Date: May 28, 2013 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 20
Oooooooh! I can;t wait to see how they get rid of marilyn!! I was really scared when he started fighting him but now I'mr eally excited :) can't wait for the next update!!
Hehe you'll see his attempt very soon... and the aftermath of it :O
Date: May 27, 2013 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 20
Okay Marilyn.... I have lost words for u.
Michael... Be careful!!! If he tells the wrong people youre dead! :P
u have to keep us on edge dont ya kourts?! ;)
Haha! I'm a ltittle surprised he hasn't died already! ;)
Lol, maybe. (.-.)
Date: May 27, 2013 09:27 am Title: Chapter 20
Wow Marilyn became really silly lol. Drugs,sex, alcool...He's really becomming dangerous.
I was afraid but kinda proud that Michael stand against him and fight him. I don't know what Michael has in mind for Marilyn to be out of his life, but I really hope he won't do silly things.
We'll see what kind of 'schemes' Michael has got in store in order to get rid of Marilyn... and then we'll watch how a little twist will make his world come crashing down ;)
Date: May 07, 2013 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 19
So that's just the solution... *head palm* Michael wow. Just wow. The standards are droppin SO LOW. It's just like... Is there even a point for me to hope that this tunes out better? Like this school doesn't even help it jut hurt its an absolute failure geez. Whatever whatever smh Great chapter though :D
Hahahahahahaha! xD You have seriously NO IDEA how funny your reviews are! They ALWAYS make me laugh and smile!
"The standards are droppin SO LOW." Made me laugh SO HARD! XD Lmao!
The way you words your reviews... ugh, I LOVE IT! Haha!
Thanks for the continuous reviews Dreamer102, they make me smile XD
Date: May 04, 2013 07:02 am Title: Chapter 19
whoa, okay i had a feeling he'd give into her but i didn't think like this!! This was a good chapter, although I just hope tilly can stay loyal to michael. and 10 chapters? well they better kick marilyn's ass in 10 chapters because i wanna see that happen before it ends! lol! good chapter! :)
Lol! We'll I'll try and fit some ass kicking into it before the end ;) But knowing this school and the characters there that shouln't be too difficult :P
Date: May 04, 2013 06:21 am Title: Chapter 19
Ok so I must say their love making session was hot but I'm not sure it was a good idea.
I understood that he was wanting her and for once he wanted some little fun in this school. But I guess he should have wait a little to see if Tilly was really sincere before to sleep with her.
Haha Michael is just going overboard with all of these missteps isn't he? How many more mistakes can he make before the end I wonder?
We'll have to wait and see to find out if Tilly's words are true...
Thanks for the review :)
Date: May 04, 2013 04:10 am Title: Chapter 19
Haha, the natural desire to express a growing force finally got the best in Michael. Damn, Tilly is lucky! Her plan B has got some serious skills! XD
I would have laughed to death if Marilyn would have walked in at that moment. Seeing Tilly and Sparky doing that stuff and be like: "Dude, did you use my condoms without asking?" XD
Great chapter girl, can't wait for the next one! <3
Haha! He definitely would have been my Plan A ;)
........ Eltoie... you did not just predict the next chapter....
Omg, Eltoie... haha! I was actually going to put something similar in the next chapter!! Let's just say Michael and Marilyn will be together, Marilyn will notice the missing rubbers and then there'll be a 'confrontation' if you will, but the actual climax of the chapter begins with the founding of the missing condoms! lol! You'll see what I mean next chapter, I just suck at explaining.
Although I have to admit, I wish I had thought of making Marilyn come in as they're getting it on and say that! lol!
Date: May 03, 2013 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 19
but im not complaining; that was hot! :P
i just think that this might be ANOTHER mistake, as if this story needs more of those!
wonder what our sweet darling Marilyn will think of these shenanigans?
Hehehe, cant wait to find out ;)
Haha! It's not my best, but it'll do ;) Thanks! :D
Lol! Oh trust me, we'll be hearing a lot of Marilyn from now until the end.. ;P
Date: May 03, 2013 11:35 pm Title: Chapter 19
Lmao! She got the D, he got the ratchet P. xD
I thought Michael would go down on her c;
lol, then I thought they would of done a porno xD lmao
Lol! Michael going down on her? Don't forget now, he's a virgin and too inncent to know what that means ;)
Omg! That would have been awesome! xD
Date: Apr 21, 2013 12:50 am Title: Chapter 18
Marilyn. Entertaining as always! Just his little comments like about the coke and stuff hes just ... Yes.
Ughhh is he gonna make a decision that will fuck even MORE shit up?!
cos in this story he has a tendancy to do that, bless him.
Hahaha! He does have a bad habit of making a mess of things doesn't he? Haha! Poor Michael... XD
Date: Apr 20, 2013 02:05 am Title: Chapter 18
It's strange but I kinda like Marilyn in this chapter lol. He was right about what he said to Michael...Michael wanted to be popular but I think he didn't really do the best things for this.
About Tilly, I don't trust her really. I'm not sure he should take her back now. I think he should listen to what she has to say and wait to see if he can trust her...
Haha! I think a few people feel the same way as you do about Marilyn at this point... AND with what you said about Tilly :P
We'll see how their relationships all work out :3
Date: Apr 19, 2013 11:19 am Title: Chapter 18
Whoa, little outburst Michael! At least Marilyn didn't touch him. O.o
I honestly don't really know if Michael should take Tilly back. After all she has done, no. But if Michael's heart tells him to, yes.
Beautiful chapter. Love it. <3
Haha! Marilyn's trying to keep under the radar a bit ain't he? :P
Hehe that seems to be the real conflict right now... :/
Thank you very much! :)