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Reviewer: Crazyme55 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2015 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 78 - TJ2: The Lost Chapters - Aspen Colorado - Pt(2) - Song for Mama

This was. a fun and sad chapter. Janice's flashbacks were great. I loved the youngest two kids. Two little mini mes. Mini Janice and Mini Michael.

It is very sad about Janice's mom. I hope she will be ok.

Im sorry to hear about you dad. I hope he will be ok. 

Very sorry to hear about your best friends mother and grandmother.

 



Author's Response:

I wanted to Make this Chapter as fun as posaible with the heavy weight that was being handle within it so to break the manotany with the flashbacks gave you opertunty to see things you didn't get in the main story and to have fun. I felt inspired to just go back to that time we never covered between the first story and this one. it Brings back a younger Janice. and see the trouble her and Michel got into when they were just getting use to being married as well as some things you may have been interested in.

Janices Mom... yeah it is sad... there is tough times ahead with that but trust me I got this covered

My dad, he is stuborn so I worry about him more then usual because he doesn't like to listen to his doctors he is taking his medicine and he's doing what he's suposed to but he hasn't quite clicked that he ia SERIOUSLY ill when he slips off and does thes same old things he use to do when he was well and they aren't sitting right with him any more he do't get it but all I can do is hope he pulls through it. he's strong old man sp he will hopefully be okay.

yeah and my friend and her mother and grandmother was a shock to me. so I just felt compelled to go there I lost my mother 10 years ago to heart failer and it still hurts me every day so I wanted to being a diferent angle into it.   

Reviewer: Crazyme55 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2015 06:04 pm Title: Chapter 77 - TJ2: The Lost Chapters - Aspen Colorado - Pt(1) - Clockwork

It's so nice to see Michael and Janice are able to put their work problems aside and get back to their special place.

This is awful news about Janice's mother.



Author's Response:

They NEEDED this time together the last time they had been in a good place was the week of his birthday and that was 5 months before they NEEDED to reconect, between work kids hectic schedules they weren't connecting it can be so awkward to be in the house together or in the same room but be so stuck in your head and work not even be able to SEE each other vacations slow for that.

Janiced Mother being sic was long time planned I knew I was going in that direction several chappters ago and then it all fell into place finally to figure out how I wanted to do it and with mothersday happening it was perfect way to bring joy out of a sad situation. Life happens and things can't always be perfect. people do get sick it how they handle it is what makes the diference and I wanted to see how Janice would hanle the stress of dealling with something should couldn't control.

I know when my mother got sick and was hospitlized all that time I had to deal with it still go to school it was my seniour year of highschool and she diead just before christmas and I had to deal with it.

Reviewer: Sky_Allyi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 06, 2015 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 76 - TJ2: The Lost Chapters - Pt(3) - I was Here

Omqeee Michael Caught Her. I Mean I Figured That It Was Bound To Happen But Not So Soon. . Oh Well. Is Janice Ever Gone Tell Michael Bout Her Dream . . Why Beyonce Thot Ass So Damn Petty??? I Mean She Got Jay So What She Axting Like That For???? && Who Dead????



Author's Response:

YES Michael Caught her I could so see Michael really doing that to someone coming to where they are so that he could let them know he knew what they lied to him about. he seems a little manipulative to do something like that.

WIll she or won't she, that is a good question... maybe Maybe not... maybe she may tell him after it looks like danger is out of the picture for him she will.

Beyonce said it herself "I gotta BIG EGO" need I say More.

Reviewer: Crazyme55 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 29, 2015 11:59 am Title: Chapter 76 - TJ2: The Lost Chapters - Pt(3) - I was Here

Thank you, Thank you, Thank you for the scene with Janice and Beyoncé. It was really good? Yes?

Janice does need to get her priorities in order. To not see her kids because business got in the way. Not good. 

Who is the dead person? Can't wait for next chapter.



Author's Response:

Ah Janice and B - these two you know they can't co exist without fangs coming out...

