Date: Jun 26, 2014 01:33 am Title: Chapter 11
Is it bad that I cackled like an evil witch when I saw this chapter? Aha. I just have to say that James, though he didn't really do anything bad, can call underneath a rock. What can I say? I wear red and black shaded glasses. Completely biased here. And Michael, you beautiful man, you've made a mess of things, though my red and black glasses shall place the blame on that wench LMP for not loving you right.
Date: Jun 22, 2014 02:46 am Title: Chapter 9 B
I just couldn't go to sleep knowing you had updated & bc it just caused me much anxiety wondering what was brewing next. I was hesitant to read but now that I read it I sTILL HAVE ANXIETY. it's nerve wrecking. oh my god. bUT IM SO HAPPY YOU UPDATED!!!
I'm kinda glad you Lisa retaliate like that. but I'll probably regret it as I know my heart won't be ready to take what will happen next. James is such a idek.. Thea, Thea, Thea.. really anticipating her next move & how she'll react. idk it's almost 5am & I haven't slept. I'm anxious. & happy. im crey. Glad you're back! :')
LMFAO! One way or another, it'll be okay! I don't know - one minute I'm like "fuck him" and then I feel bad. No one really is a villain here, though, even though it kind of seems like it. What's going on is just a product of everyone's actions, really. DON'T CREY, THOUGH! ;__;
Date: Jun 22, 2014 01:44 am Title: Chapter 9 B
Oh how I hate that accursed 'Jacko'. *sigh* It's good to have you back, Erin. High time you came out of Hiatus anyway.
I know, I know! It literally made me cringe writing it, but you know how the tabloids are. They don't give a damn about anyone's feelings until something drastic happens to them. Thanks, bae!
Date: Nov 25, 2013 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 9 A
Yaaaas! I finally got some time to read this chapter!! I really love how everybody is wrapped up into their emotions. Lisa is acting like a bad bitch, she is going to have a field day with the media. MJ probably already knows, I feel. Oddly, I love all of this tension going on. I feel bad for MJ though.(not James, he deserves the asshole of the year award) Thea, I understand her, falling in love is a hell of a thing....& losing your logics does happen, but Michael makes her happy. I think she should go for what her heart is yearning for.
Date: Nov 01, 2013 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 9 A
ok sorry I had to get that out lol.
soooo..... holy fuck. I was hoping that they would separate (mike & lisa and thea & james) but I didn't think it was actually gonna happen but yaaasss lmao. I hope mike & thea can start over again and be together .. I don't know what Lisa has planned but I can feel that it ain't gonna be good!
i cant stand james....
i kinda like how michael wanted to work things out with lisa but then he got angry .. and started to blame her .. like no .... that bastard lmao I love him though
THANK YOU FOR UPDATING ERIN ! x
Lmao, I know, right!? He is a piece of freakin WORK! I think it shows how mercurial he can be, how he somewhat expects everything to go his way or it'll be the highway, but he is in for a rude ass awakening. Sometimes I wanna smack him and he's my character. Smh. LOL, you're welcome! And yeah, James is annoying.
Date: Jun 03, 2013 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 6
I might not be done yet, but I will be soon ^.^ so far I like chapter 6. It has me thinking that Michael really wants he & is very serious about her. I hope he leaves Lisa so he can be with Thea.
Aww, thank you so much for the review! I know that the chapters are kind of long, but I promise that it's worth it! I'll love you 5 ever for the feedback!