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Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 15, 2014 06:39 am Title: Chapter 5 - Brownie Boy

Worth the wait?! Hell, yes it was! That was hot....and a sexy shower scene, too!! Thank you so much, girl!! <3 Oh and I know you're expecting my usual gifs, so..... ;)



Author's Response:

HAHAHA! That first gif is hilarious! Good Lord, the gold pants........ *melts into a Taryn puddle* That man really had no idea how sexy he was! I'm so happy that you liked it, Kendra!<3

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 15, 2014 05:53 am Title: Chapter 5 - Brownie Boy

LOL this was cute and hilarious!! Hope to see you write a novel length fic one day. 



Author's Response:

Thanks Christy! Yeah, I have an idea that I'm working on for a full story; I just have to figure some little issues out, then it'll be full steam ahead! LOL!

Reviewer: SmoothMove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 15, 2014 05:20 am Title: Chapter 5 - Brownie Boy

so cutesy! I love the beginning where michael's being his quintissential self and playing with the flour. HAHAHAHA the 'defective turkey' comment made me laugh out loud! and the shower scene was just beyond lovely! overall it was a sexy, yet casual declaration of two people madly in love - and it's not unrealistic. there's irritation and taunting and ungracefulness. i like that it shows a hint of all that, not just the good stuff. awesome job! when's the next one coming out? 

<3 xoxo



Author's Response:

Yeah, I don't know where that defective turkey thing came from. My mind works in weird ways sometimes! LOL!

Reviewer: SmoothMove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 15, 2014 04:41 am Title: Chapter 4 - Surprise

HEEHEEHEEHEEHEE! 

ahem. i meant to say....

HEE-HEE!

Fun, kinky, naughty sexiness! Loved it! <3 

Oh, and the icing on the cake - no no, the ICE CREAM to go with the icing to go on the cake...A BABY! We all know that puts it over the top for our angel!

well done! this one was fun as well! Onto the next one! WHEEEEEE!! XD



Author's Response:

LOL! Thanks, Randi! I almost gave myself a Mikegasm while I was writing it......had to keep fanning myself and everything.....

Reviewer: Kunda Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2014 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Surprise

Liked if?! You must be out Yo mind! I LOVE IT! I love it so much. :3 you're the best. You really are lol. Love ya Taryn (if that is in fact your name) my name is actually Rakeli. Thank you. 



Author's Response:

Yep, that is in fact my name. LOL! I am really glad that you love it so much, K, and I can't wait to see my re-vamped one shot from you! I'm waiting most impatiently! O_O 

Reviewer: SmoothMove Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2014 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 3 - You've Got A Friend

aaaaawwwwww! that was so sweet1 yay, christy saved michael! f**k you, Murrey! VICTORY!!!! Gonna read the next one now, sorry i was absent for a day or so. Busy, busy! 

love your work, as always! <3



Author's Response:

LOL! Thanks, Randi. 

Reviewer: Kunda Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2014 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Surprise

 

GIRL I CANT EVEN ^^^^^^^^^ OMG GAWD!



Author's Response:

LMAOOOOO!! That is so funny! So I guess that means you liked it, huh, K? :D

Reviewer: Kunda Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2014 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Surprise

OMGOMGOMG I'm so excited to read this I had to state it before I actually read it 😝😍ok here I go. 



Author's Response:

LMAO....silly Kunda......

Reviewer: KerenOlivero Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2014 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Surprise

hehehe it was funny when Michael teased Kunda about being a naughty girl!

Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2014 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 1 - My Man

LMAO...I saw it and thought it fit this situation pretty well! ;) Looking forward to it! Can't wait!!

Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2014 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Surprise

Oh. My. Dear. GOD!! That was fucking HOT, girl!! 

Ooh and it's my turn! YAY!! 



Author's Response:

Oh man, Kendra, I'm dying right now!! That gif!!! LMFAO!! Yes, it was very hot, wasn't it? I was fanning myself while I was writing it! It's your turn, girlie! Get ready! I'm staring it right now! :D

Reviewer: Kunda Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2014 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 3 - You've Got A Friend

This was so sweet



Author's Response:

Thanks, K! I'm working on yours as we speak, so be on the lookout! It should be coming at some point tonight.....;)

Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2014 03:55 pm Title: Chapter 1 - My Man

Hahaha....pfft, yeah, like you mind! ;) Alright, alright, I'll stop....well, until you update, of course! ;p

Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2014 03:44 pm Title: Chapter 1 - My Man

Oh, yes! He was hella sexy in Come Together! *drools*



Author's Response:

Oh man, Kendra, why?! Why did you have to put that gif up? Now I'm gonna be seeing his gyrating hips in my mind the rest of the night.....not that I'm complaining, of course....LOL

Reviewer: Sweetpanda14 Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2014 03:28 pm Title: Chapter 3 - You've Got A Friend

Dammit! I love them all! :D Is there a way where I can request a story?



Author's Response:

Thank you, Maddy! Yep, there is definitely a way. I have something up called Requests for You. Just type that in to the search, or go to my stories and it'll be there. Just leave your request and I'll do my best to make you happy! :)

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