cute ending to the chapter! XD Audrey is like a stalker lmao I wonder what her deal is, she can't just be so desperate to get his money can she? Idk but I do most certainly know Nat has fallen for Mike. ;)

Can't wait to read what happens next :D



Author's Response:

She's is desperate for money... She's willing to do whatever! And yes, they're fallin for one another!

Reviewer: Dangerous1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2014 07:03 am Title: Chapter 13.

Love it Michael and Natalie are so adorbs

Reviewer: BadGirl777 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2014 07:01 am Title: Chapter 13.

So Natalie basically met Lola. I love how Audrey lied about her name, Selena lol! But the game Michael and Natalie played was cute I can't wait to see how they are when they meet again.

Reviewer: HeleneJacksonxx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2014 01:56 am Title: Chapter 13.

Lovely! <3

Reviewer: purebutterflies Signed [Report This]
Date: May 30, 2014 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 13.

Awww she sang him to sleep. How cute.

Reviewer: Susie Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2014 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 1.

SMH! It doesn't get more wore some than that girl! And I'm laughing at how Nat fake smiled before opening the door LOL. Michael's voice mail was so cute though d84;a039;

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: BadGirl777 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2014 01:15 pm Title: Chapter 12.

Drey is nosey nosey. she alwas goes to her house to question Natalie. she jealous to nat see's it, but she doesn't notice lol good chapter 

Reviewer: BadGirl777 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2014 01:08 pm Title: Noteeee. :)

you gave us his pov in the last chapter. it's good lol

Reviewer: BadGirl777 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2014 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 11.

Funny at how Nat got lost. all her fault and Lola is Michael's ex why did they break up? i'm glad Mike and Nat kissed. it was cute, haha

Reviewer: Dangerous1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2014 01:01 pm Title: Noteeee. :)

It's good enough for me!

Reviewer: Dangerous1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2014 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 12.

Drey sounds jealous of Natalie. She's always on her every time and always wants to know what she's doing. My favorite song is Blue Gangsta. That song is beast (both the original and the version on xscape)

Reviewer: HeleneJacksonxx Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2014 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 1.

I'm following you. You have like a million reads on your stories, it's crazy! I'll have to read some of it soon :)



Author's Response:

Nooo, my MJ story is like the best one in my opinion. So yeah, lol! ;__; I knew your name was familiar.

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