Date: Sep 13, 2017 11:09 am Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥
I didn't know you posted this one here, I was reading on another site, but is has since closed, sadly as many of the forums have. Looking forward to starting back from the beginning!
BTW I was mjj4everinourhearts on the other forum!
Author's Response:
Hey Nancy! :) Happy Reading! And thank you so much for your kind comment! I know, its sad that most of the websites are closing. But don't worry, you can download this story as a pdf from this website and I got a back up of this story as well. Oh I remember you! :D Nice to see you here girl! Lots of love <3 xx
Date: Sep 13, 2017 10:29 am Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥
😳 you just made my day with this!!! I just started reading a few weeks ago...haven't finished reading yet. But I am glad you've updated. I'm loving it so far. I am currently on the road and look forward to catching up! Thanks!
Author's Response:
Hi there Gabby! :) Wow you got a story yourself, I'm dying to check it out! Thanks so much girl! That really means a lot to me! Please let me know what you think! :D I have noticed that half of Chapter 8 had disappeared so I have uploaded its other half. Do check it out if you have missed it! :P Lots of love <3 xx
Date: Aug 30, 2017 03:29 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥
Love it so far 😀
Author's Response:
Hi there, Harborough! :) Thanks so much for your review! Lots of love <3 xx
Date: Jul 11, 2017 02:17 am Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥
I saw you responded to a review submitted this year in March, I got so happy - thought this profile and story was abandoned and I was the only one coming back to it!
I love this story, it's passionate and true to Michael's character and I see a lot of myself in Nita.
Ill be right here to follow up on anything new.
If you have stories on wattpad, please let us know!
Xoxox
Author's Response:
Hi there, Spectrum :) First of all I'm sorry for the late reply! Thank you so much! You have no idea how much your words mean to me! I'm continuing to write only because of encouraging words like yours :D I don't currently have anything on wattpad, I mean finishing this story is hard enough for me right now. But I sure have thought about it, and will let you know ;) Lots of love! <3 xx
Date: Mar 25, 2017 03:25 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 32: ...And To Love. ♥
I know it's been years since you updated but I wanted to leave a comment, on the chance that you might come back and be able to see it. I love this story so much and it's become one of my favorites. I've been hooked for days now, and it's just really brilliant. Thank you for leaving this wonderful writing for us to read xx
Author's Response:
Hey there :) Yep, I'm still alive :D. I'm going to update this story and definitely going to finish. Thank you so much! I really appreciate that. Stay tuned! Lots of love <3 xx
Date: Sep 30, 2016 01:22 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 17: [Heart On Fire] The Day The Earth Stood Still ♥
I knew Nita could not have cheated on Michael. She would have to be crazy to do that! I am glad both her and Michael have finally admitted their true feelings. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Thank for your comment :) More to come. Lots of love <3 xx
Date: Sep 24, 2016 02:03 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 13: Never Too Late ♥
The pictures are great! I love seeing all these real images of MJ that inspired your writing. It truly helps blend the reality with this amazing fantasy.
Author's Response:
Yeah, that was the reason I wanted to upload the exact pictures of Michael that I got inspired to write that particular chapter! So glad you liked them. :D Thanks a lot for your review! Lots of love <3 xx
Date: Sep 23, 2016 03:05 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 9: The First Deadly Sin ♥
I love that you are using song lyrics as dialogue. It's a great concept to imagine what could have inspired the lyrics for "Dirty Diana" and " The way you make me feel". This story keeps getting more and more interesting.
Author's Response:
Haha! At first I wasn't sure of using them right. But then it happened on it itself :) Thanks so much for kind review! Lots of love <3 xx
Date: Sep 21, 2016 08:01 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 4: Surrender A Moonlight Dream ♥
This is some pretty hot writing! I can't wait to read more! I know you started this story years ago I truly hope you haven't given up on it. Every story needs a ending.
Author's Response:
No I haven't given up on this. I love this story too much. Even when I had so much hectic things, this story always remained at the back of my mind. I will definitely finish this story :) Thank you for your review! Lots of love <3 xx
Date: Sep 21, 2016 06:54 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 3: Midnight Storms ♥
I love the sexy way you are portraying Michael in this story. Showing the manly side of him over the child like side that is more often used to describe him. In life he was definitely shy and reserved, but in his music there was bold and deeply sensual man. I keep thinking of his song "Give in to me" while I am reading this. I am interested to read more.
Author's Response:
I researched as much as I could. He couldn't have been the same way 24 hrs right? He lived as a man and to his closest people he was constrastingly different than when he was before the cameras... I really really glad you liked it!! :D Yep, you are absolutely right! Only a sensual and powerful man could have written give in to me or dirty diana and probably every other song he wrote :) Thanks for you review! Lots of love <3 xx
Date: Nov 22, 2015 12:45 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 4: Surrender A Moonlight Dream ♥
holy shit you really need to finish this story!!!! Its the best!!!!
Author's Response:
Hi Sandy :) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate it! I'm definitely updating and fishing this story ;) Lots of love <3 xx
Date: Mar 12, 2015 10:34 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 32: ...And To Love. ♥
Yay I finally caught up!!
