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Reviewer: YANAgirl07 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 18, 2012 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 1

Omg. This is so good! I love how you guys were able to show the relationship between all four of them in a chapter that isn't like, just stating it, you know? I really feel that that doesn't make sense at all, and that's okay. The point is, it's really well written!

Plus!

There's like, a perfect amount of humour in here! It's reeeeally good! I'm hooked :)

Oh yeah, Sheila reminds me of this girl at my shool who only wears pink. Every. Single. Day. And she walks around school with a little possey. I think she's trying to be intimidating, but all in all it's just really funny! lol!

Can't wait for another chapter! :)

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 15, 2012 12:13 pm Title: Chapter 3

Damn, Sheila's a bitch. >.< I thought this was a really good chapter. The two of them busting on Ella was amusing but when she interrupted I felt so bad for Ella. Someone going around saying you're pregnant is not cool. -_- It's not funny and it's pathetic. I hate people like Sheila so much. Michael will definitely make his voice heard later on and then HE'LL be the one with the last laugh. I'm glad the pack seems to be all together like this. They need each other. Great work girls, I can't wait to hear more. :)

Reviewer: ilovemj1973 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 14, 2012 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 3

loved the update hun cant wait for more :)

Reviewer: susan Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Nov 11, 2012 10:14 am Title: Chapter 2

Ok girl I am running way behind on both please forgive me. I am hooked love this can't wait for more !



Author's Response:

Susan!! :)

Hey girl i'm SO glad to hear from you! I totally hear you, life has been crazy busy lately for me as well.  Thanks so much for reading, I'm so excited you like it!! <3

Reviewer: MichaelJacksonLoverForever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 09, 2012 07:32 am Title: Chapter 2

Oooo!! I'm so glad to see a chapter of this! :D First chapter and I'm already hooked!! You guys write some of the best stories, you really do! I love seeing what you two come up with. :D I laughed when I read Pacey's excuse and  when he said "I didn't hear you coming up with any good ideas...besides getting freaky with Ms. Hot to Trot over there." That line killed me. I loved Michael's reaction to being found in the rosebush with her. Lol Mr. Ramos got the wrong message. :P Not that I blame him. Lol I can't wait to see where this story goes. Great job!! I look forward to an update. ;)



Author's Response:

Hey!! :)

Aww thanks so much!! LOL I love Pacey...he's based off the Pacey from Dawson's Creek.  Which is one of my favorite characters ever.  Girl thanks so much for your support!!

<3 Leah

Reviewer: ilovemj1973 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 08, 2012 12:41 am Title: Chapter 2

wow I cant wait for more loved it hun :)

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: ALLFORLOVE77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 07, 2012 01:48 pm Title: Chapter 2

Loved it!! :D



Author's Response:

Thanks!! :)

Reviewer: Temptress Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 03, 2012 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 1

Whaaaa?! NO FIRST CHAPTER?! GAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH. I'M DYING!!!! Ok, a bit dramatic but....DJGLSDKFJGLDFKJGLKDFJGKLjfd NEW STORY TIME

Reviewer: ALLFORLOVE77 Signed [Report This]
Date: Nov 03, 2012 03:50 am Title: Chapter 1

Loved the video, can't wait for ch.1 :D



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!!!!!!

Reviewer: ilovemj1973 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 02, 2012 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

oh this sounds awesome cant wait for it :)

Author's Response:

Thanks SO much!!!!! :)

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