Date: Sep 23, 2012 04:25 pm Title: Marlon's Second Gift
I loved this chapter. And in a way i kinda knew that you would do another chapter lol. This was also a beautiful chapter and i enjoyed reading it. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
Date: Jul 31, 2012 11:19 pm Title: UNITY
Wow this was a very sad chapter. Thank You for writing this short story. I enjoyed it so much. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
Date: Jul 31, 2012 02:35 pm Title: You Must Know That
Aww i cryed during this chapter its such a tuchy subject. I understand how Michael felt i get the same way when i visit my Papa's grave he died in 2008 and i sometimes think if he was still hear today would he be proud of me and proud that im a senior this school year and im graduating. But i know deep down he is. Thank You for writing this chapter. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
Date: Jul 31, 2012 08:25 am Title: Goin' Back To Indiana
:'(
(Nb: can't say anything else cause crying)
Date: Jul 30, 2012 05:30 pm Title: Goin' Back To Indiana
:( The last part of this was sad. I nearly cryed. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.
Date: Jul 30, 2012 05:51 am Title: Michael's Letter
Aw this is so sweet, it almost brought a tear to my eye. The letter was so well written and I can actually imagine Michael writing something like that. This is so different and I'm looking forward to your next chapter. Thanks for sharing this with us! :)
Rest in peace, Michael & Brandon Jackson. <33
Date: Jul 30, 2012 02:39 am Title: Michael's Letter
I love it already. The idea is so much....ah, it's so different and extraordinary, you know. Keep it going. I love it, I really do !
Date: Jul 29, 2012 10:48 pm Title: Michael's Letter
Wow this is good. I remeber reading about Marlon having a twin i think right after the mamorial service was aired and i cryed a little when i found out Brandon died its sad because no mother should ever lose a child. Whenever you get a chance can you please update,Thanks. Lots Of L.O.V.E.