Janice over time will figure things out. But when it comes to prioties some times you can't get them stright until she actually have time to stop.. look around and listen see what is really going on. Janice is a mother but she also  has work and you know as a mother you have to do what you have to do but by the same token look at where Janices Head is at it's everywhere a lot is going on her and Michael aren't seeing eye to eye and some times things slip through the cracks not lie she forgot about her children she just know instead of rushing to see them for breif moment she could do better to wait that one or two days to see them for a long exteneded time instead of getting ther hope sup and crushing them for only a few moments of time.

Ah the dead person all will be explained gradualy I have a interesting plot twist prepared for that still fleshing that out though so be patient.

Reviewer: Crazyme55 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 23, 2015 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 75: TJ2: The Lost Chapters - Let Me Know Pt(2)

Chapters 76 and 77 are wonderful. Michael and Janice have such a strong marriage all a round. I hope when Michael finds out Janice has been working on the election he doesn't exploded?

Again I just love this series.

 

(former Crazyme 62)



Author's Response:

Marriage is a Marriage it's full of trials and tribulations but it's how you and your spose work those trials out together and don't loose focus on one another that keeps you strong through them. not forgetting one another not allowing space to seep inbetween you because when you le that happen you are bownd for doom, I know I learned it the hard way.

you see what happens in relation to the election.

Reviewer: Crazyme62 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 21, 2015 11:30 am Title: Chapter 73: TJ2 The Lost Chapters: What happens in Vegas Pt (4)... Partner let Me Upgrade You4

Nice nice nice. I love seeing Janice's team at work.

Randy Phillips and Tohme Tohme OMG! Janice has to tell Michael about the dream or nightmare. She got to get him away from these men.

OMG?



Author's Response:

Janices team are always going to work together it's what they do when ever something is going down they come together it's in them they pull out all the stops not because Michael is Michael Jackson but by this point Michael is FAMILY and they are a family and they are going to protect each other and cover each others back. same thing Michael does for Janice when he has the opertunity... er go the derek situation and Antnio... they protect each other.

Yup Randy Phillips Tohmme Tohme... things are Brewing. Janice is not ready to say about the nightmare.... besides how do you TELL your spouse ... "Oh hey baby you know remeber that time I had that REALLY bad stomcah bug and had that nightmare I never told you about, Oh yeah you died and the people that are working with you now had something to do with it... yeah I know why didn't I firethem immedately didn't have enough evidence to fire them and you had already hired them on so if we desolved the contract they could sue for unlawful termination" yeah don't think it would have went over so well. she just remaining aware and eyes open to the situation   

Reviewer: MJluvr12many Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 20, 2015 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 73: TJ2 The Lost Chapters: What happens in Vegas Pt (4)... Partner let Me Upgrade You4

omgomgomgomgomgomg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OH MAH GOSHHHHHH! (passes out) I hope Michael doesn't try and convince her that their okay. I hope he listens to her!

Author's Response:

Hello again

Were you reading the first story when I first wrote that your name looks familar... welcome back any way and you know Janice she always has her eyes and ears open, watch as the twisted plot unfolds as we near the conclusion

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 14, 2015 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 17: Love and War... Space

Well I love little jasmine because that was me when I was little. Whispering in my parents ear tellin them what to do, to make the other one happy. I never said this but I love all of Janice's friends. But Janice I love her ! She is fire! The determination. The "U not gunna walk all over me" attitude. I love it. Shana irks my soul . And ughhhh I can feel the drama coming with the bastard Tommy and his flock

Reviewer: Crazyme62 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 14, 2015 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 71:The Lost Chapters - What Happens In Veges..Pt 2 Sinful Suggestions

Great chapter, loved it. It's great when the whole gang gets together. Adding Kreshel and Daren was great. She has such a mouth on her.

Janice and Michael's morning shopping from the Pleasure Chest to the dress shop, wow I would like a shopping trip like this.

James and Katherine taking after dad. Cute

Looking forward to Michael's birthday.



