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Reviewer: melissmjj1 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jun 28, 2013 09:08 am Title: Epilogue

well despite i didn't like the ending, this story was so good and it realle caught me!!

congratulations, keep writting more stories and thank you for sharing this one :)

Reviewer: glitterpix Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 28, 2013 06:41 am Title: Prologue: At the end of her Rope

tht was great :D

Reviewer: tiyacts11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 28, 2013 05:52 am Title: Epilogue

Love happy endings like this!!! 

Reviewer: kingofpoplover4ever10 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 28, 2013 05:39 am Title: Epilogue

AWWWWWWWWW!!! :3 its sooo cute and sweet but so sad and depressing at the same time... I love it!!

Reviewer: Suzzanna Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 27, 2013 10:55 am Title: Chapter 24: You Ain't Seen Nothing Yet

Wow .... holy crap 

Reviewer: melissmjj1 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jun 27, 2013 09:47 am Title: Chapter 24: You Ain't Seen Nothing Yet

u.u

i can't believe Lisa died and Michael is going to be with Tatiana...

No, i don't like this ending honestly! 

Reviewer: glitterpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 27, 2013 07:12 am Title: Chapter 24: You Ain't Seen Nothing Yet

omg more this is the best story omggggggggggggg 

Reviewer: kingofpoplover4ever10 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 27, 2013 05:55 am Title: Chapter 24: You Ain't Seen Nothing Yet

i'm still can't believe Lisa killed herself. T^T so sad!! Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Yeah well did no one paid attentio n to the caption catigory written in bright pink letters at the bottom SUICIDE did they everyone seemed shocked but it was written there when the story started someone was going to kill themselves it just happened to be her

Reviewer: kingofpoplover4ever10 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 27, 2013 05:54 am Title: Chapter 24: You Ain't Seen Nothing Yet

i'm still can't believe Lisa killed herself. T^T so sad!! Can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: CrazyForMikezilla Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 26, 2013 03:18 pm Title: Chapter 23: Last Rights

Omg please dont tell me died :( Nooooo! GOD IM SO PISSED! Its just fucking wrong the fact that Michael thinks its lisa's fault the the twins passed away, Like honestly really? It was an accident & now he has the fucking nerve to scream at her knowing shes just as fucking sad also. She should have been the fucking first one at that funeral. Lisa was the mother not tatiana. so i dont know why her bony ass was there. I just hope michael realises soon that if he looses lisa it will be the biggest mistake. well, it my be too fucking late now! & Janet .. ughhh! Mind yo own goddamn buisness !! Nobody told u to start talking. I know she believes lisa might have done it just to get back with Michael. Which is so false tbh.



Author's Response:

I Know you hate me but I saw this happening WAY before I wrote it... but Lisa get s the last word in the NEXT chapter, in michaels defence after everything she did wiith the abortion and everything the first thought went there that maybe she did it to say one last fuck you to him. that where his pain and anger came from she didn't go because she didn;t wand the family looking at her funny she knew she would get her moment to see them at another time, Tatiana was ther FOR HIM no other reason, he will feel pain behind the loss, Janet is being a suportive and defesive sister shes one to defend her siblings and her and Michael are tight so she sticking up for her brother and shes hurt by Lisa too afte finding out she did that to him was betray there friendship to hurt her brother like that. yeah they do But the mother felt simpathy because she got where lisa was coming from she is the Only one not emotionally effected to be able to think clear and she didn't say anything

Reviewer: Suzzanna Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 26, 2013 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 23: Last Rights

Did Lisa die ?



Author's Response:

Yes, but read the next chapter she has her last words 

Reviewer: melissmjj1 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jun 26, 2013 10:48 am Title: Chapter 23: Last Rights

did she died???

o.o

nooooo please i don't want Michael to be with Tatiana!!

he and Lisa are the prettiest, hottest couple ever

-.- 



Author's Response:

Not everyone was going to be happy with the end to this story sorry it how i saw it happeniing

Reviewer: tiyacts11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 26, 2013 09:45 am Title: Chapter 23: Last Rights

I think that Liz might be right about what she said to Tatiana. Wow the Jackson's were kind of harsh on Lisa at the twins funeral like she is their mother why treat her like that since it wasn't her fault??!!!



Author's Response:

they were outsiders looking in and michael was speaking from his pain what exactly about what she said to tati she said a few things

Reviewer: Suzzanna Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2013 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 22: Unthinkable

Why this is so sad why why why 

Reviewer: tiyacts11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 25, 2013 07:24 am Title: Chapter 22: Unthinkable

OH MY GOD!!  What in the world just happened????? 



Author's Response:

The babies died i knw you hate me and michael and Lisa seeing each other after everyone was high strung

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