[Report This]Date: Jan 18, 2013 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 43
Awwww :'( Long distance relationships are hard but I really hope they make it! Their passion for each other burns so bright! They must stay together! I hope that Kayliah's introductory to fame doesn't change her though... :/
I was upset when Michael got angry at her, but when things cooled off I cooled off as well :) I'm glad he supports her; he always should. But his initial reaction was definitely understandable.
Author's Response:
Yeah his initial reaction was understandable. He wasn't expecting this kind of news. But he loved her and he knew it was a great opportunity.
About Kayliah's changes with fame, well it will change her and not really in a good way...It's all I can say. But before that, Quincy will play his role.
[Report This]Date: Jan 18, 2013 10:23 am Title: Chapter 43
Wowie Mike! First big fight with his girlfriend! Hopefully, when she's gone, he won't go to other women like Ola. And hopefully Kay won't do the same. ;)
Could Michael visit Kay sometimes when she's in New York?
Great chapter! <3
PS: have you already read the last comment about the thing with deleting the story or not? I though, since you're the author of the story, that you would like to know. ;)
Author's Response:
Yeah first big fight...Hmm I don't know, you'll see. First, they will have to face another thing : Quincy...
Sure he could ;-)
Yeah I read it and I left a comment to ask if my story is ok. I mean they began to date when the character of Kay is 17 but had sex only when she turned 18...Which isn't illegual...On another website, I asked about it before to post my story and they said it was ok if sex only happen if the younger character is 18, which is normal. And 17 years old isn't a big deal when Michael isn't too much older...I saw a story one day where Michael was 35 and the girl 15. Here it's really too much and with Michael's allegations problems it's not good and I would say even without that.
[Report This]Date: Jan 17, 2013 11:47 am Title: Chapter 1
GIRL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I don't know if you have noticed, but the adimistrator of the site said she would go through all the stories and delete the stories with:
* MJ involved in an incestual relationship with a family member.
* MJ involved in a relationship with an underage (under 18) person.
I asked which stories she might want to delete, and she mentoined this story..! Forbidden Love! NO!!! I immediately send her this message:
Forbidden Love by Jacksonfan.. the girl there is 17 in the beginning of the story. But she and Michael don't do anything until she's 18. It actually shows that Michael doesn't want a sexual relationship with a girl until she's 18. He waited like a gentleman. I only suggest you think about not deleting that story. *just a suggestion!*
I just got a reply:
Thank you for mentioning that, I wasn't aware of that. I will remove it from the list.
I was like sitting on the edge of my seat! I'm happy your story is allowed to stay here! :D
Carry on writing! <3
Author's Response:
Oh god girl than you so so much!!! I feel so relieved.
Thank you very much for defending my story, I really really appreciate this.
I always knew I had wonderful readers :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 11, 2013 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 42
She got a contract!
I hope they can tell Quincy at some point!
Loved it :)
Author's Response:
Telling Quincy won't be in their plans for now.
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: Jan 11, 2013 07:38 pm Title: Chapter 41
Yay! Michael won all the grammy's
Tsk tisk. Typical him to be an over achiever, lol.
Love this story :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 11, 2013 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 42
Wooo! That was hot and sexy! I loved it XD
I can see why Michael would want to tell Quincy, but I think I'm leaning more towards Kayliah's logic. I don't think thaat Quincy would be able to handle it if he was told about it.
Ooh! Can't wait for the next chapter! I'm anxious to see what Michael's reaction will be! I think he'll be a little upset at first, but in the end he'll be happy for her :D But if they don't get to see each other for 6 months how will that affect their relationship? Will Kay be meeting some ultra sexy male models? I guess I'll have to wait to find out won't I ;)
Author's Response:
I know I know lol.
Yeah I understand them both. They both have a good logic if I can say...Quincy's reaction will come very soon.
You're pretty right in all you said. About Kayliah meeting ultra sexy male models, you'll have to wait...You'll see what will happen during those 6 months and a lot will happen...
[Report This]Date: Jan 11, 2013 10:24 am Title: Chapter 42
Nooo.....! Michael, go after her. Be with her in New York! No, he can't. Victory Tour is comming.
Still, this may be just me, but I imagined that if Kay returned after 6 months, she may be a bit more bigger in the belly...... O.o But that's just me thinking weird thoughts since they didn't use a condom.
