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Reviewer: JacksonYaoi Signed [Report This]
Date: Jun 17, 2014 08:44 am Title: "Don't Bother Him"

for god sake, these fanfics are only read for sexual pleasures! even the really bad ones!

 

i'm sorry to break it up to you, but the story's not that good! it's only good by opinion! michael is out-of-character, the original girl is a mary-sue (bigger than bella swan), and the spelling and grammer errors hurt my eyes! i'd rate this fic a 10/3. it's unrealistic, full of plotholes, and raped with forgettable characters. at times like this, this is why slash is better than hetero.

Reviewer: Michael_Jackson_Babyyy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2013 08:02 pm Title: "Welcome To Your New Home"

Tink! Oh that's so adorable



Author's Response: haha First Name I Thought Of :P

Reviewer: Michael_Jackson_Babyyy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2013 07:56 pm Title: "I Knew You Were The One"

So sweet and beautiful <3 I am totally in love with this story. 



Author's Response: ^_^ YAY haha Thankyouuu <3 xo

Reviewer: Michael_Jackson_Babyyy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 15, 2013 07:47 pm Title: “Think You Know Where This Is Going”

My gosh you are a very talented writer! This is one of my favorite stories! Keep writing; you have an amazing way with words! This story is absolutely amazing! Much love xoxo 



Author's Response: Thankyou So So Much <3 Means Alot xoxox

Reviewer: whatmorecanigive Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2013 02:44 am Title: “Feel better?”

This is amazing...

I'm so excited that Michael can already leave the hospital. And that one sentence " you know I told you I'd never leave you " that was just SOOO beautiful and romantic and perfect o.O

 

Reviewer: whatmorecanigive Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 27, 2013 02:35 am Title: Last Chance

What a beautiful chapter! I'm soooo happy that Michael woke up and that his child actually woke him up is just too beautiful <3

Reviewer: Cwooten Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 18, 2013 08:28 am Title: “Feel better?”

So glad they are all reunited!!! Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 17, 2013 08:03 pm Title: “Feel better?”

Man...just woke up and they're already wanting to go at it! ;p

Reviewer: Cwooten Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 02, 2013 07:54 am Title: Last Chance

Yay!! Michael is awake!! Amazing!!

Reviewer: paris-jane Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jan 01, 2013 07:48 am Title: Last Chance

Awwwwww so cute :)

Reviewer: Rizzo87 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 29, 2012 05:45 pm Title: Bundle Of Joy

Wow, I really love this story! Hope Michael wakes up soon. :(

Reviewer: whatmorecanigive Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Dec 07, 2012 11:48 pm Title: News

oh woooow youre such a good writer!!!
i fought with the tears the last chapters and now. oh gosh please update soon

Author's Response: Thanks Hun awwww sorry :( i will :)

Reviewer: Alerion Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Nov 20, 2012 08:37 pm Title: "This is the creation of our first child"

These two kids love to fuck, huh? Lol more power to them then, I guess.



Author's Response: LMAO sure do haha

Reviewer: Dangerous21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 16, 2012 05:00 pm Title: Wedding Day

Aww, they got married! Great chapter



Author's Response: Awww Thankyou <3

Reviewer: Dangerous21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Oct 16, 2012 04:22 pm Title: “I Love you so much”

She's gonna be expecting soon with all the love they've been makin', lol! 



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