Date: Nov 09, 2011 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 22
Omg !!! What's happen next !!!?
Date: Nov 09, 2011 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 21
I love it
Date: Nov 09, 2011 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 18
Omg :(
Date: Nov 09, 2011 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 18
Omg :(
Date: Jul 02, 2011 01:22 pm Title: Feeling Alone
I feel a romantic story coming that's cool
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: Jul 02, 2011 07:09 am Title: Chapter 3
I LOVED THE FATHER'S REACTION!
Author's Response:
Hahaha I know me too :)
Date: Jul 02, 2011 06:30 am Title: Chapter 1
You are a realy good writer and don't stop to write! You know I don't realy like to write about all those stuff to but I do it anyway because I know that it will make some people happy! :)
Author's Response:
Wow thanks dude! I've not heen motivated to continue writin this one, I'm mainly working on mnother one. But thanks anyways :D
[Report This]Date: Jun 24, 2011 12:55 am Title: Chapter 21
whoops I meant to put 10 stars lol
Author's Response:
Thanks it means a lot that you like my story :) I apologize that I haven't been posting. I'm working on another story and stuff has been happening :( I'll try to post one today :)
[Report This]Date: Jun 24, 2011 12:53 am Title: Chapter 21
Great chapter! I just hope Jason and the mom don't ruin everything between Bluestar and MJ :( they r soo cute!! <3 great story!
Author's Response:
Thanks :D And I know right :( I think things are going bad already with them with his vitiligo and if Jason gets in, it's gonna get worse D:
Date: Jun 09, 2011 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 20
YAY!!!!!!! She kissed him :D
Author's Response:
YAY!!!!!!!! :D
Date: Jun 09, 2011 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 20
Finally there starting to like ach other lol cant wait for more :)
Author's Response:
Haha that's what I thought :) I just wonder how Michael will react aftet Dakota lets go of his face :O
[Report This]Date: Jun 06, 2011 07:31 pm Title: Chapter 18
wow dakota strangling her mom lol that was funny even though its wrong
Author's Response:
Haha I know right? O:)
[Report This]Date: May 30, 2011 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Your story is very interesting. The only thing I would complain about is the formating.
- Everytime someone speaks start a new paragraph
- Try double-spacing everything so it's easier to read
- Put all thoughts in intalics
- Proof read for mechanical errors
Other than that, you should be fine. Please continue writing. :)
Author's Response:
Yeah um, sorry about that. I'm not used to writing like that but I'll see if I can understand how all that works lol :)
Date: May 30, 2011 12:34 pm Title: Chapter 17
oh shoot i love it
Author's Response:
Thank You :D
Date: May 29, 2011 11:19 pm Title: Chapter 17
OMG!! Poor we allison, I hope shes okay :( I fucking hate that bastard ray >:(
Author's Response:
I know :'( and who doesn't? D:<