[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2011 07:08 pm Title: Chapter 19
LMAO! mama caught Michael eavesdropping
Date: Oct 21, 2011 06:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ok, is Gottobethere writing her own story in the comment section.LOL
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2011 06:39 pm Title: Chapter 19
My cousin experienced the same thing when she brought home her boyfriend and well this is an amazing story.
Date: Oct 21, 2011 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 19
Lmao mama emma is too much
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2011 04:29 pm Title: Chapter 18
Wow! Damn...I knew it! I knew Joseph would hurt him!
God I rlly hate that man sometimes! I wonder how he could even bring himself to do such a cruel thing to someone as sweet and beautiful and innocent as Michael.
I mean here they are, another step closer to making love - not sex! Which in my opinion is a good thing as long as they're protected right xD - yet still he beats Mike up for it?
And tries standing in the way of them. Smh. I wonder where that man's heart is located sometimes.
Luckily they were able to talk about things before Keisha got all scared and ran away again. She don't need to be listening to Roxy too often, imo... x'D
They really don't need that right now. They need to stick together, even if it is in secret, and be there for each other now that they need one another so badly.
Their relationship sure hasn't been easy but hopefully they'll only grow closer together.
They deserve that.
Too bad Michael is so scarred , both mentally and physically bcuz of his own father.
I could rlly imagine things bein just the same in real life.
Hell this story could've perfectly well come from his actual life-story!
It's very beautiful and believable, y'know?! Great job girl, really!
You're a fantastic writer.
And I must admit that I can barely wait for an 'adult-rated' scene in this story of yours.
Lol. The chemistry's just rly right there, y'know? Always gets me hot n bothered.
Only for something to come between them again...Ugh! the anticipation is killing me! xD
Take care girl. Hope you'll update soon! x
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2011 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 17
Uh-oh.. A little talk huh?... I sure hope that's gonna end up without anyone getting ehm... 'hurt'.
Damn you Joseph! Always coming in between a perfectly fine, exciting and steamy moment, lol.
They're 16! Of course they're gonna get curious with their hormones going crazy and stuff ;D
It's a perfectly natural part of life.
Gah I HATE how he always seemed to see Michael as a performing robot machine or something more than a human being.
Who knows tho, maybe this chat might be a great father and son moment....I sure hope so!
I hope he's not gonna like forbid them to see each other now that things are finally starting to go well.
Even though I'm pretty sure they'd still sneak out or find a way to hang out xD
After all they live only next door.. ^_^
I love this girl! Keep it coming. Can't believe I almost finished all 13 chapters in like 3 days.. x
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2011 06:55 am Title: Chapter 16
Well... that... that was...
Damn girl I think I'll just start crying tears of joy right now! x'D
That was beautiful! I love how her mother helped her realize and understand her feelings for Mike weren't anything to run away from.
On the contrary! Damn. It sure was great to read that she came back to him!
I am so happy right now!!! Yay! Go Michael and Keisha!! Time to get it on x'D
Thank you so much girl!
Twas about time these 2 got over their fears and took that 'leap' together!
Now let's hope things may stay this way....I rly believe this is true love! x
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2011 06:30 am Title: Chapter 15
Damn Keisha.. What's her problem now? I swear she's so confusing sometimes.
I rly don't get why she keeps running from Michael...I just don't get it!
Here he is, finally telling her that he loves her in the most convincing way possible and she still don't get it?
Okay if the girl can't take a hint but if she can't take that...I'm starting to really worry about this girl x'D
Anyway, I really like her friends and her brother. I just love their silent conversations!
I don't have any twin brothers or sisters of my own but find it really interesting between them.
And the way Kenny stood up for Mike in the end was epic! Cn't believe Keisha still insists on leaving!
Really I do not get this girl! As for Marlon; filthy mitts OFF man! She's your little brother's girl!!
Even tho she's the only one who doesn't yet wanna see it. I hope Mike's gonna go after her or something.
Dang! If only Theresa and Marlon stay outta the way for once and all and Keisha listens to him....
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2011 05:49 am Title: Chapter 14
Hmmm, for some I'm not too sure about this Roxanna chick.. Is she on to something?
I hope not. The last thing Ki and Mike need right now is another person coming between them, obviously..
And then BAM! There comes Theresa popping up outta nowhere.. Perfect timing girl...*coughs* NOT! x'D
Sh*t! I hope Keisha's not gonna think she's the other girl in Mike's life.. since he didn't have the nerve to tell her before that it was Keisha herself.
But they kissed again, hah? And she couldn't bring herself to kiss Levi.. Interesting!
Hopefully she's finally gonna realize that she and Michael belong together!
It's getting about time..But I get a feeling that Theresa just might stand in the way of things.. once again.
Great update! As usual. ;D
[Report This]Date: Oct 21, 2011 05:43 am Title: Chapter 13
I'm baaaack! lol
So Blythe had a baby, hah? and still she's coming on to Michael..
Some people never learn x'D How old is she btw? Is she like a teenage mom?
Anyway, I don't get Keisha sometimes.. How could she keep denying that she likes/loves Michael like that?
I rly don't understand what she's running away from.
They obviously love each other and for her not to know that she's the 'someone else' sounds kinda strange to me.
How come everybody sees that Michael is in love with her Bùt her?
Smh. I hope things'll fall into place eventually. Now that Mike's leaving soon..
But he should've opened his mouth and told her now that he got the chance that he loves her.
I hope they'll get over their shy ways bfore things really fall apart. x
Date: Oct 20, 2011 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really love this story!
Author's Response:
Thank u luv muffin! :-)
[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2011 04:14 am Title: Chapter 18
Please update asap!!!!!
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2011 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 12
Good LORD! What was all that about?!
Geez Keisha, she really is playing with fire! This can only turn into major disaster in the end....God I hope not tho!
But the ending girl? Don't get me started! Cause I wouldn't even know where to xD
I laughed so hard at Michael's remark. God bless that pillow! He's been needing a lot of it lately.. and I can imagine him latching on to it more and more in the nearby future xD
Sweet Jesus girl, I swearyou officially killed me now!!.Lol xx
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2011 01:29 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oh my God! So they're 16 now.. Wow!
I was shocked to read that they hadn't seen each other in so long.
Good thing they didn't fall out too much tho with the letters.. and now Michael being back!
Oh yay! I'm so happy right now! Lol
Certainly 'stuff' going on between them now.. even worse than before.
I'm assuming (and hoping, lol) that this all is gonna lead somewhere... fun! x'D if ya know what I mean..
Lol. Too bad he couldn't give her that other gift! Sounds beautiful!! But a kitty... aww, that a great gift too!
I'm so excited to read more of this girl, I can't seem to stop x'D
[Report This]Date: Oct 19, 2011 12:46 pm Title: Chapter 9
Wow! This chapter girl... I can't even... I can't...where do I... Damn, there are no words!!
Lmao.Seriously, I got butterflies reading this!! ;p
Too bad Keisha chickened out so quickly after Marlon kinda....killed it x'D
It was awfully cute n sweet though! How nice of Michael to do that for her indeed.
They might've not went to the dance together but perhaps this way was even better!!
Aww, hopefully things won't get awkward from here.. I don't think so tho, but I certainly hope not.
I'll just leave it up to you.. Loving this story, but then again y'already know that x'D
Beautiful writing!