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Reviewer: chelley Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2014 04:17 am Title: Chapter 7

uooo シ

Reviewer: chelley Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2014 04:14 am Title: Chapter 6

Lol its funny Michael lives there

Reviewer: chelley Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 29, 2014 04:05 am Title: Chapter 1

I bet its Michael シ

Reviewer: sheba93 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: Nov 15, 2011 05:11 am Title: Chapter 9

Do your thing girl cuz i'm ready for some more!

Reviewer: mrsmjjbarbie Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: Sep 11, 2011 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 3

You're chapters are too short. Try using quotation marks when someone speaks because your format is more like a play. I like your idea though.



Author's Response:

thank you for the review... i had wrote this last year so im writing it as i saw it the first chapters were short because of how  i wrote it. The future chapters will be longer. Thank you for your advice

Reviewer: jsmoove87 Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: Sep 10, 2011 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 1

ahh shit!! aaliyah! go 'head girl :)

Author's Response:

Thank u for reviewin.!!

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