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Reviewer: saysaysay Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 11, 2012 06:32 am Title: Chapter 29

I LOVE this story, my favourite on this site actually. Michael's character is so realistic because he has problems and isn't the 'perfect' guy and I love all the OC characters you created and i LOVELOVELOVE Alex shes such a sweetheart :) The pace this story is going at is great, usually Michael and the main girl end up sleeping together by the 3rd chapters on most of the stories on this site XD But I love how the pace is slower, makes it so much better and builds up that fustration :P Can't wait for you to update, please do, Im serious this story deserves to be in top ten for everything !! (I finally made an account to tell you this lol)



Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that you appreciate the pace that I'm going because most people ask me to put them in bed! I don't believe in fast relationships so it shows through my writing. I hope you continue to enjoy it!

Reviewer: Gottobethere Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 10, 2012 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 29

Darn Alex! Slow-minded much? How could she possibly not get it this time?
I swear to God his feelings are all up in her face and still she misses it like a blind fool...smh.

Lol. She really should ask Janet, the little genius, for more insight. I bet she'll get an earful outta her ;D

And about Michael's little stunt with Lisa...Wow! I can't believe all along I didn't even notice what his true intentions were until he dumped her in front of Alex and stood up for her like that...

Again Alex, could the guy possibly BE anymore obvious?

Oh yes. Soon it'll be Michael and Alex, sitting in a tree...K.I.S.S.I.N.G! XD

At least I'm hoping so...if Leonce doesn't come standing in the way of them.

He should save his flowers and icky chocolate for someone else cuz this girl's taken, people! Hahah!
It is gettin about time, 30 chapters into the story...

 

Great update giirl!! I'm so glad Michael's getting over his own sexy, chicken behind slowly but certainly! I really wished he'd just tell her tho...or take her in his arms and kiss her with all the passion he's been keeping bottled up for her for too long!

That would be mighty epic! Just sayin...

Take care!  I REALLY Cannot wait for the next one!!!!

Seriously... Xxx

Reviewer: Sabrinamjjlove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 10, 2012 03:11 am Title: Chapter 29

Lol! Alex, its youuu! Tho Michael was tryna prove something to Alex... I think all she learnt was that Michael jumps from girl to girl because he is not interested for long, i wish Michael would just open up but thatd be out of his 'tough' character... She should totally ask Janet lol but idk what to suggest. Whatever u come up with is gold. Cant wait for the next chapter!! XD
Alex and Michael are the best characters ever, omg.

Reviewer: 2human4nature Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2012 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 29

Michael's being nice!! Im liking this!! Uhh for an idea maybe you should have Alex and Michael hanging out more and Leonce gets jealous. I believe that doesn't count as them getting together.

Reviewer: Juniorlady Signed [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2012 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 29

Come on, Alex, the answer is obvious lol.


Reviewer: AtMJsHouse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: Apr 09, 2012 06:50 pm Title: Chapter 29

Really? How could she not know! lol

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