Date: Nov 20, 2010 05:44 am Title: Chapter 10
LOL Chelsea aint no good!! I knew it!!
Date: Nov 20, 2010 05:41 am Title: Chapter 9
LOL wasn't expecting that either. It all came from guilt!
Date: Nov 02, 2010 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 8
I Agree with Jazz..I mean its not fair..I didnt like how they had sex at all.
It was all good until she asked to go to the room..I thougt she was different.. =/
Date: Nov 02, 2010 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 9
oh wow not what i thought would happen humm =/
Date: Oct 26, 2010 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 8
I don't understand...if it was Jamie, he would have got up and left. That was his girl right?, so why did he give into Chelsea? I actually feel sorry for Jamie here....She worked too hard for no reason. Chelsea's no better.
Date: Oct 16, 2010 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 7
Michael is going to end up cheating on Jamie with Chelsea, I just know it (:
Date: Sep 24, 2010 01:38 pm Title: Chapter 6
Jamie and Mike need to break up. She needs a man who will screw her and Mike needs a good girl like Chelsea who's respectful and willing to wait.
Date: Sep 14, 2010 09:27 pm Title: Chapter 6
Wow, Jamie is a bitch.
Michael needs to just call Chelsea!
[Report This]Date: Sep 06, 2010 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 5
Wow, this is amazing writing =D
[Report This]Date: Sep 04, 2010 04:06 pm Title: Chapter 5
It seems like Jamie has very nice friends! Maybe she'll do some thinking next time before coming all over MJ if she wants to keep him. I mean there's nothing wrong with it, but hey this is MJ, a very special kind of guy (the best!) you have to take it slow lol. And poor Chelsea, Mike would be perfect for her, they have the same way of seeing things. I liked both of her poems (yours!), they're very beautiful. Update soon ;)
Date: Sep 03, 2010 10:33 am Title: Chapter 1
Steve is an ass hole. haha.
Loved the update.
[Report This]Date: Sep 01, 2010 07:24 pm Title: Chapter 4
Very nice I like it.. pliz update
Date: Aug 30, 2010 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
That poem was sweet (:
Update soon!
[Report This]Date: Aug 28, 2010 02:58 am Title: Chapter 4
I don't think he should mess around with Jamie...if he's not ready for all of that.. lol..I think I can already see what's going to happen..he's going to end up liking Chelsea..and forget all about Jamie? I hope my idea is wrong lol.
[Report This]Date: Aug 27, 2010 08:07 pm Title: Chapter 3
I liked it so far!! I feel sorry for Chelsea though... Imean she seems to be pretty nice kind of girl, not too forward,and with insecurities... the opposite of Jamie. She thinks she's not talented and beautiful enough for Mike and damn everyone can relate to that! Hope he'll see through her... Keep it up!!