[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2013 01:58 am Title: Chapter 4
UUUGGHHHH!!!! NOOOOO!!! Curse you Marlon! (shaking raised fist) You done fucked shit up for everybody mayne. Ugh! (kicks kitten) She was about to tell the truth about her abuse! (overturns coffee table) They just finished having a heart to heart! (trips a senior citizen) Ugh (facepalm) Im so upset right now. Now they'll never know the truth or get together. Fucking Marlon!
Author's Response:
LMFAO, your review just made my day. Trip a senior citizen? thats hilarious. I can't wait to see your reaction to later chapters.
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2013 01:39 am Title: Chapter 3
Wow. Really Marlon? Have you no self respect? Bashing your own brother over a girl. Im glad Tito put you on front street. Shame on you. But I did find it humorous how they found a way to completely block Michael lol. Hook up already!! lol
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2013 01:31 am Title: Chapter 2
LMAO! Loved the banter between brothers. Marlin was not taking no for an answer. You cant blame him through. Mike better stake his claim quick because Rayne is already planning to find someone at the grammys. lol. They are too cute though.
[Report This]Date: Feb 16, 2013 01:23 am Title: Chapter 1
Her mother aint shit. How can you sit there and watch your flesh and blood get abused. Psshh. Poor Rayne. Her relationship with Michael is too cute. Im glad he had a shoulder to lean on when dealing with Diana's bullshit. Age aint nothing but a number to Mike. lol Out with the old and in with the young. How is Rayne gonna stay the night though if she gets beaten to a pulp for coming home at ten? Suicidal much?
[Report This]Date: Feb 15, 2013 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 16
Keep it going guys! :) i really like this story
Date: Feb 12, 2013 04:53 am Title: Chapter 1
I deleted someones review on accident. I am very sorry. Feel free to review again if you want. I don't know your username but I'm sure you will be able to tell if yours was deleted.
Date: Feb 12, 2013 03:42 am Title: Chapter 16
This chapter is all kinds of fucked up lol Damn Michael just slapped her in the face with that. And Marlon is one big douche. I really missed this story.
[Report This]Date: Feb 11, 2013 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 16
LOve this story and sooooo happy that you are updating again. Please dont stop here,i wanna know what happens next. Hope Marlon wont be her first :(
[Report This]Date: Feb 11, 2013 11:38 pm Title: Chapter 16
LOve this story and sooooo happy that you are updating again. Please dont stop here,i wanna know what happens next. Hope Marlon wont be her first :(
Date: Feb 11, 2013 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 16
Ugh I HATE MARLON! Fuck him I hope it comes out that he was behind this shit.
[Report This]Date: Feb 11, 2013 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 16
Wow i have not seen this story in so long thanks for the update bring more back soon cause i enjoyedit!
GO GO GO!!!
Author's Response:
We will and thanks for the review
[Report This]Date: Feb 11, 2013 06:38 pm Title: Chapter 15
Please keep going I would like to read more soon! Something gotta give 4 them michael's just gonna have to move out with her then & just let everything cool down cause things r too heated I can't believe they went off on her like that poor Rayne :/.
Btw continue!
Author's Response:
New chapter is up now. and yeah, Rayne can't seem to catch a break. but maybe she will.....soon.....maybe.....I won't tell. lol thanks for the review hun.
Date: Jan 29, 2013 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 15
you guys should finish this story! im Julias friend btw..i just ise her page occasionally to read stories. i really am interested in MORREEE :D
Author's Response: I'm glad you've given this story a shot and we will work on another chapter
[Report This]Date: Jan 28, 2013 08:58 am Title: Chapter 15
Shame on u Marlon.... Tsk tsk lol
Hopefully Rayne and Michael get together soon I can't wait!!
Update soon girl!! :D
Author's Response: We will try to
[Report This]Date: Jan 28, 2013 08:58 am Title: Chapter 15
Shame on u Marlon.... Tsk tsk lol
Hopefully Rayne and Michael get together soon I can't wait!!
Update soon girl!! :D