[Report This]Date: Mar 03, 2013 08:17 am Title: Chapter 2
Lovely chapter! The part with the kids was adorable, and Michael is silly as hell! :-) Please continue when you have the time!
[Report This]Date: Feb 18, 2013 05:33 am Title: Chapter 2
It's very interesting how well the kids took it. Not too surprising though, they had to learn eventually and it's great they're excited. Can't wait to see what Jess and Michael have up their sleeves when they perform together!
[Report This]Date: Feb 15, 2013 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 2
Awwing at the kids finding out about who their daddy really is. That was so cute. And that little Paris is definitely a daddy's girl. Anyway, I love Michael & Jessie's relationship and they're such great parents. Can't wait for the next update ^_^
Date: Feb 15, 2013 02:39 am Title: Chapter 2
Awww that was cute, continue please
[Report This]Date: Feb 14, 2013 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 2
This was really sweet chapter :) definately cute when Prince starting asking questions. Aww.
I can't wait for you to continue. You're a fantastic writer ;)
BTW, can you check out my story Risky Buisness.
I would really apprieciate it!
Date: Feb 14, 2013 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow continue please
[Report This]Date: Jan 27, 2013 11:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
There was so much to love in this chapter I can't even put it all into a review. As always, an absolute AMAZING job. I loved it and I couldn't stop smiling reading the whole thing. Your story always brings out my emotions and I love that so much about it. Every little detail you put in your writing is amazing. Absolutely can't wait for the next update. Fingers crossed that I'll see one soon! :) <3
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2013 10:15 am Title: Chapter 1
Yes! I'm so happy for this update...I can see this is gonna be a delicate subject for Michael...can't wait to see what happens!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 19, 2013 05:47 am Title: Chapter 1
Loved this chapter...very curious abt what happens in NYC......sooooo funny when little Paris walked in on them....
[Report This]Date: Jan 09, 2013 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh God, I'm just so glad to see Michael and Jesse back.... My absolute favortie story that I've ever read on MJ Fiction, and again everything is SO well written. My goodness, I love it. Cant wait for the next month with the 30th Anniversary, and all that happened around that time.... Now THAT I can't wait on that.
[Report This]Date: Jan 09, 2013 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Their kids are so...
Even when Paris interrupt their quality time LOL
I already left a comment on COM but I want to support you so I'm leaving another review here!
[Report This]Date: Jan 09, 2013 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yes for this update! The joys of parenthood lol you win some, you lose some. Poor Jess is learning to adapt. She's right about her request to Mike though. Their kids are at the age where they should know so that it won't always seem like Jess is the bad guy. I hope that Mike takes that into consideration. As for Paris interrupting them lol that's so tragic. That's the worst getting interrupting in your moment of pleasure tsk tsk. I was cutting up when Jess was explaining how they got caught "wrestling" before lol. Anyway, this was a great chapter. Can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: Dec 30, 2012 11:13 am Title: Prologue
I can't even express to you how extremely happy I am that this story is back. This is my absolute favourite story. You're so passionate with your words and they're so strong...I feel like I'm watching a movie or as if their life were truly real. I love it. I can't wait for the story to really begin. Waiting patiently! :) <3
Author's Response: Thanks soooo sooo much. I adore you as a reader also, I love reading your reviews whenever you reply to the chapters. I write and update for people like you <3333
[Report This]Date: Dec 14, 2012 08:45 am Title: Prologue
no second chapter :(???
Author's Response: I'm sorry it's taken me so long to finish the 2nd chapter. I promise it's still a work in progress and I haven't forgotten about it, it's just taking me a while to get it together :(