This is a wellwritten fic..however I had my doubts about Michael's relationship with Nita and couldn't help but think it wasn't healthy..I mean it seemed like they couldn't really get along well. and reading his reaction to the news about his lupus I was dumbfounded..many a times I think of how proud of him I am for handling it so well but you know what? a fraction of what he went through is enough to make anyone go insane and so it seems like a way he would have reacted if he wasn't as stoic..so very realistic. There were times he was being such a stubborn idiot but the part where you asked whether to be on his side or Nita's side, chapter 30 I think it was, I saw his point of view and understood it..felt both him and Nita were wrong in the sense that she can't accuse him of cheating and expect him not to react yet he should remember she forgave him when he accused her and when she got hit I was like "oh no this can't be happening!" since their last words would have been harsh words if she had died..I am so happy she made it!!
Also like to point out that you wrote Mike's height as 5'10 in early chapters (which was how tall I thought he was although autopsy and '89 driver's license, Karen Faye say otherwise and she would know) and you have 5'11 in chapter 28 or 29. Was it a typo or you meant to make a correction of the earlier one you had listed?
I hope your progress on chapter 33 is coming on well and you get a nice breather during spring break! <3
Author's Response:
Hey Christy, I'm so sorry for the late response, well you know me ;)
Thank you!!! It can't possibly be. She's after all in love with Michael Jackson. And we all know there's a dark side in everyone's life. It's inevitable, no matter who we are. The patients who go through this kind of transformation are never okay with it. They suffer more than the dying ones because these people have to live with it for the rest of their lives and just simply accept it whether they like it or not. I have witnessed their reactions so many times before when the news's delivered to them and I used it to generate the scene, hope I did the best I could. Michael was a normal human being. And his every step was watched 24 hours a day. Always under the media's scrutiny. He must have gone through more pains than everone else must have but he kept that all in between his four walls and came out with his ever-present smile, that's what we are pround of, arent we? :) I completely agree with you. I would be out of my mind if I woke up one day like that when I had done nothing wrong. And the media bullied him till his last breath, yet he showed up with that smile :) HAHA!! You're right. I know all the hitting was a bit too dramatic but I had to express in some way about how much they love each other despite all the odds. Sometimes, it's just that way. We don't see myself being with someone, who's just not our type, for the rest of our life but we only feel 'that' certain kind of spark with them, it's so confusing and mystifying. Nita and Michael's relationship is of that kind.
LOL. I'll check into it. I got a perceptive reader :) I'm pretty sure it must be something I just did not pay much attention to, because he's said to be 5'10 in some places and 5'11 in some, but I'll edit it, thank you for letting me know :D My god, that chapter is half-completed and it's been that way for the past couple of months, and I apologize again, but school is getting in the way and I swear I haven't even had a break since Christmas and it's SO DAMN ANNOYING! But I'll work on it now and try to finish it asap. I have to complete this stoy at least in 2015 *fingers crossed* :P Thanks so much for the review hun, you had pointed out my mistakes, honestly told what you felt and those are the reviews I appreciate the most!!! :D Lots of love <3 xx Have a wonderful day! ****Oh P.S You are my 500th reviewer!!! XD****
Date: Jan 28, 2015 12:36 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 1: Dawn of the Dusk ♥
WOW. I'm so glad that I found this story. Very good so far. :)
Hi there, Moonwalker99 :) Welcome!! Thanks so much! That's very sweet of you to say! Let me know what you think ;) Lots of love your way <3 xx
Author's Response:
Date: Jan 26, 2015 07:14 am Title: ♥ Chapter 32: ...And To Love. ♥
Hey.
Why don't you update anymore? I was soooooooo excited because I thought you'll continue with this. And now I am waiting for weeks and nothing yet :'( I love this one, it's my favourite!!
Author's Response:
Hey Michelle :)
So sorry girl :/ Ah, I'm back to my 'sorry' mode. :P Seriously though, I have completed half of the chapter, I'll update it ASAP! I'm continuing with this don't worry about that! And if I want to finish at least this year then I need to work! Thanks so much hun! I'll update soon! :D Lot's of love your way <3 xx
Date: Jan 13, 2015 06:55 pm Title: ♥ Chapter 32: ...And To Love. ♥
i came back from Alaska to find two lovely chapters just waiting for me to read them :D believe me when i say i was so ecstatic when i saw that! Omer is so unbelievably adorable and it is so cute how he just calms down when someone mentions Michael, or shall I say his daddy since he doesn't know who michael is lol. The thought of nita dying had me like "OH NO!" but then I read the next chapter and was so happy to see that michael did the CPR thing :) i can't wait for them to move in together! Finally all the drama has vanished! Well for now. Since this is the BAD era which means,,,, Tatiana and the bad tour are coming up ;D
Author's Response:
HEY girl :) Alaska! Hope you enjoyed your holidays!! Aw. Thank you so much!!! Haha ikr? Omer's cuteness is over shadowing Michael's :P He had become most of you guys favorite! Well, haha sorry for the minor heart attack I had to give you :P Me neither :P Oh yes, this is BAD era we're talking about!! You just have to wait ;) Thanks so much hun! I appreciate it! Lots of love your way <3 xx