Reviewer: Eltoie Signed [Report This]
Date: Oct 25, 2014 01:12 am Title: Chapter 13

ok I caught up with the story again :)

hmm I wouldn't forgive zimzim thatt easy, but the whole camping with the pick-up truck made my heart melt.. *_* when are they going to take things further than a kiss though? I'm hungry. ;)

omg I didn't realise how much I missed this story.

I'm so glad you're back :D

 

Author's Response:

Hahaha I felt like since I left without a trace for so long I owed it to put in a little more romance ;D haha but you'll hafta wait and see for anything more than that ;P 

Haha I missed the people on here so much!! I forgot how great you all were ^-^ Glad to be back! :)

Reviewer: Pytinhercloset Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 04, 2013 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 12

Oooh tommy tommy tommy boy!! U are baaad :P

seriously though, he needs to watch himself!

xD i loved Tom's sarcastic comments, and omg the one about home ec cracked me up cos i HATED my teacher for that and i have a new timetable now soo THE BITCH GONE! Lmao! :D

<3

Author's Response:

Lol! :P The Zim brothers both have some things they need to work on ;)

Haha! Really? I actually quite like my Home Ec teacher!! :D Hate my Socials and French teacher though, she can't teach shit. -_-

Lmao! "THE BITCH GONE!" <-- That made me lmao! xD

<33 Love ya! xxoo

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 03, 2013 09:42 am Title: Chapter 12

Now I can understand Tom a little more. It's true that it's not always easy when a sibling is getting all the attention.Wanted or not.

But what will happen now for him? Will he do things bigger and more dangerous just to get some intentions?

Author's Response:

Totally agree with the first statement. It sucks when you feel invisible.

We'll see whether or not Tom's acts will get worse and worse, and whether or not his hatred for his brother will die away..

Reviewer: Pytinhercloset Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2013 02:05 pm Title: Chapter 11

Oh Logan...

I feel sorry for Michael. Seeing the guy who is pretty much his boyfriend go through that then deny being gay. But i understand why he lied too :/

ooohh!!! Tooooommmm...... What have u done?! :P

<3

Author's Response:

Hahaha! Tom's a bad little boy >:) We'll see what he did next chapter :D

Reviewer: staciethehedghog Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2013 05:54 am Title: Chapter 11

Or Lord more shit to deal with.... Continue please! :)

Author's Response:

Def will! :D

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: May 06, 2013 09:53 am Title: Chapter 10

Poor Michael. His parents are so protective. I know it's their role but still. Actually I think that both Michael and his parents made good points.

I'm not sure lying was a good idea because when the truth will be found, it will be worst for him. His parents will feel betrayed and he will lost their trust completely.

Author's Response:

Agreed; lying doesn't help a situation, but as a desperate, confused teenager, it always seems like the easy and quickest way out.

Thanks for the review :P :D

Reviewer: True_Critic Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Apr 22, 2013 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 9

I like this and the plot. I know that all your stories isn't the best but i particually like this one and your other one. You know the one where Dani doesn't end up with Michael in the end. I loved how realistic that was.

I also wanna say i love your writing style to. Oh and i read your bio you said you don't like other authors asking you to read there stories.

I so understand you on that i would say the samething myself. I'm sure some authors read it and got offended just like a lot of these authors hates my guts for me telling it like it is. I'm not trying to hurt nobody on here.

Everyone's a good writer in there own rights. But they must accept there mistakes and stop being so big headed about it. A lot of them are so cocky and spoild they think they should get good feedback all the time.

It's not realistic to me. I feel if i give off with telling them the truth then they should use in there favor and try harder.

They just not use to a reader like me being up here.

I've read many stories on differen't sites and none of them ever got mad at me or trashed talked me just cause im being an honest reviewer. This is the only site i know that hates me for being real.

I won't never put anyone down i just wanna be honest. Cause if i lie then i'll feel like shit for saying how much i liked and knowing i felt it was crappy.

I usually don't read gay guy stories but i just like the way you wrote this. It's wonderful!

Shit i tell people like it is. Even at work i told my co worker her hair looked dryed out and she should was and condition and use pantene pro I use it and my hair is shiny. She didn't get mad she actually laughed at me and said fuck you. She told she was jus having a bad hair day.

She didn't get offended though. If someone is tells me the truth about myself im then im fine with it.

If my outfit didn't look right then fine that's your opinion i think i look ok, but if not all i'll do is just go shopping for better outfits then. If i like hidious to you then fine! I can spit right back to a person but my words mostly hurt people. Idk why when they could just ignore me. I ignore people to.

I'm just one those people that just don't care and worry about stupid little things in life. I just move on and live my life.

Oh and i saw your picture on your bio your very pretty to!

You deserve 10 or more stars for this story!

Author's Response:

Haha! Thank you! I'm glad you've enjoyed it especially considering the fact that you don't usually read slash stories :3

Anyhow, regarding the honesty thing, you already know how I feel about that. Like I said earlier, some people just react differently. However, I did see the little dispute on another story between yourself and a few other authors (which is what I think you're reffering to when you say some of them start trahsh talking you) but I'm not going to comment on that because it may or may not start something and I was caught up in something awhile ago and it sucked. I got pretty upset and it was just kind of a stupid disagreement that really didn't have to be started. I'd rather not start one with this.

But do know that I support your honesty as long as you're putting it in a way that isn't putting people down :)

Reviewer: jacksonfan Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 20, 2013 11:36 am Title: Chapter 9

I love this chapter a lot. Wow poor Michael, he will have an hard time when he'll be back home.

I think I'm like everybody for the blowjob at 7 lol. I was like really, a 7 years old boy can already do this? lol. Logan was very precocious lol.

I loved when Logan explained why they always moved on. The drag part was funny.

I think it's when I tell my friends that I was scared when I saw Chucky on my TV screen. My brother was watching it and I didn't have the right to go in the lounge because I was too little, to see it. But I went there for I don't know what and I saw the doll's face.It scared me...

And so at night when I was in my room, I remember very well that I was in my bed in the dark and I was looking at my dolls to see if they weren't moving XD. Now when I tell this story to my friends they all look a me like "Really? Dolls don't move!" lol.

Author's Response:

:D Glad to hear that! Honestly, it's my favorite chapter of this whole story so far lol! I just really like it :P

Hahaha! Believe it or not that story has some truth to it! Lol! Thank my very 'adventurous' friend for that one ;)

Hahahaha! I could totally picture that :P XD That reminds me of a time me, my sister and our friends were hanging out in the moods and we saw this random baby doll hanging from a tree and we all got freaked out and told everyone that we saw Chucky! :P lol!