Reviewer: Sensual Disguise Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 30, 2013 03:17 am Title: Chapter 1

OH YEAH!

I got so caught up in the mind-blowingness of the story that I forgot to mention how much I love the summary. Very nice, BB!

Also, LMFAO @ you really putting the video up! ILY SFM! <3

Author's Response:

Thanks BB - it was rather UNFY putting it together. 

Reviewer: MichaelsBillieJean1981 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 29, 2013 05:21 pm Title: Chapter 17

This story is getting more and more fascinating by the minute! So, Gracie is practically called into two layers of dream worlds and so is Michael. They are now both getting an outlook on their future and may get the chance to change the course of events again! Hard to know, what's real and what isn't anymore. Kinda reminds me of Matrix! They'll have a problem figuring out what is what. They gotta find each other and sooner, creating another reality for both of them, a life together. There's only one thing I don't quite get: How can younger Gracie not know Michael Jackson? Or are they again in two different timezones, meaning Michael is still a kid or not even born? Go on, girl! Loving it! :-)

Author's Response:

LOL all good questions. Here's what's going on:

You just met real Michael and Gracie (I promise I'm not going to make them part of another two peoples' subconsious too, as that's just getting silly). They are both living in the present, and are both the same age. 

Real Michael is dreaming of Gracie (from Part 1), but doesn't have access to her dreams. So he's dreaming of a woman who has her own independent dream life, that he can't access. Recently he's also witnessed himself in his dreams (older Michael from part 1).

Real Gracie is dreaming of Bad era Michael and herself, just like part 1 Gracie was. But she can't access the other half of the puzzle, which real Michael has. 

So they have to come together (no pun intended), and enter the same dream together. And then, they could find each other in real life. Or, find another way to track each other down.

Real Michael can also go back to sleep and continue the last chapter of part 1 for us, which he'll do as soon as he's stopped lying in bed touching himself, LOL. 

 

Reviewer: Sensual Disguise Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 28, 2013 07:54 am Title: Chapter 16

"Mark, this is not the time to listen to Bob Marley. Please"

LMFAO! Mark, ILY SFM!

 

BB! I just heaved the biggest sigh of relief. All my tension released as soon as she was in his arms. It has been one hell of ride so far. My emotions are frayed.

Author's Response:

Sorry BB - I kind of feel like I've pulled you along in a ride in an RV smuggling drugs from Mexico or something. But glad you've enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: Annie Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2013 06:46 pm Title: Chapter 16

ME =

Where is Dave? He was here at the end of the last chapter? Was it her dreaming again?

I'm glad Mark is here for Gracie because she was almost going crazy and for real this time! That must so confusing for him! But I'm glad he understood and let her go. But he is right, she still needs help. She needs to talk to Michael and ask him to tell her everything because she is confused and I am confused too lol. At least he is here, he is waiting for her and they will be together again and this time for real! I can't wait to read the next chapter.

This story is getting better and better.

Author's Response:

Thanks for another lovely review :) I love your GIFS - they always make me laugh. 

Gracie was hallucinating about Dave. She threw all her pills down the toilet, and one of the potencial risks of stopping Effexor like that is hallucinations! So she starts to worry the whole thing has been a hallucination until she gets on the plane. Phew!

Reviewer: mjfan1978 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Aug 27, 2013 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 1

Awesome!!! I am for sure looking forward to reading it :D  Thank you <3

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2013 02:07 pm Title: Chapter 15

Well, crap...Mark, you better hurry your ass up! I've been waiting for this reunion long enough and Dave better not ruin it!! >;(

Author's Response:

Have faith! :)

I know I'm really putting her through the wringer...

Reviewer: Sensual Disguise Signed [Report This]
Date: Aug 26, 2013 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 14

OMG OMG OMG OMG

YES YES YES YES

Your foreshadowing is impeccable,  BB! Everything is beginning to come full circle.

I'm dying to know the contents of those letters. What is she going to do with the address? Holy shiznit! The fate of reality itself lies in the balance. I loved the scene of her hearing his latest single on the radio. My heart pounded against my chest at the thought of it.

"I'm a journalist. Don't hurt me." Gracie, you should have knocked his head clean off with that shovel.

I'd also like to say that I've taken Zoloft for the last for years. It's the only thing that helped resume my life, but antidepressants can definitely fuck with your memory at times.

Author's Response:

Hey thanks BB!

Yeah I've had some 'fun' times with Effexor, hence the reference. Memory and hallucinations. Then I switched, and came off them completely.