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Reviewer: BestOfJoy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2013 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 10- She's Here!!!!

Beautiful

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You should explain being a parent for both of them and maybe just maybe Lisa could come back and start some drama.



Author's Response:

You just give me another good Idea!!!! :) :) :) XD

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2013 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 10- She's Here!!!!

Awwwwwwww

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2013 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 7- New Things Happen

Damn they can't get along they sound depressed as shit. Michael should've wrapped it up

Reviewer: BestOfJoy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 24, 2013 11:34 am Title: Chapter 7- New Things Happen

IM loving it cant wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: iam_music Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2013 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 6- How Could You?

Jerrica should get preggers. Lol. That was wrong though. I hop Michael genuinely cares for Jerrica and not just using her for sex. Him and Lisa need to divorce. And quite frankly, I don't think Michael needs to know about Jerrica's boyfriend since he's not single himself. 

Reviewer: nene147 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2013 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 5- We Got Caught(Part Two)

Aww for the first time ever I feel sorry for Lisa 



Author's Response:

:O  you feel sorry!?!?! Well you know I do too! :/ well then!

Reviewer: BestOfJoy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2013 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 5- We Got Caught(Part Two)

Ha ha that's what she get...And they don't see nothing wrong with a little bump and grind so why cry....lol

Im loving it



Author's Response:

Hehehe yeaaa thanks!

Reviewer: CrazyForMikezilla Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 23, 2013 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 5- We Got Caught(Part Two)

Uhh ooohyh they got caught :0



Author's Response:

lol just wait for what's coming up next ;) 

Reviewer: MJ4EVER1980 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Aug 22, 2013 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 4- We Got Cought

Yes More more!!

Reviewer: BestOfJoy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 22, 2013 04:13 pm Title: Chapter 4- We Got Cought

I do I Do and I DOOOOOO!!!!!

LOL

Reviewer: BestOfJoy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 22, 2013 11:09 am Title: Chapter 1- The HIStory teaser

Hey I like this so far and I didn't review I say Mike and you have feelings for eachother but how can yall keep it from Lisa bing bing bing that's the problem I wont be surprise if yall made love and Lisa is in the house. LOL Im soomething else.

Just something I want to say......

Ba Da Ba Ba Ba

Im Loving It...

Keep Going



Author's Response:

Ahhhhh thank you!!! You just give me an idea!!!!!! Thank you thank you thank you!!!!!

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