[Report This]Date: Dec 01, 2015 03:18 am Title: Please Read!
yes I would love to see omer and blanket as twins in the story
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2013 04:27 am Title: Chapter 37: Tension Released part 1
Kiss away, kiss away シ
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2013 04:24 am Title: Chapter 35: Tension
I feel your pain because I'm pretty sure I would been trying to keep my composure to but knowing me, my ass would have melted!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2013 03:47 am Title: Chapter 31: Sexual Reactions
I forgot to rate the previous chapter but 10!! I really like this chapter and I like the fact that its long..
Author's Response: Awwh thanks so much! :) Glad you like the chapter. Even though each chapter may be short, I wanted to have alot of chapters to try and make up for it..
Date: Dec 06, 2013 03:40 am Title: Chapter 29: Movie Talk
I freaking LOVE Skittles!! And Licorice, and Kit-Kats!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2013 03:30 am Title: Chapter 25: Attraction part 1
Man ooh man!! Would have LOVED to see that!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2013 03:17 am Title: Chapter 23: Planning part 3
Michael is just like a big kid at heart.. He would MOST DEFINITLEY love that and heck so would I!!
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2013 03:09 am Title: Chapter 20: Company
Like a lil date and blance the POVs out.. That way we know both of their thoughts and feelings towards each other and things..
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2013 03:06 am Title: Chapter 19: Honesty with Holding Hands
Awwwhz!! They so kute ♥
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2013 03:04 am Title: Chapter 17: Giving Tree
YES!!!! Tom boy!!! My type of girl :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2013 03:02 am Title: Chapter 16: The Tour of Neverland
Hecks yea!!! I know I would have been going on some rides on the way back..
Author's Response: sorry got cut short in last response. But yes, very sorry that the chapters can't be any longer. But I'm hoping to get a tablet/ipad or a new laptop hopefully soon. This is why I haven't updated anything, because I'd prefer to have the chapters in longer detai. So when I do get another laptop I'm gonna rewrite this story and try and make it 100x better :) Sorry this was long, just wanted to let you know properly. Thanx for your interst :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 06, 2013 02:52 am Title: Chapter 9: Atmosphere
heyy.. really like your story.. was just wondering?? why are your chapters so short?? would be better if your chapters were kindah long and went into detail :)
Author's Response: Hi, so sorry haven't responded. Just got back on. In answer to your question, well I would LOVE to write long chapters with loads more detail but earlier last year my laptop had way too many viruses and we got rid of it. Sadly I was thinking of writing this story but only got motivated to write it after my laptop was gone. Reason why the chapters are so very short is because when I write I'm using my phone (which is an old kinda model) and it only allows around 100 words per chapter...
Date: Oct 01, 2013 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 19: Honesty with Holding Hands
awww yay she said yes
Date: Oct 01, 2013 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 64: Will She?
yay
Date: Oct 01, 2013 05:20 pm Title: Chapter 63: Speech
here it comes