Date: Dec 03, 2013 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 40
Ha! Of course Michael would win the arcade games. He probably thought he was the "Michael Jordan of arcade games" in real life too!!! I hope Michael is able to show Anouk all the good that's out in the world. She needs more support than what she has right now. Can't wait for more! Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Support and a reason to fight for. She's a fighter, an activist, remember? She lives for fighting for a good cause...
Date: Nov 15, 2013 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nooki has to get better! Michael would bend over backwards to make sure she's ok. I hope Lisa gets what she deserves!! How awful! Can't wait to read more! Great chapter as always!
Date: Nov 04, 2013 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 38
Fuck I hate that bitch so much... >:(
I dont know how anyone can be so heartless, even for Lisa... That was cruel.
I hope Anouk is alright... Although I dont see how she will ever really be the same. :'(
Author's Response:
Yest, it's true, nothing will be the same...Anouk will never see the world and people with the same eyes again...
Date: Nov 03, 2013 12:05 pm Title: Chapter 38
Oh no...trust fucking Lisa and her drunken rantings! Surely Anouk won't shut Michael out, not after all they've been through. Please don't let them have a wedge netween them...there's so much for them still to learn and enjoy about each other, the future is so bright for them!
Damn Lisa...I never liked her in RL anyway, not after she sold Michael out. He didn't deserve that. Oh no. I'm all sad now...
Date: Nov 02, 2013 02:36 pm Title: Chapter 38
great update! Glad you're back!
I don't know for sure, hope she's not gonna shut him out. She needs him. Maybe they should go away for a while...
Date: Nov 02, 2013 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 38
Lisa is such a bitch in this story! Pardon my French. I really hope Anouk doesn't put her walls up. She's made so much progress with Michael and she's seemed happier too with her defenses down with him. I hope Nooki is alright!!! I love her and Michael together and I don't want her to die! Great chapter as always!!!
Date: Oct 26, 2013 09:21 am Title: Chapter 37
UUUUUGHGHHHH FREAKIN BITCH SHOWS UP EVERYWHERE !!! X(
I read this chapter while listening to the corresponding song. ;)
Author's Response:
She did chase after Michael 3-4 years after the divorce for real...Some people only learn what they got when it's gone.
Date: Oct 26, 2013 06:39 am Title: Chapter 1
Another amazing chapter!!! I loved how Michael was encouraging Nooki to mooch of him. If it were me I wouldn't say no!!! :) As much as I liked Lisa Marie and Michael in real life when they were married I really don't like Lisa in this story. She just needs to stay away from Michael if she knows what's good for her. Though I did squee at the idea of Michael and Nooki getting more serious...marriage maybe!!! YAYY!!! Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Anouk needs to learn to adapt to a new kind of jungle - Michael's world. But she's a strong and smart girl, so we'll all going to see what happens next...
Date: Oct 22, 2013 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 36
"Soon, the world would try to break us apart..."
I didnt like this part....ohh gosh...
Thank you!
Author's Response:
Many people won't like to see Anouk in Michael's life...and she is also very ill, no matter how much she tries to downplay it...
Date: Oct 15, 2013 03:51 am Title: Chapter 36
Ohhh do I sense some forshadowing of dark times... :( thatssss never good.
Whenever theres a new chapter for this one my whole faces just lights up, I LOVE THISSS
Author's Response:
I'm not giving anything out yet, but some hint of what's to come will be in next chapter....
Date: Oct 14, 2013 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 36
I loved this chapter. I can just imagine Michael practicing on oranges...so adorable. I loved how you were able to capture his fun and innocence with the water fight though I am kinda sad he lost the fight since MJ called himself "the Michael Jordan of water balloon fights"! I can't wait to read the rest of the story! Hopefully the drama stays away...bad drama leave Nooki and Michael alone!
Date: Oct 14, 2013 03:22 am Title: Chapter 36
I feel like I've been waiting ages for an update haha. Glad to see this story back, these two are an amazing couple x
Author's Response:
I will try to update sooner, it all depends on my workload....
Date: Sep 28, 2013 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 35
OH MY GOD I AM ACTUALLY LITERALLY TRULY SOBBING THAT WAS SO DAMN BEAUTFUL waaaaaaaaa 😭😖
Amaziinggg!!!!
Date: Sep 27, 2013 02:49 am Title: Chapter 35
I don't think I drew a breath that entire chapter..! Feeling a bit woozy now...
Date: Sep 15, 2013 05:54 am Title: Chapter 34
Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!! please, don't let her do something she could regret!!!!!!!!!