Date: Sep 15, 2016 12:47 pm Title: Continuing?
Omg i lovvve it i esp lovve bad religion!! U should continue that one!
Date: Jul 02, 2015 01:24 pm Title: Continuing?
Continue it
[Report This]Date: Jul 19, 2012 08:10 pm Title: Continuing?
I'd like this to be continued. :p
[Report This]Date: Jul 10, 2012 06:36 pm Title: Till It Happens To You
I honestly think this would make an incredible story. Any help you need, i'm here :). You should DEF. continue this and back it up. I have so many questions i NEED answered Rosaleeeeee NEED.
Author's Response: I'll consider it! (:
[Report This]Date: Jul 10, 2012 01:06 am Title: Continuing?
Its a greats story, but theres one problem: THAT WAS WAAAAAAAYY TOO FAST, got dammit.
You just put a span of at LEAST 10 WELL WRITTEN CHAPTERS IN ONE. You could've stretched all of that out. Yeah, it was lovely but you just spoiled a whole plot in one chapter. Give us more backround, more Lisa, who the fuck is Christina, how old is she, what does she do, what was the wedding like, how does Lisa feel about Rosie, what did they feel during breakfast, what DROVE Lisa to all of a sudden divorce Michal, all of these things could have stretched out to a nice little 20 chapter story and you just zipped it through one chapter! I'm dissapointed, because you had good chemestry, you had a good plot. Wheres the writing at? Wheres the body? I KNOW this could've been a NICE story with some really good interludes of their past... Man, and it was just spoiled because you told the whole story already. :/
Author's Response: Let's take into account that I wrote this two years ago when I had very little writing experience and had no intentions of ever continuing. I wrote this for a few friends, so it wasn't really meant to be anything serious, it was really just something from off the top of my head. I appreciate your feedback, and I completely understand what you're saying, but reading that was actually REALLY discouraging. Thanks, though. I'll take what you said into consideration.
Date: Jan 20, 2011 08:56 pm Title: Till It Happens To You
THAT IS EXACTLY WHAT I NAMED IT AFTER OMG.
I love her.
Thank you.
Date: Jan 19, 2011 10:36 pm Title: Till It Happens To You
THAT IS A CORRINE BAILEY RAE SONG! Lmao ! ( : Good Story By the Way. ( :
[Report This]Date: Jan 18, 2011 05:03 pm Title: Till It Happens To You
Not shabby at all I like it. Plenty of drama in it which is great. The fight between rosie and Michael was really god. Keep up the good work
Date: Jan 18, 2011 01:20 pm Title: Till It Happens To You
Oh, this is finished. It was a one shot, however the Mike/Rosie thing sorta happens in my other story "They Wanted All The Juice" I'm glad you liked it, though.
[Report This]Date: Jan 18, 2011 03:59 am Title: Till It Happens To You
I'm interested! Please keep going.
Date: Jan 18, 2011 02:13 am Title: Till It Happens To You
Yay to Rosie and Mike getting married! That's who he shoulda marries the first time. Theyre perfect for each other.