Date: Apr 29, 2013 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 19
That's what you get for being a very bad boy Michael
Author's Response: LOL ikr! & thanks! <3
Date: Apr 29, 2013 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 19
Good! He needs to feel guilty with his crazy, selfish, punk ass! Smh she did not deserve to be treated like that. Period. That was wrong as hell and I really hope Gabby teaches his ass a lesson AND cuss his ass out. He needs to learn that he cannot treat a woman like that. Period. She needs to really let his ass have it dude.
Author's Response: Yeah finally he regrets but he not gonna get it easy once he comes face to face with Gab. He is gonna have to apologize to her & not any old apology he gonna have work his way up with this. Cause Gab is sensitive to. She may go hard at time but she still hurts easily & i wouldn't put it past her 2 go off on him which I believe she will once Michael really pushes her bottons. & thanks! <3
[Report This]Date: Apr 29, 2013 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 19
I wanted to get in the story and slap real sense to Michael....anything cld have happened to Gabby...he was very bipolar...luvin her one min then using her and leaving her the next...he forced his love on her...I swear the following Michaels' should sit together and get some theraphy (the bad cop, stuck, heist, complete opposite, beauty in a beast, dark insolent eyes) there!....love the chapter....thanks!
Author's Response: Exactually Michael needs a ass whoopin to along with your slap across his cheek!
He is bipolar but he's normal in his own ways. He jut issues & a temper problem.
He seems as if he could be pyscho sometimes but he's not.
Michael's just idk how to explain his silly personality. LOL
YES all those stories you metioned with all those Michael's do need counciling is so true but they all r so good tho.
& are you serious? Yeah right Bad cop Michael will think he's to good for theraphy LOL
You'll have to drag him there then. XD & thanks girly! <3
Date: Apr 29, 2013 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 19
awh shieeet.....
Author's Response: Yep! LOL & thanks! <3
Date: Apr 29, 2013 07:17 pm Title: Chapter 19
Mike kind of did fucked up for leaving her stranded. I mean, yes she could have gotten raped or even kidnapped! I have to agree with michaelfan90! I love how ur updating the verge and i cant wait for the next part!!! Anywaysssss, michael has a lot of apologizing to do.
Author's Response: He fucked up big time & he think she's just gonna run right back into his arms. He better think again. Gab is really hurting from this, i would of hurt to if my throw me out the car in middle of nowhere. It was messed up anything could of happened to her. Never throw caution to the wind. & it uncalled for. Yea! I'm honestly having so much fun with the verge & this story. I can't never stop writing them. I'm constantly inspired so much to write these two even more then the rest of my stories. it's just fun LOL & thanks so much for enjoying! <3
[Report This]Date: Apr 29, 2013 06:51 pm Title: Chapter 19
this was great. i wrote you on yahoo, but i guess you didn't get my message, you can ignore it now lol. the verge and everything is just perfect. you are doing a great job hun. i get so excited when i see that you updated your stories. please update soon. oh and i love how you are frequently updating the verge. i hope you do this story the same way.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed this! & darn i missed you on Yahoo to. But I'm sure i'll catch you on one of these days lol Awww im glad that you apprecaite my stories girl! I do really try. It's not all that great to me tho but atleast I do put some effort into it. But your appreciation towards my work means so much to me. Everytime i wanna quit I change my mind once i think about you & Jasia & a few others that likes my stuff. I appreciate anything little or bit. It counts no matter how little it is. & yeah I've been doing chapters on my days off ahead of time. That's how i been frequently updating like this. I've been having so much writing these stories! Yes i wanna do more frequent updates for this to ima probably write more chapters of this on my day off along with the verge & probably one of my other stories aswell. Well im glad you, & a few others r having fun with me too it warms my heart up! (: thanks girly! <3
Date: Apr 26, 2013 06:40 pm Title: Chapter 18
I'm sorry but she needs to be cussing him the FUCK out! Ain't no way I would let that slide. He completely disrespected her, beyond belief. She needs to go off on his ass and let him know some things. Done lost his rabbit ass mind.
Author's Response: LOL Michael did lose his mind acting like that. He was being such a rude ass to her. He needs to trust her & stop being mean & bipolar to her. He needs to learn & accept the word NO He should know better that marriage is to early for them but he wanna see it his way all cause he still can't trust her. Some nerves he have. & heck yeah! Gab gonna need to stand up to Michael rather he likes it are not. She should get a gun & hold it against his head & threaten him so he could knw how it feels. She needs to be more stronger with him. She is just to nice to him & he is walking all over her. Michael needs to get his shit straight. & thanks for reviewing!
Date: Apr 26, 2013 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 18
my God Michael is something else noe i would teach him a lesson i know Gab is a very good person but i would't want to help him anymore
Author's Response: He needs to get taught a lesson & grow up to. & he needs to learn how to trust her. Hopefully he learn soon. &thanks!
