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Reviewer: lexyxd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 12, 2015 04:42 pm Title: Chapter 9.

Good so far I hope she changes her mind about using him that wouldn't be pretty.

Reviewer: Susie Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2014 04:07 pm Title: Wassup?

Omgggg I missed you and your stories. Yes bring them back!



Author's Response:

OMG!!!! HEEEEY GIRL. I missed you too!!! I'm looking foward to finishing off where I left with that oh so magnificent story of yours called Expect The Unexpected!!!! I'm expecting the expected but since I haven't begun reading the expected is still unexpected and I don't know where I'm going with this, LMAO. Jesus I have a lot of catching up to do! :D

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 27, 2014 03:30 pm Title: Characters.

Yesss I love The girls in this story especially Natalie and Camille. Love the Gifs

Reviewer: HeleneJacksonxx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2014 10:03 am Title: ~

Oh my god! I love "Not So Tough" I didn't know that was you! I love both stories! 

Reviewer: Susie Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 23, 2014 09:01 pm Title: ~

This sounds like my exact same problem for August '78...like I suddenly ran out of ideas. But girl, this story is not messed up. Well I guess I can't see it from your POV but from a reader's POV it's not confusing or messed up at all. Plus, don't rush writing out the chapters, you gotta let it come natural so this chapter can be as perfect as all the other ones LOL. I'm excited for the new story too :)

Reviewer: Susie Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 19, 2014 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 16.

Damn damn damn! Tell me why I was smiling like an idiot reading this whole chapter then Drey's woresome self  just haaaaad to text. She is working my nerves. "Don't forget we had a dare" UM HOW COULD SHE FORGET ughhh. Good chapter though girl, loved it as always ! :)

Reviewer: BadGirl777 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 19, 2014 06:41 am Title: Chapter 16.

So both of them have someone is common. Lola! i think she's going to try and do something to break them apart once she figures out Michael and Natalie know each other. Why is Drey alway on their case???

Reviewer: BadGirl777 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 19, 2014 06:36 am Title: Chapter 15.

Avery is a son of a.. UGH! I didn't know she went through this. He threw he down the stairs like some dirt!!!!

Reviewer: KekeJackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 18, 2014 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 16.

I hope somebody or something happens to Aubrey like dang are you that zealous for his money.. She better hope he don't find out about any of them then she can laugh about the money in jail

Reviewer: Susie Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 11, 2014 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 15.

15 chapters into this story and I still cannot get over how good of a writer you are! I love this story so much!

 

Avery is a sick bastard to be abusing her like that. The fact that he believed that pig of a brother is just disgusting. Avery treated her like some kind of pet, it's a wonder she's still in her right mind. So now there's two crazy exes in this story, Lola and Avery. Are us readers really prepared for the drama that is bound to come in the future of this story?!

 



Author's Response:

Oh my gosh. I'm not as good, lol. I've seen way better!! And Avery is a sick man. Accusing her of some bull his brother starte. And yes, it's the case of the exes! Lola and Avery are ready to start some drama in the future. Thank you for review, girl. I love your reviews!!! <3

Reviewer: Dangerous1 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2014 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 14.

Sandra is annoying and Michael doesn't like her. But Alex messed with the wrong woman. But what happened with Natalie before? Did she get abused in her past?????

Reviewer: BadGirl777 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2014 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 14.

Michael is so not the type to be interviewed. Coppin an attitude with Sandra lol! And who does Alex think he is tryna get into Natalie's panties like that! She will beat you up!! nice!!!

Reviewer: BadGirl777 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2014 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 14.

Michael is so not the type to be interviewed. Coppin an attitude with Sandra lol! And who does Alex think he is tryna get into Natalie's panties like that! She will beat you up!! nice!!!

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2014 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 14.

Michael sure was pissed with that interviewer prying lmao bitch Michael ain't got time for that

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Damn Alex messed with the wrong chick! She should have killed him lol though I'm thankful she went Bruce Lee on his stupid ass

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Can't wait for more! :)



Author's Response:

Michael like interviews, no no! And Alex sure got beat up. Natalie isn't gonna take his bullshit. Tuh!

Reviewer: Susie Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 08, 2014 11:42 am Title: Chapter 1.

That bitch Lola! I bet she set Nat up! And Michael, lmao I'm dying how he ended the interviewer like that. Oh and he and Nat's conversation on the phone was so cute ^_^ Good chapterrr!



Author's Response:

LOL, Mike can be so rude sometimes and yes, their conversation was so cuteeeee. Thank you!

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