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Reviewer: Gottobethere Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 19, 2012 03:14 am Title: Chapter 31

Oh no!!! Alex is leaving??

She can't leave! NO! They cannot do this to her! ;(
Poor Michael, too. He's gonna miss her so much..
Hey, wait a minute though...Maybe she can move in with Mrs. Kate for a while?
Oh yeah! That would be so cool!
She could sleep in Janet's room and they could become friends and Janet could tell her all sorts of embarrassing things about Michael,
and Alex could in turn tell Janet embarrassing things about Ross, bahahah XD
Then maybe, in the far future, she could start sneaking into Michael's room late at night when Janet's out, snoring like a bull, LOL. And maybe they could, y’know… ;D
Awww, look how much fun that would be!

I rlly feel for her aunt though...Can't believe she's that sick! :(
Do Kirk, Ross and Alex even know about her condition?

Damn you Uncle Joe for being so rude to Mrs Rose Fine!!
That woman was like an angel! Did you know she called Michael her son and Michael considered her somewhat of a mother when she toured around with him and his brothers in the J5 days? God rest her soul!

That was real sweet of Michael to teach Alex to stand up for herself against her uncle!
She sure had him with that one, didn’t she? I could totally picture him all speechless and shocked, caught off guard by his own  16 year-old niece, lol.

That was just what she needed! And he needed it too to be brought down a peg or 2..

Gosh, I just hope everything’s gonna turn out fine!

Thank you so so much!! I’ll be waiting (impatiently xD) for the next update, girl! xxx

 



Author's Response: You know, I have actually been thinking about Alex staying in the Jackson household but I wasn't quite sure how that would work out but now, I'm actually considering doing that. Thanks for the ideas! I especially like Janet telling Alex secrets about Michael and Alex doing the same for Ross

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2012 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 31

 

Just caught up on the last 2 chapters.

OMG chapter 30; Mike was SO SHWEEEEET :3 And Alex is just to cutest ahahh, i had no idea Michael got a job at a childrens daycare!! This chapter was just.... BEAUTIFUL. You're just the most amazing author, seriouslllyyyy xD

I wonder if Alex will forgive him... Hmmmm what he put her through is harsh, but he is tryna change, right?

 

And ahh chapter 31- Im glad Michael gave her the push to stand up to her uncle. He was so supportive and knew her problems almost instantly which means he has been paying real close attention to her and cares... True love:')

Awh its so sweet how you put someone dear to you in the story, Linda sounds so lovely and very important to you!:))

 

And haha i love how you use actual people from Michaels life and adapt them...

For example; I noticed Rose Fine was the principal and in actual real life she taught MJ at a young age all the way through to the mid/late 70s... Michael still kept in contact with her and paid for her medical bills if i remember correctly? :/

ANYWAYS I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story, keep it coming girl! You're the best.

Much love, <3

 

 



Author's Response: I'm surprised that someone actually noticed Rose Fine. I just wanted Michael to have a nice principal because usually, I would choose a really mean one. I'm glad that you noticed. You truly are an Mj fan! :)

Reviewer: teo4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 14, 2012 05:37 pm Title: Chapter 31

I am so speechless....You are always so amazing that I have no words. This chapter made me cry, especially the ending. It's so full of emotion, I adore this story. To say that you did a great job it's not enough. You are simply amazing, can't wait to read more, and more. I love it. Please update soon. All the L.O.VE in the world to you <3<3<3

Reviewer: 2human4nature Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 13, 2012 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 31

Now that she's moving, Michael is going to her how he really feels. I also feel like Alex will realize that she does indeed have feelings for Michael.

Reviewer: Jrmspfingston Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 13, 2012 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 31

Oh poor Alex and Michal but it is good that she stood up to her uncle. Hope you update soon.

Reviewer: AtMJsHouse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 13, 2012 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 31

Is she really moving?



Author's Response: I don't want to have to spoil it for you :)

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