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Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 02, 2013 01:35 am Title: Chapter 3

Wow I would never thought that Michael will be so tough lol. He was so brave to help this kid like this.

So Tom is Logan's brother? Very interesting, especially with the fact that Michael helped him. It could make a good point for him.

But why Tom hate his brother? Because he's gay, because he's maybe tougher that him?Let's see in the next chapter.

I'm happy you used Tom Kaulitz as I used to be a big fan of Tokio Hotel.Tom was so cute when he was with those dreadlocks and this style.



Author's Response:

Lol! He's a loser at school, but that doesn't mean he doesn't have guts XD

Yes, Tom's reasoning towards his hatred for Logan will be revealed in the following chapter :P

Haha! I couldn't not use him! He was adorable and he had that tough guy look I was looking for! I still love Tokio Hotel lol! So I just had to, and I figured since I used Bill in one story it wouldn't be fair to only use one Kaulitz twin, so I put Tom in here XD

Reviewer: ILoveMJ777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2013 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 3

OH WOW THAT WAS GREAT!!! I LOVE THIS STORY PLEASE CONTINUE.:):):)

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Author's Response:

Haha thank you! I will :)

Reviewer: Pytinhercloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2013 02:15 pm Title: Chapter 3

Whoa. Tuff Mikey ;) (doin it, and doin it, and doin it well! ;D)

Omg its him!!!! His brother?!?! Ahhhhhh!!!!

omg idk why but when michael asked "do u know janet jackson?" I laughed so much xD

i was like "well, NAW! Never in my life!" :P

<3



Author's Response:

Omg *opens Yotube, goes to video*

Excuse me while I Mikegasm *-*

Hahahahaha! It's a question that in real life should never be asked; you should just always assume the answer is yes :P

Haha! Well obviously YOU know her ;D

You laugh at the weirdest things, I'm sure there were other parts in the story that were supposed to be funny and yet you laugh at that lmao! XD

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Reviewer: Eltoie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2013 07:55 am Title: Chapter 3

Michael is a hero! :D

Stupid jocks, stupid Brock, stupid guys who beat Tom, and partly stupid Tom for throwing rocks. Still.... Brock. Why does that name remind me op Pokemon? Brock is that guy who doesn't have eyes. So let's name Brock eye-less guy. ;)

Doesn't Tom like his borther because (obviously it's Logan) he's gay?? O.o

whaahaaaa, I love this story! <3



Author's Response:

:D He always was <3

HAHA! I loved that show!! lol! I had so many Pokemon cards when I was little... my favorite was Ninetails XD lol!

All the questioning and stuff will be up next chapter :D And your question will definitely be answered :)

:D Thank you! So glad to hear that!

Reviewer: Mjfan43va Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2013 06:48 am Title: Chapter 3

Oooooooh!!!! That's the guy off Facebook!!



Author's Response:

XD Okay, this probably didn't come to mind at all when you wrote this, but I thought this review was so funny (in a good humored way)

That's seriously like the best reaction ever! lol! I can just picture someone;

THAT'S HIM! THAT'S HIM! THAT'S THE GUY! OH MY GOD THAT'S THE GUY FROM FACEBOOK!

XD

Ugh I want to like 5***** this review lol!

Reviewer: ThrillerEraSlave Signed [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2013 05:16 am Title: Chapter 3

Daaaamn, Michael went DOWN! Lol :)

Gooo on :b



Author's Response:

Lol! XD

I will for sure! :D

Reviewer: ILoveMJ777 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 01, 2013 01:01 am Title: Chapter 2

THIS STORY IS REALLY GREAT.:):):):) I'M HOOKED. PLEASE CONTINUE.

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Author's Response:

:D Thank you!! I'm happy you think so! I'll continue soon for sure :)

Reviewer: kjfinn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 28, 2013 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 1

I like this story a lot already.

Author's Response:

Yay! Thank you! Glad to hear that :D

Reviewer: ThrillerEraSlave Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 25, 2013 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 2

LMAO at Michael's reactions xD

 



Author's Response:

Haha! Yay! I'm not a total failure when it comes to the aspect of humor!!! :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

Reviewer: Karoll84 Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 25, 2013 10:16 am Title: Chapter 2

what is up with Logan



Author's Response:

Lol! A lot of people asked the same question for this chapter XD

We'll find out soon...

Reviewer: Pytinhercloset Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 25, 2013 09:51 am Title: Chapter 2

Ooooh..so he doesnt like school boys...

or DOES he?!

i mean, he couldve logged off cos the thought of dating a school boy made him need to urgently....take care.... of something... Heh...heh...heh... ;D

well, i cant wait to read more girl, this is a Sure Fire Winner, it gives me Fever, cos Logan's actin Shady...maybe its Voodoo? Okay, i'll stop now xD lol!

<3



Author's Response:

Lol! You'll find out soon...

OR WILL YOU?

:P

THAT IS DIRTY! But I like it ;) That could be the reason why... lol!

Well, I hope you can Hold On for the next update that I'll surely post For Your Entertainment. Although, I think you should Take Back what you said about Logan being Shady because I think most people think he's gone Cuckoo for having logged off on Michael! :P Lol! Nooo! I liked it XD lmao!

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Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 25, 2013 09:15 am Title: Chapter 2

What's wrong with Logan?...Maybe he's in the same school as Michael and nobody knows that he 's gay...Hmm no I don't think so...

I was surprised to see that Michael wasn't very shy with Logan and was kind of seductive and flirty with him.

Janet made me laugh with her gossips lol

I like this story.



Author's Response:

Haha! We'll find out soon... ;)

Hehe Michael is taking Julian's advice :P

:D Yay! Glad you do!

Reviewer: Eltoie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 25, 2013 07:31 am Title: Chapter 2

What's wrong with Logan? Michael Jackson is always turning on, even though he's still in highschool! ;)

As long as Logan doesn't break Michael's heart, it's fine with me. 

Gosh, I'm so curious about this story! So many opportunities with this plot. 

Continue! <3



Author's Response:

Lol! It's a shame Logan doesn't realise how much of a turn on Michael is ;)

XD I'll be sure to continue soon! :)

Reviewer: Mjfan43va Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 25, 2013 02:05 am Title: Chapter 2

Ooh please continue



Author's Response:

I most definitely will XD

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Feb 24, 2013 01:07 am Title: Chapter 1

I'm happy to see you have another story and a slash story by the way :)

I really like the beginning and the plot is interesting. Julian really made me laugh lol.

I'll add this story to my favorites and see where it will lead ;)



Author's Response:

Hehe I love slash too much XD

Thank you! I'm happy to hear you think so! :)

 

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