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Reviewer: Susie Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2014 11:42 am Title: Chapter 1.

That bitch Lola! I bet she set Nat up! And Michael, lmao I'm dying how he ended the interviewer like that. Oh and he and Nat's conversation on the phone was so cute ^_^ Good chapterrr!



Author's Response:

LOL, Mike can be so rude sometimes and yes, their conversation was so cuteeeee. Thank you!

Reviewer: BadGirl777 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 07, 2014 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 1.

Michael is so not the type to be interviewed. Coppin an attitude with Sandra lol! And who does Alex think he is tryna get into Natalie's panties like that! She will beat you up!! nice!!!

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 05, 2014 04:23 pm Title: Chapter 1.

I sure hope you update soon girl! *__* I'm missing this story and it's only been a couple days since I caught up lmao <3



Author's Response:

Oh my gosh, heeeey! ^_^ And yes, I'm trying to write a chapter. Been busy, lol!

Reviewer: Susie Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2014 04:47 pm Title: Chapter 1.

SMH! It doesn't get more wore some than that girl! And I'm laughing at how Nat fake smiled before opening the door LOL. Michael's voice mail was so cute though d84;a039;

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: HeleneJacksonxx Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2014 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 1.

I'm following you. You have like a million reads on your stories, it's crazy! I'll have to read some of it soon :)



Author's Response:

Nooo, my MJ story is like the best one in my opinion. So yeah, lol! ;__; I knew your name was familiar.

Reviewer: HeleneJacksonxx Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2014 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 1.

Yes! My name's HeleneJacksonxx same as here! :) What about you?



Author's Response:

Yes! My name on there is xoldschoolforeverx :) I think I've seen you. I was just curious

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21, 2014 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 1.

Hey girl :D

I just wanna tell you I'm still reading this but I've got to find time to catch up!

I have this bad habit of being on MJfiction for a while then disappearing for days, then when I return I realise I'm so behind on a story and I can never catch up -.-

Can't wait to be up to date with this. :3 Gonna find time tomorrow to sit back and read. :)

, <33



Author's Response:

Oh my gosh, heeeeey! :)

And I understand, thank you for reading, giiirl. Take your time! <33

Reviewer: Dangerous1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2014 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 1.

i love it



Author's Response:

Thank you!! :)

Reviewer: BadGirl777 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2014 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 1.

the way they killed that lady :-(

my reviews aren't sending!!!!

Reviewer: BadGirl777 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20, 2014 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 1.

the way they killed that lady omg :-(

Reviewer: Susie Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17, 2014 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 1.

I'm having withdrawals from this story! Lol update soon.



Author's Response:

Updating today, loveeee! But August 78. >____> When you gon' update that one? PLSSSS. Lol!

Reviewer: Susie Signed [Report This]
Date: May 07, 2014 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 1.

Nat (I have a character in one of my stories named Nat, too #twins lol) is so cute lol. She's definitely gonna end up falling for Michael.

Reviewer: Susie Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2014 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 1.

I like this so far



Author's Response:

Thank youuuu!

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2014 02:30 am Title: Chapter 1.

The love interest as the smooth criminal of the story?! FUCK YEAH

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This is gonna be good ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!

Reviewer: DajahMykal Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 26, 2014 07:07 pm Title: Chapter 1.

Smooth Criminal indeed. This is gonna be interesting. The King of Pop and a true 'Smooth Criminal'.

Author's Response:

My first review! Than kyou for reading, girl. I'll update soon!

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