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Reviewer: Kay Jackson Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04, 2016 10:47 pm Title: Chapter 37 - not a chapter

I enjoyed reading your story. Please continue writing more chapters as soon as you can.:)

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Date: May 04, 2016 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 35

He is.. but, he also needs to tell her about Kenny and Richard.

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Date: May 04, 2016 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 34

GGood job!

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Date: May 04, 2016 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 33

Hope that Michael's jealousy doesn't get the best of him. And that Jelly and Ken don't appear too affectionate.

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Date: May 04, 2016 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 32

Now he needs to protect her with unlimited amount of security.I thinkthat michael really has nothing to be jealous about.

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Date: May 04, 2016 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 31

I am happy that Michael was able to get Jelly and she was not hurt any worse.

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Date: May 04, 2016 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 30

It should be self-defense. She should get out on bail.Then get a chance to tell her side of the story. He should  Prince should be charged with kidnapping,..attempted murder, and torture.

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Date: May 04, 2016 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 28

There is always someone who talks or tells to much about someone elses past. And you are trying to tell them to stop talking about it, and they never get the message that you want them to just shut up.

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Date: May 04, 2016 09:49 am Title: Chapter 27

I hope that it will not break them up.

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Date: May 04, 2016 09:26 am Title: Chapter 26

I think that jelly will leave and prince will kidnap her.

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Date: May 04, 2016 03:03 am Title: Chapter 25

Its a shame now Jelly can't work there. But now, she will be in danger when she finds a job somewhere else.

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Date: May 04, 2016 02:15 am Title: Chapter 24

She will think everything, and she will try to break up with him.

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Date: May 03, 2016 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 23

I think that they are in love with each other.

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Date: May 03, 2016 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 22

I think that he will.

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Date: May 03, 2016 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 21

If he does he may lose her forever.

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