I loved both chapters you just updated so much! Continue! <3
Author's Response:
I didn't plan to use the Victory Tour in this story. Usually, I try to stick to Michael's life and carreer but it couldn't really work on this one, with what I planned...You'll see how Michael will react to the news and what they will do.
No she won't return with a bigger belly. They didn't use a condom but she was on pills. So no big belly for her, sorry.
Thank you very much.I'm happy you like my story that much as I love "Sensitive secrets" just as much <3
[Report This]Date: Jan 11, 2013 10:11 am Title: Chapter 41
I could see the image of Michael taking off his sunglasses playing in my head. XD
This was an amazing chapter, now I must go and read the next one! ;)
Author's Response:
I know. I so love this part of the Grammy. His little speech and then he took off his glasses and was so embarrassed and shy.
Thank you very much!
[Report This]Date: Jan 03, 2013 02:05 am Title: Chapter 40
Haha, you had me for a second!
Lol, phew, bet Kay was relieved to hear it wasn't what she was thinking.
Update when you can.
I love this story :)
Author's Response:
I know I know...It means I did my suspens well lol.
Oh yeah she felt really relieved.
I will soon and thank you for liking my story :)
[Report This]Date: Jan 02, 2013 09:26 pm Title: Chapter 40
Ohh gosh! When Quincy said that he knew about her secret my jaw dropped! I was seriously freaking out! But then when he continued and specified that it was the secret about being a model I was able to wipe the sweat from my brow there, lmao!
Yay! I'm happy Quincy approves! But something tells me he won't be so approving when he learns about the real secret that Kayliah is hiding from him...
Happy New Year to you as well! :D
Author's Response:
I know all my readers felt this lol...They nearly all had a heart attack whe Quincy began to speak lol....One secret at once lol.
He's approving for her to have a real model's career but I think that your intuition for the real secret can be true...We'll see this in a few chapters.
Thank you sweety!! :D
[Report This]Date: Jan 02, 2013 10:49 am Title: Chapter 40
Girl...! I was like: NO, Quincy knows Quincy knows!
But then I was like: Thank God he doesn't know!!!
I'm happy for Kay that she can become a model. And Quincy took the news well, so...
Anyway, please continue, I totally love the story! <3
Author's Response:
Yeah it was my little suspens for this chapter...Like Kay, you freaked out about Quincy knowing the truth or not lol.
He will know soon that's all I can say.
I'll continue, don't worry. And thank you for loving my story :)
[Report This]Date: Dec 22, 2012 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 39
Yay! They don't have to hide in front of Mike's family anymore! :D
When Katherine started yelling at first I was really worried, but by the end all of the worry was gone! XD
Lol Randy... :P
Author's Response:
Yeah, now there is really one person they still need to hide their love to...Quincy...
She started yelling cause she was shocked and worried. Her first reaction was a big surprise, but then she understood that whatever she'll say, Michael loved Kayliah too much.
Yeah poor Randy lol
Date: Dec 22, 2012 08:24 am Title: Chapter 39
I was about to be really mad at Katherine for a sec there. I'm like damn Kay isn't 10 years old! She's 18 and fully capable of makin her own decisions. Geez. One thing I so agree with though is respecting her. Michael needs to respect her and always do right by her. That shit with Ola is gonna blow up in his face because be kept it from her. I'm glad Katherine accepts them though and is happy for them however. Now they don't have to hide anything while they're with his family.
Author's Response:
Yeah everybody seems to really take her as a baby but now she's 18 as Michael said and she grew in a beautiful woman.
The thing he did with Ola won't be a real problem for now but will bring and explain another thing later in the story...That's why Ola got a role in this story...
[Report This]Date: Dec 22, 2012 07:47 am Title: Chapter 39
sorry for not reviewing but believe me when i say, i have not missed a chapter. i love this story, and i will do my best to prove it. just added it to my favorites. please update soon hun.
Author's Response:
Thank you for loving my story and adding it to your favorites. I'll be happy to read more from you on the next chapters.
[Report This]Date: Dec 22, 2012 02:44 am Title: Chapter 39
Wowie...! Mrs. Jackson took it hard! If Katherine already responds like this, I can't even imagine what Quincy will do...! O.o
Please uodate soon, I totally love this story! <3
Author's Response:
Oh yeah that's true...Knowing Katherine's reaction, we just can be afraid of Quincy's one...
I try to update my stories once a week but I have hard time at work at the moment, and I come back pretty tired of my days...But I hope I won't take too long before to update.
Thank you for loving my stories and you know that I love "Sensitive secrets" sooo much!!