[Report This]Date: May 02, 2013 03:51 pm Title: Chapter 21
Ummm....I think this would be the time when she took if running like a maniac away from him or well atleast try lol.
Author's Response: idk if she'll run or not lol she will probably be frozed in her tracks from there knowing her. XD & thanks! (:
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2013 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 21
The Marc Jacobs and the dollar store joke killed me....lmao!...uh oh...Gabby slapped him finally!
Author's Response: Ikr i was laughing at this too! & ikr finally Gab slaps him let's just hope it dnt get real ugly here!
&thanks! (:
Date: May 02, 2013 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 21
Gabby better stop being a punk ass bitch. Right this minute. She needs to cuss his ass the fuck out and tell him to get out of her house. That's the problem now. Nobody puts this damn fool in his place, and I'll be damned if he just disrespects her like that and she acts like it's ok. NO. She better go off on him and throw him out. He was dead wrong and is still dead wrong. He talked to her like she was shit, pulled a gun on her AND threw her out? Gabby lost her damn mind. I would've slapped the fuck outta him and not a single fuck would be given about his feelings. No apologies, no remorse, NOTHING. Gabby is softer than baby thighs. Smh. She's a punk and weak if she lets him get away with this.
Author's Response: Ikr it's time 4 Gab to be the real man i mean women in this LOL She gotta be tough as nails with Michael cause he is a hardcore cop. She about to get into something serious with him now. It could get worse if Michael continues to be an ass & Gab continue to be a punk. Well Gab's gonna have to learn to stand her grounds now & not take this bs from him. & your right she shouldn't feel bad 4 slapping him, Michael deserved it from being such as to her. Will see how this all turns out! & Thanks (:
Date: May 02, 2013 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 21
You know i agree with her on this one. Michael totally deserved that slap! For all the pain he caused her & he jut left her out in the middle of nowhere! Gotdamn mike have some damn sense. This nigga better not lay a damn hand on her!! Pls update sooon gurrrlll!!!
Author's Response: Yes his ass did deserve to get slapped 4 doing that to her. He just can't get away with it! Ikr & better not hit eiter or else he could deffo lose her permitly. Michael is digging hiself deeper in the hole if he dnt stop. But let's hope Gab can stand up to him. &thanks! <3
Date: May 02, 2013 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 21
OMG OMG OMG OMG PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
Author's Response: I sure will & thanks! (:
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2013 11:11 am Title: Chapter 20 Just wanted to share this xD
She's gorgeous! :D
And YAY 200th review!
EVERYBODY DANCE NAOW.
Hehee XD
Author's Response: Yay! Lol thanks girly! <3 & i love the gif's LOOL I'm still learning how to use those i can't wait to start using them. XD
[Report This]Date: May 02, 2013 11:00 am Title: Chapter 19
I love how Michael got scared that he couldnt find her. Good; he's the one who was an ass so it's great he's worried. ;) I'm glad to know she's safe though. :))
Great chapter Darling. Can't for fo' more :3 , <33
Author's Response: Yep that's what he gets for being an ass to her. Lol If something really bad had happened to her it would of been all his fault. XD & thanks girly! <3
[Report This]Date: May 01, 2013 04:09 pm Title: Chapter 20 Just wanted to share this xD
She is so purty! Lol
Continue!
Author's Response: yea ikr she is! & yep new chapter is coming!
[Report This]Date: Apr 30, 2013 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 20 Just wanted to share this xD
I was excited for a min.. until i found out this wasn't an update. Lol
Ah this is cool though and she is really pretty though and taken by the singer Migual, but i like how she is taken by Michael in this!!! And it this sort of reminds me of a Michael and Gabby mission you got a good eye girl. Now please update soon tnx.
Author's Response:
Aw dnt worry I got a new chapter 4 tmorw LOL Yeah & i agree she does look great with Michael! & yes i think it was similar to there stake out. XD & again don't worry an update is coming! <3
Date: Apr 30, 2013 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 20 Just wanted to share this xD
I know who she is. She's pretty. And that's Miguel's woman. Lol
Author's Response: Yep she is LOL Mr. Adorns Gf xD
[Report This]Date: Apr 30, 2013 09:59 pm Title: Chapter 20 Just wanted to share this xD
I luv how Gabby looks like....Michael and Gabby looks so good together.
Author's Response: Ikr they do!
Date: Apr 30, 2013 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 19
Lol, look who's sorry. Update soon plz ma'am!
Author's Response: Ikr now he feels shitty! XD & thanks! More is coming!
Date: Apr 30, 2013 02:54 am Title: Chapter 19
good girl now is time to Michael be so wrried about her
Author's Response: Exactually! & thanks!
Date: Apr 29, 2013 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 19
it's so sweet how Michael was freaking out over not finding gabby, he really does care!! OMG I can imagine Michael pointing his gun at anyone who passes by his car "YOU SEEN MY GIRLFRIEND?!", threatening to kill teens, gangsters,old ladies, stray cats, trees , WHOEVER might have seen her! Haha but if gabby had picked up her phone he wouldn't have gone in the first place! Lol
Author's Response: It was sweet but that what he gets 4 doing that to him & his stupid temper. Hahahahaha him shooting all those ppl's epic! I could see that to. I wouldn't put it pass him cause he's a crazy ass cop that bends the rules. That's true be wouldn't of went 4 her if she picked up the phone. So it was ment to happen that way. It was ment for him go search 4 her. He needs to grow up & learn that you dnt treat women like that either. Boy he has a lot of learning to do. Mama k didn't teach him to be that way. He took after his father being a true asshol. Lol Oh well will see what happens between these two lovebirds. XD & thanks! <3
[Report This]Date: Apr 29, 2013 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 19
Oh so now his dumb butt ass is worried and looking for her?? Michael just go do what you do best patrol and beat people's asses. Cause Gabby don't wanna be bothered with you. I sure as hell wouldn't either. He better get on his damn knees in and say sorry to her Michael better bow down to Gabby. If he makes a stupid ass excuse on why he did that... then im done with him!
More soon please.
Author's Response: Ooh yes he better bow down to her deffo!
But Michael sometimes is a hard guy to bargin with.
He'll probably get on his knees just to shut her up.
Michael does certain things for the women he love just to shut them up. Lol
Let's hope he doesn't come up with an excuse if so then he is deffo stupid then.
I feel the more he drinks & smokes it makes him dumb by the minute!
& thanks! <3