[Report This]Date: Jan 25, 2014 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 20
Goddamnit Lisa!!! My hand just can't get to your face fast enough!!!
So now the tables have turned :3 Payback's a motherfucker ain't it, LMP? :))))
And may I repeat, THEY KISSED!!!!!!!!!!!
Can't wait for the next chapter!! :D
Author's Response:
I know right! I want to get my hands on her as well!
Yep, Lisa felt like shit when she found out! But nobody cares because she's cheating on Michael anyways! So she shouldn't be mad! At all!
Anyways, yeah, I'm still happy that they kissed too!! :3
Thanks for the review!! <333
[Report This]Date: Jan 25, 2014 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 20
Lisa needs to get slapped i can't stand her!!
Author's Response:
I know! She needs it real bad!! I can't stand her either!
Date: Jan 25, 2014 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 20
HAHAHAHA Michael called Lisa a bitch!!!!! That was funny. Lisa has no right to be mad, she's cheating on Michael and doing worse than what Michael did. MJ and Aj are too cute, they need to get together already; they are a bunch of goofballs. Please continue.
Author's Response:
See, Lisa got on Michael's nerves so what was he suppost to say!? XD But yeah, that was funny as hell! Michael was kind of shocked that he said that too! Hahahaha! X3
Yeah, MJ and AJ will be getting together soon! Because I can feel it! :D
And I will continue! <333
Date: Jan 25, 2014 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 20
Oh but Lisa should be worried. I have a great feeling this kiss will lead to something more ;) and I'll be happy when it does. I can't wait for her Elvis-looking ass to get that karma.
Author's Response:
Yeah. :D Michael and AJ are feeling something. Cause that kiss is making them think a lot about each other. In a new and very different way. :3
[Report This]Date: Jan 25, 2014 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 20
First of all, why is Lisa getting mad? She's cheating on Michael anyway! Michael deserves so much better than that! Then AJ called Dolph "Michael" aww shit! lol! Lisa makes me cringe! I can't stand her! Love it!
Author's Response:
I know right! She has no freakin' reason to be mad. :3 Michael sure does deserve a whole lot better!
And yeah, LOL! AJ messed up right there! XD That was funny as hell!
But yes, I really hate Lisa! It will never change. I'll hate her forever! :)
Thanks! <33
Date: Jan 13, 2014 07:12 pm Title: Characters
Layla kinda rubs me the wrong way, I get a bad vibe from her. I don't think she a true friend to AJ, but that's my opinion. She probably is a good friend, but something is off about her to me.
Author's Response:
Yeah, you have a point there. I guess Layla is a kind of friend that's like that. She cares about AJ though. She just likes to mess with her sometimes. Some friends are like that. :)
Date: Jan 13, 2014 07:06 pm Title: Characters
It's about damn time they kiss. I just wish Michael would divorce Liss already, uuugggghhhh!!!!! Sometimes it pisses me off when Michael is too nice in stories, he doesn't see people's cruelty sometimes. Anyway, this is a great story and I love it.
Author's Response:
I know right! Everyone's been waiting for them to kiss! :D
And yeah, it pisses me off too....
And thanks!! <333
Date: Jan 13, 2014 12:08 am Title: Characters
I don't know about you, but I'm ready to see Lisa get her fucking comeuppance already! She don't deserve Michael, AJ does! Love this story btw.
Author's Response:
You are sooooo right on that girl!
Lisa doesn't deserve him! At all! AJ deserves him 100%!
And thanks!! <3
[Report This]Date: Jan 12, 2014 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 19
Wow AJ and Michael kissed.........YAY!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
I know! :D I'm just as happy as you are!! <33
[Report This]Date: Jan 12, 2014 04:27 pm Title: Chapter 19
*Gasp* YES!!!!!!!!!!! FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!! I'm okay now. :D I love it girl!!!
Author's Response:
Yeah, finally!!
We've been waiting and waiting for it. XD
Thanks! <3
[Report This]Date: Jan 12, 2014 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 19
OMG OMG OMG THEY KISSED THEY KISSED THEY KISSED!!!!!!
I could give a fuck about Lisa. She's just.... La perra más malo en la historia de perras! (The most evil little bitch in the history of bitches!) Sorry, it's fun typing in Spanish lol XD
Did I mention AJ and Michael kissed?!?!
ITS ABOUT FUCKING TIME :DDD
This is aweeeesomeeeeee!!! :)
Author's Response:
Yeah! They finally kissed!!! XD YAY!!!!
And Lisa. Ugh! Fuck her!!
Let's just keep talking about Michael and AJ's kiss. :3
Anyways, I like your Spanish, girly! :D
And yes, you mentioned that!! XD I can just say that all day though!
THEY KISSED THEY KISSED THEY KISSED!!!!!!!
Okay, okay, okay... I'm calm. :3
Thanks for the review!! :)))
Date: Jan 12, 2014 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 19
Lisa isn't smart and damn sure ain't beautiful. Bitch looks like Elvis in a wig. Big chinned ho. Smh. I'm so over Michael's dumb ass and been over Lisa. If he won't believe AJ, he just deserves all the bullshit that is gonna happen to him. And I really hope AJ will beat Lisa's ass to a bloody pulp. I'm so sick of them.
Author's Response:
Mhmm. We all can't wait for AJ to hurt Lisa. :3
Yeah, Michael still needs to believe AJ. Because I'm still mad as hell about that.
LOL Elvis in a wig, Big chined ho. XD So true!
[Report This]Date: Jan 06, 2014 05:44 pm Title: Chapter 18
Michael know he wrong for that, why did he have to go do that when everything could've worked out fine. I guess it would not, because a story is not a story without conflict!!! Great chapter!!!!! Update soon luv:)
Author's Response:
You are sooooooo right! LOL
Michael is wrong for that, but like you said, a story is not a story without conflict. :D
And Thanks for reviewing! And I will soon! :)))
[Report This]Date: Jan 06, 2014 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 17
Had some review catchin up to do lol. I agree,Lisa sucks....I will keep saying it lol. Michael and AJ talking is extremely overdue and I hope they work it out!!!! On to the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Yeah, I hope they work it out too. :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 04, 2014 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 18
YAAAAAAAAYY Michael and AJ are friends again!!!!!!!! and i can't BELIEVE he didn't believe AJ what a shame..........
Author's Response:
Yep, I'm very glad they talked it out! :)
And yeah, I still can't believe he didn't believe her!
It is a shame...