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Reviewer: BadGirl777 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2014 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 11.

Funny at how Nat got lost. all her fault and Lola is Michael's ex why did they break up? i'm glad Mike and Nat kissed. it was cute, haha

Reviewer: Dangerous1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2014 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 11.

Natalie got lost. Typical Natalie. Only she would get lost lmao. Lola sounds like she is the one who misses Michael as well!! Pushing herself on him and all that funk. But I imagined the concert like the actual human nature performance on the tour and I liked that part.

Michael and Natalie have a relationship going on there. That kiss got me screaming update pleaseeee



Author's Response:

LOL at typical Natalie. She is clumsy and careless. She has to start paying attention. Lola is just a character of her own. Demanding and just Lola! I love the Human Nature performance on the tour too. My favorites. The kiss was indeed something big. ;))))) and I will update soon! Thank you for reading and reviewing~

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