[Report This]Date: Apr 30, 2012 10:52 am Title: Chapter 56
ugh! Michael is taking this too far now. He could have at least text'd her back to let her know what's up. I would be pissed if I were Sam too, especially since he called Alex but didn't take the time to call Sam. smh...can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
Hahaha, I got pissed off at Michael while I was writing. Smh... I take this fanfic way too seriously.
Date: Apr 26, 2012 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 55
I wonder if Jared is behind all of this.
[Report This]Date: Apr 26, 2012 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 55
Poor Sam :(
Michael is being such an ass. He better be fixing this mess while he's gone missing.
I hope everything gets better soon. He's really hurting their relationship by just leaving her there.
And Robert is being so sweet. Being nice to her and taking care of her. I want to be Roberts girlfriend. Work that in will ya?
Anyway.. I can't believe that Michael is just gone. Like. As if he's disappeared. He's for sure crazy busy.
What about an mj pov. I'm worried. I want to know what's up. Except you have the other chapter written.
Oh boy. I can't even imagine what Michael is going through. Him beig such a shy person.. And a very personal moment between him and Sam being blasted for the world to see. That's just so sad.
I hope this can be erased. Deleted from the world.
I hope Sam will be okay. I really do hope so.
Sigh... I hope things get better.
[Report This]Date: Apr 26, 2012 02:01 pm Title: Chapter 55
I know Michael better come back soon. How is he just going to leave her like that? He was wrong. Like I said before, it wasn't her fault so he can't make her suffer from something that she didn't do just because he thinks its best. Ugh!
[Report This]Date: Apr 23, 2012 07:32 pm Title: Chapter 54
Media will do anything for a fucking story. They could care less about the person they are screwing over. The relationships they are ruining or making harder to deal with. Anyway, great chapter. Lots of love.
[Report This]Date: Apr 22, 2012 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 54
How did. What. Why. What the. Wait. What?!
TESSSSSSS
WHAT THE FUCK WOMAN!!!!!
You should have told me not to read this in the car.
I'm about to cry!
Did Michael just..
Tess :(
Im actually going to cry.
This is too sad for me. Like. Bahhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!
He can't do that. He can't do that to her. That's just not fair! Or nice! Right now her naked ass and her breast is exposed to the public. And instead of being there. He's bouncing? Saying that it's better that they're not together so that this kind of thing doesn't happen again? Yeah. Like that makes things better. You're leaving her ALONE. A-FUCKING-LONE! Alone! She's fucking alone when he's going through something very traumatic. Like what the fuck you retarded prick. I know you mean well. But what the fuck. You're only making things worse. Instead of doing what you think is best. Why not ask her what she needs right now? Don't make decisions for her. That's not your job. Your job is to be there for her.
And I wonder when all the swarms of questions and discussions and analysts are going to come in. Oh. I forgot the "experts".
Will Sam and Michael really split up for a bit because of this? And her having to get her own room and put herself through torture watching all the media crap? Trying to understand how to cope with this? Or will he come back. Surprisingly calmed down and apologize for the way he reacted. I mean. Even if they do split up Robert will be hovering over her and everything. But still. Like.
Gah!
Im sure she's going to call Jess and tell her every detail. She needs someone to talk to. And just. Oh my. Poor girl. What did I do.
I wonder when the "new images" will surface. And Michael being called a sex G-d will come in. Cause fuck. He's a sex G-d.
I hope it'll work out.
[Report This]Date: Apr 22, 2012 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 54
oh my gosh! i hope he's not leaving her over something like that. i mean it wasn't her fault so he can't just take it out on her by leaving her. aldfhlghrofvghfi i can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: Apr 15, 2012 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 53
no! how are you just gonna leave me on a cliff hanger like that?! lol jk great chapter sis! I knew that Katherine would be happy for them.
[Report This]Date: Apr 15, 2012 12:37 pm Title: Chapter 53
Gah!!!!! What did I do to these two.
But besides all that.
I LOVED the whole Janet part. :) my lesbian partner. Bahahaha *awkward for others who read my reviews*
Her teasing Michael about him being overrated made me die. Hahahahahahaha
And Katherine is so cute!
*let me play dumb for a moment*
Is Michael really cheating on her? What did the tabloids make up this time??????
haha
And him grabbing the blanket was adorable.
And now we know their *picking up clothes* routine. Hahaha
Gah! I'm in love with these two! I hope they can handle any craziness coming their way!
And it's so sad that the only person she has in her life is Michael. She has to branch out and make new friends. Maybe Alex! She's definitely a new understudy. What about the other dancers? This girl needs friends!
Except now it might be a little awkward.
Anyway!
Loved it!
[Report This]Date: Apr 09, 2012 11:48 am Title: Chapter 52
*slap* *slap* *slap* *slap*
Explanations on next chapter please! About michaels ring of course.
I thought you were going to go for a fake string looking thing on both of their middle fingers to have that special bond. So that no one in the public can catch on. But that it still meant what it meant.
Either way. I loved the routine! :)
And I like alex. :) very professional girl and easy going. Glad she was so agreeable. :)
Too bad we'll never see her again.
But yeah. Please explain in the next chapter. I'm beyond confused.
And also! Isn't she sore? Hahaha
My G-d. What a lucky girl. :)
That last sentence was perfect. :)
[Report This]Date: Apr 09, 2012 11:19 am Title: Chapter 51
Holy fuck.
I can't do my usual comments cause I've known this chapter by heart for weeks.
But holy fuck. The changes you made! They are not normal. Just.
What the fuck woman!
*breathes*
*is not capable to breathe*
*realizes Tess is insane*
*starts laughing*
*smiles*
*realizes again how insane this chapter is*
Just. Okay. I know I helped you tremendously. But only YOU are capable of writing such gold! No. Platinum! Is there anything better than platinum?
I still haven't regained my composure of that craziness.
That whole chapter was just too perfect.
I'm going to go die for a while.
Text me to help me regain consciousness.
Bye you crazy lady.
[Report This]Date: Apr 05, 2012 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 52
they're so cute together :-)
[Report This]Date: Apr 04, 2012 06:58 pm Title: Chapter 52
Awww, they're sooo cute. So jealous haha! Great update! :')
[Report This]Date: Apr 04, 2012 04:22 pm Title: Chapter 52
This is cute.
Date: Apr 01, 2012 06:30 am Title: Chapter 51
My God! This was probably the most romantic and beautiful part! I love your story so much I can't wait for the next part already!
Author's Response:
Awe, thanks! I'm writing right now so you can expect the next chapter to be up soon! <3