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Reviewer: Eltoie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 12, 2012 07:48 am Title: || Chapter Two: The Box ||

Sounds like Alex is possesed! ;)

Poor Michael, I can see the fork in his hand...

You know, when I saw that weird line which you later translated in the end notes, I went looking it by myself. Now I know a full sentence in Latin! :D Not that it is a very usefull sentence... ;)

Plz continue! <3

 



Author's Response:

Oh I know, poor Michael! 

That must of hurt like hell! Wonder what will happen next?

Reviewer: missmj2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 11, 2012 08:47 pm Title: || Chapter Two: The Box ||

Whoa! That was insane! Geesh I could picture eveything you describe in this story. It's great girl! Keep it up!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

I am so glad you like it! More coming soon!

Reviewer: Eltoie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 16, 2012 09:08 am Title: || Chapter One : Moving In ||

Now I wonder what Alex saw. Please update soon! ;)

One question: How old is Michael? 'cause if this story takes place in 1983, then he would be 24, 25. Isn't that too young for having a 14 year old daughter? Or is 1983 the year when Alex's mother left? That would make more sense. It's just something I was wondering about.

Anyway, this is a great suspenceful story! Very good!

Plz continue!



Author's Response:

It's just a story but,  I mean, I really didnt want to put the year, so taking it off so people won't get confused

Reviewer: missmj2012 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 15, 2012 04:32 pm Title: || Chapter One : Moving In ||

This is sooo good just like a movie lolz I can't wait to what will happen next with alex. Damn action already? I like that too lolz Please keep going :)



Author's Response:

Glad you like it. Spread out the word!

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