


Date: May 29, 2014 04:14 am Title: Chapter 6
Lol its funny Michael lives there



Date: May 29, 2014 04:05 am Title: Chapter 1
I bet its Michael シ
Date: Nov 15, 2011 05:11 am Title: Chapter 9
Do your thing girl cuz i'm ready for some more!



Date: Sep 11, 2011 01:55 pm Title: Chapter 3
You're chapters are too short. Try using quotation marks when someone speaks because your format is more like a play. I like your idea though.
Author's Response:
thank you for the review... i had wrote this last year so im writing it as i saw it the first chapters were short because of how i wrote it. The future chapters will be longer. Thank you for your advice


Date: Sep 10, 2011 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
ahh shit!! aaliyah! go 'head girl :)
Author's Response:
Thank u for reviewin.!!