[Report This]Date: Apr 26, 2013 05:43 am Title: Chapter 18
MICHAEL! SMDH
He really shouldnt have got so angry like that. Gabby is right; the only reason Michael is rushing her into this marriage is because he's insecure and feels like he can't trust her unless she's commited to him. He needs to learn she'd stick by him regardless of a ring. Its too soon! They need to give it time in my opinion.
I hate how Michael has said they can become fuck buddies :( Just when they were getting somewhere!
I love dis storay ;3
I can't wait for more PYT ;D , <33
Author's Response: I totally agree with you on that gabby loves him rather he puts a ring on it or not. He needs to learn how to trust her. He shouldn't act like an ass like that towards her. He still needs to grow up sometimes. & he needs to put more trust into her. I dnt like it either on how he says fuck buddie like gees ouch that hurts. He was being cold towards her. Hopefully he'll come to his senses & realise what he did. & thanks girly! <3 <3 (:
Date: Apr 26, 2013 04:22 am Title: Chapter 18
See y'all Michael has effin problems, real talk cuz all if dat ish was juss UNNECESSARY & UNCALLED FOR. I feel like cryin fa ha, he ain't gone realize wat he had til it gone!
Author's Response: Preach! & thanks girl!
[Report This]Date: Apr 26, 2013 02:32 am Title: Chapter 18
come on Michael, I can't believe you did that to gabby!!
Author's Response: Ikr he needs to come to his senses & hopefully he will. & thanks! <3
[Report This]Date: Apr 25, 2013 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 18
I just caught up and wow! Awesome updates. Your your doing a good job on this! Idk who to side on honestly. Lol i mean Michael is wrong for doing that to Gabby. And maybe Gabby should at least think the marriage thing through first. They both need to just kiss and make up lol and how dare for Michael to bring the ex up? Sheesh. Ok i just want these two to make up some how please pretty please lol i love the humor that's going on between them. But it got real this time. Any way please continue when you can. :)
Author's Response: But gab has a point about it being to soon for marriage. I mean yeah she could of just gone along with it & married him but still she would of lied to him. & for what? For him to get mad once he find out she lied to him about not really wanted to get married yet. It was better that she told him the truth rather he likes it or not. Michael has to learn how to trust her & stop being so insecure about there relationship. She really loves him & wants to get married to. It's just that it's to soon & she wants him realise & compermise with her. & I'm sure they'll make up soon! Hopefully lol &thanks so much! <3
[Report This]Date: Apr 25, 2013 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 18
Gabby has a point in not marrying him yet but it doesn't mean she does not love her. Michael does love her for real. He revealed his true feelings. I felt for him when he cried. But he was being an ass leaving Gabby in the middle of nowhere. I hope nothing wrong or scary will happen to her or else it would be Michaels fault and he will regret it. Michael is crazy sometimes....luc the update...thanks!
Author's Response: Yes he will regret if something happens to Gabby, but hopefully she gets home safely.
Who knws maybe Michael will get a change of heart & go back in get her ;)
I hope he does that tho. Ikr he is crazy half the time lol!
&thanks a lot! <3
[Report This]Date: Apr 23, 2013 02:43 am Title: Chapter 17
LOL The way Michael kept shouting down the earplug hahaha
Gosh I really feel for Trinity... You never think of that side when you think of hoes, how their life ended up like that. We are all so quick to judge, its horrible how life sometimes leads you to these dark places. :S
" Not all the money in the world force her to fuck a sweaty trucker guy with a Santa clause looking beard. " Hahahaha I couldnt stop laughing :')
Michael sure is getting serious, bringing marriage up so soon! I think Gabby should tell him how she feels... If he gets mad, then she KNOWS its too soon because he needs to control his anger.
I'm loving this Honey. I can't wait for more. XD , <33
Author's Response: Ikr he about to make Gabby go deaf. LOL & yeah i use 2 watch this show on HBO about prositutes. & they would explain on how they got into it. A lot of them had sad stories. Lmao yep not all the money$ in the world. Ikr Michael should talk to her about it first cause Gabby has a right voice her opinion about this t. & she should tell him to give her sometime first before tieing the knot. & as for Michael's anger that's just a tough task for him. He has emotional temper problem. He comes off as pyscho but really he is a nice guy if u dig deep inside his heart. He just wants to be in love again & never cheated on. But your right he is bringing up the marriage to soon. Like slow down buddy! LOL & thanks girly! <3
[Report This]Date: Apr 23, 2013 02:37 am Title: Chapter 16
AWWWWW :')
Finally he told her he loves her.
This was just so cute omfg. I love how Michael shared his feelings with her... And he gave her some damn good sex before the mission ;D
Way to calm her nerves! Hahaha
Love, love, loved it Sweetie XD
I love Michael and Gabby as a couple. , <33
Author's Response: Yep he sure did! & sealed the deal with her along with some nice steamy lovemaking. Lol Ikr me too there cute as a couple & cray together to. XD I lovethe gif to! He is just to hot in that damn bad era! I love all his era's but this one is just omg! & thanks girly 4 enjoying this! <3 <3