[Report This]Date: Oct 20, 2012 06:48 pm Title: Prolouge
Wooww this is good I will continue to read more of this.
[Report This]Date: Aug 17, 2012 09:16 am Title: Chapter 5
I agree, you are a very talented writer. Your descriptions are amazing and from reading I feel like Im in the story (although I live in Bklyn)
I hope you continue this, it has great potential :)
Date: Dec 01, 2011 02:01 pm Title: Chapter 5
You have so much literary talent but it is hard to read when things aren't spaced apart adequately. I like the idea of this story, which is why I began to read it anyway, so please continue.
Author's Response:
Aw, srry, its difficult for you to read. I usually just post straght from microsoft word. sort of messes up the fromat a bit. My grammar sucks too. lol. i need to stop being lazy and fix it...thanks for commenting. i will be contnue. I like this one and have a definite idea where i want to take it. Though i know it seems i abandom all my stories after a while,lol