Date: Jan 22, 2012 01:45 pm Title: Chapter 16
loved it! i really cant wait for the next episode!! :D
[Report This]Date: Jan 22, 2012 09:04 am Title: Chapter 16
I love this story ur an amazing writer great work please update soooon
Date: Jan 22, 2012 12:52 am Title: Chapter 16
brrrr, thanks for the new chapter... :) I think he is seriously ill in his head, he needs a shrink for at least one year to help him find himself deep down under all that violence. The bad thing is that now Alex would need a shrink too to help her think stright, that no person, no woman, no man, no boy or girl can do that to another person just because he does not understand what respect is. Poor teenagers, poor people, I don't know how we survive anymore with this violence around us anymore. And there is lOVE beneath that all. I can't belive it. Hmmm you know something about psychology... :) after all.
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2012 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 16
And that's what you get you, mean, stupid bully! NO LOVE!!
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2012 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 16
Oh God this chapter was INTENSE! Damn, this is why you shouldnt drink lol.. Its against my religion so i cant really relate to how it feels or why you would wanna drink but damn, Michael needs to sort his problems out head on!
Im so glad Joe came to the rescue, even though that was the person she least expected to see lol
Ahh they clearly feel for each other, but Michael needs to learn how to express himself and not be afraid of asking her... And also control his rage. lol
Please update soon, you know i am lovin' this. :]
<3
Date: Jan 21, 2012 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 16
Michael needs to stay away from alcohol. I wish he would just love Alex instead of questioning his feelings for her.
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2012 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 16
Michael loves Alex.
Alex is falling for him too.
BUT they cant accept the truth. They cant stand the idea of being despised because it is exactly what they are thinking : "She/He doesnt love me!"
Michael and Alex are spending their time hurting themselves for being in denial.
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2012 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 16
damn! he almost raped her i mean what if he actually attemps that again and actually gets her preggo?? omg that would be some serious sh**t right there. i most defintly see him being her first which i hope her first time with him don't become bad since he likes to hit her so much he should make love to her not try to rape her as a drunk. but with him anything crazy is possible Alex just gets way to many surprises from him good and bad. im lovin this keep this up one of the greatest stories on here as of now or in my book. hope you write more when you get a chance. <3
[Report This]Date: Jan 21, 2012 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 16
wow michael needs to control hiself he needs to give alex a chance to recive love to him..he gotta give her time and he has to earn her love after all those brutal beatings he gave her.
Date: Jan 21, 2012 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 16
Oh my God, I can't believe that he almost did that! Thank God Alex's uncle came in rescue; I'm so impatient for the next chapter, can't wait for it!