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Reviewer: Earthchild06 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 14, 2023 12:09 pm Title: A Mistake

Tell me you did not just end the story there...??’?????Please ,we needddd a sequel????

Reviewer: NatashaRosee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 01, 2013 08:00 pm Title: A Mistake

Yay, they're back together.

I remember reading the story last year, but I only got up to the part where Michael was at the awards with Lisa and Ivy was trying to steal it.. I think. (forget which chapter)

Anyway, I love this story :)



Author's Response:

Haha! Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :P I loved writing this story so much I remember, but I also remember I was starting to lose it at the end :/ It's too bad, but it happens.

Anyway, thanks for the review! I appreicate hearing that from you!

Reviewer: bubbles777 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Jul 29, 2012 10:48 pm Title: A Mistake

what happened to lisa then if they are getting back together? :) <3 also awesome story, love. i loved it.



Author's Response:

:) I decided to leave that out so that you culd be left with some questions to keep you wondering

And thank you! :) I would have continued it some more but I just wasn't getting any other ideas coming to me and I noticed that my writing for this story was getting kind of poor :( That was my fault. I didn't want to keep writing poor chapters, so I decided to end it. But I'm so glad you loved it! :D Thanks for reading!  

Reviewer: MJJLUVU Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jul 03, 2012 05:39 am Title: Tags

So far the only person i feel sorry for is Jacob. I hope Ivy and Michael both get some sense slapped into them or more like punched cuz this has been going on long enough. Next part plz!

Reviewer: armcjackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2012 10:22 pm Title: Dead and Down

I just discovered this story today. It's really good!

Reviewer: MJJLUVU Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Jun 30, 2012 05:45 pm Title: Dead and Down

Oh Mike u think got an ass whooping before now u've just got on her bad side. Next part asap!

Reviewer: AlexisJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 15, 2012 06:51 am Title: Not Meant To Be

Awe poor Ivy. Maybe she can try and be a better person and make Michael see that, then maybe he will take her back. Great chapter. Lots of love.

Author's Response:

:) Thank you for the review! I'm glad your enjoying it!

Reviewer: AlexisJ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2012 04:09 pm Title: Waste of Time

Wow. I just....Wow. What the hell has gotten into them? Great chapter. Lots of love.

Reviewer: MJJsPyt Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 07, 2012 01:56 pm Title: Toro, toro!

Awwww Michael d84;d84;d84;d84;d84;d84;

Reviewer: Xaviersdaman Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Mar 06, 2012 09:04 pm Title: Toro, toro!

lol at "You know, I never thought my worst enemy would be lemon juice." That actually made me laugh. But then again, a lot of parts in this story made me laugh! lol!

I liked how this story played out. It was a good idea in my opinion. I haven't seen another story like it on here where the girl was trying to kill Michael! But then again... I'm pretty new to this site. lol whatever, I still like the story.

Okay, the part when the guy in the school was just like "She tried to kill you 3 times!" and she's all like "Twice! I tried to kill him twice!" lol! That made me laugh too. It's like yeah, like it really makes a difference!

You've got some mad writting skills girl! I love your stories! BTW what does YANAgirl07 stand for? Is it just a name you made up? Does YANA stand for something I should be aware of. I was wondering if it was a nickname of yours, but it doesn't say that in ur bio.



Author's Response:

Haha thank you so much! I'm so glad you like it! lol I'm glad it made you laugh because I do try to add a bit of humour in almost all of my stories.

Haha, yeah, YANA does stand for something. It stand for You Are Not Alone girl. During the HIStory tour MJ would pick a girl from the audience and sing You Are Not Alone to her, therefor, the girl would called the YANA Girl! :) That's why I called myself that.

I don't think I need to ask why your penname is 'Xaviers da man' ;)

Reviewer: MJJsPyt Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2012 02:54 pm Title: Starting Our Vancouver Life

That was good :)



Author's Response:

:) Thank you! Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: MJJsPyt Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Feb 18, 2012 05:45 am Title: Rookie Attack

It was awesome

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Date: Feb 16, 2012 03:12 am Title: You and I

Omg !!!!!! Michael is going be a smooth criminal 

Reviewer: omgitzjamies Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 10, 2012 04:34 pm Title: Mrs Ivy Jackson

daaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwww :3

Reviewer: MJJsPyt Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Feb 04, 2012 09:30 am Title: Death will have to wait

awww thats not nice. but it was good

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