Author's Response:

Oh yeah, you have to love this group when they are together. but I had to show the realisum of as time progressed they couldn't akways be readily availble to one another they have there own lives own families and they all nearly live in diferent stated.

Janice and Michael - Atlanta /New York/Cali

Candice and Quint - New York and Paris

Jon'Nee and Bobby - New York

Sofia and Marcus - New York

The good thing is that they all have crosing location and work from alot of the same places the issue iis there work like reality doen't always place them in the same place at the same time and so they can see one another

so too have chapters like this where they are brought together in one place is refreshing and on vacation though work does insue it still is great to see them together and ther mind working like old times.

Kreshel... come on now when has Kreshal NOT had a mouth on her if you recall in the very FIRST story she was introduced calling janice a BITCH so comeon now it's in her personality.

Ah the shopping trip

That was suposed to be one of those WHat happens in Vegas type things and comeon now we KNow Michael and Jancie are spontanious (I was little inspired from Waitting for yous Sex scene twi chapters ago... sex in a inclosed space gotta love it) can you imagine if you know how they have securty camera's supose to be watching the dressing rooms what THAT would have looked like can you say Confidetiallt agreement.

I wanted the kids to take after there father I need each one of them to have some elment of Michael and Mix of Janice but isn't that what kids are. look at Michaels real kids, film acting prodicing these are all things Michael wanted to do and they are follwing there own goals and dreams by doing it now and I think it was important to share that in this story.

Ah Michaels Birthday....

Reviewer: Crazyme62 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2015 06:50 pm Title: TJ2 - The Lost Chapters - What Happens in Vegas - Pt1

Loved the chapter. Janices interview with Oprah was priceless. Janice gave right back to Oprah. Way to go Janice. 

Your interaction between Michael and Janice either their arguing or their love//sex scenes are one of my favourite  part of you chapter.

Cant wait for your next chapter.



Author's Response:

Yes, But what did you expect her to give her any different of a answer I mean Janice was waitting for oprah to slip up and think she owned it and Janice told her EXactly what she was. Janice don't play with people and when it comes her family like HELL she gonna let ANYTHING slide.

WHen I created the dinamic between Janice and Michael I wanted to create a relationship that drew you into them and more so that you felt they were drawn into one another that kind of draw that hurt if it 's present that electic energy. that type of relationship that the two people can't do without each other and you can feel how palpable that is they are each others perfect match

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Date: Jan 10, 2015 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 69 - TJ2 The Lost Chapters - Thanks to Africa

 Really nice chapter! I hope Janice sets back for a minute and re-thinks her properties and just how much she can handle.

Are you updating again soon?



Author's Response:

New update just for you hope to see you again soon... Yes Janice needs to sit back she has not really thought about the true damage it can cause if she doesn't take into account who and what industry she's dealing with she dig to deep in the wrong place then she really could be in big trouble

Cross your fingers that I get back within three weeks

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 06, 2015 05:15 pm Title: Prologue: Girls Night Out... I Can Feel You

Girrrrrrrl I had just finished the first story to this series. I know I'm late as hell! Ugh well I love your stories. And the facts you put at the end. Yes girl I read them facts. Learning somethin new about this man. Michael 101 lmaoooo



Author's Response:

Hello and Welcome to the story... sorry it took me so long to review been busy but Welcome to it hope you enjoy this has become a story that is loved to be read and reread by my fans and myself so you will love it stick around the rides getting bumpier still before we come to a flull on close.

Reviewer: MJluvr12many Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 18, 2014 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 69 - TJ2 The Lost Chapters - Thanks to Africa

I think she should take the job! She can compromise! MJ should understand..

Reviewer: MJluvr12many Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 18, 2014 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 69 - TJ2 The Lost Chapters - Thanks to Africa

I think she should take the job! She can compromise! MJ should understand..

Reviewer: MJluvr12many Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 18, 2014 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 69 - TJ2 The Lost Chapters - Thanks to Africa

I think she should take the job! She can compromise! MJ should understand..

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